The Beginning of Covering the Sky

Is Ye Fan the protagonist's father? In the book you wrote, did you slightly participate in the story of Zhetian from another person's perspective? ? ? They wrote "Zhetian", but you wrote a condensed version of "Zhetian" that is similar to others. I think you might as well read the original work. There are still a lot of people in the comment area saying that this book is good? ? ? ? If it is based on the level a few years ago, then it is indeed okay, but everyone has read so many fan fictions. A common problem in the past is that fan fiction completely follows the plot and gets tired of reading it. He is still like this now, and a lot of people praise him? ? ? ? ? ? ? Don't you feel bored? Of course the above problem is not big↑, after all, if it is well written, nothing will matter, but↓ The protagonist's care for Ye Fan can also be said to be at the level of a father, or the protagonist should have his last name You don't grab opportunities when you have them, but don't say that those opportunities are destined. If you are destined, you will lean on him and take another path. Don't read the original work to see what you're talking about? And according to Zhetian's world view, there is only one person who can become emperor. If you don't want to fight for it, why don't you fight for it? Don't even say that the protagonist can travel through thousands of worlds. If you don't even fight for this kind of thing, then you don't have to leave the immortal world. Just go to a secret place and if there is a question of asking questions, just let it go. You are not here for leisure, are you here for tourism? Mainly speaking, the protagonist's ideological awareness is not enough. The achievements in cultivating immortals are all achieved through struggle. And in which world is it not a struggle? If I write an urban cool article, I won't be like this. All in all, the popularity of this book was licked by the protagonist Li Zhe Tian. For someone like me, who has been reading fan fiction for several years, it would be better to read the original work again if I go the same way. Of course, it is difficult to agree with everyone, but I still feel that this book is not very well written. After all, everyone else is trying to become an emperor, and you are the son of the protagonist.,,

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What he is wearing can actually practice the method of covering the sky? ! Didn't the author read the original work? People in Zhetianli can cultivate the five secret realms because Shi Hao changed the operation of the avenue and planted the seeds of the secret realm in the creatures of the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths. They only need to open it. The protagonist is an outsider and is still wearing a suit. Where can the seeds of the secret realm be opened for you?

There is obviously a time-traveling artifact, but the result is that it is stuck in the dangerous world of Zhetian. Are you talking about astronomy or fanfiction? Also, the protagonist is taking the path of a true dragon body. Why don't you find a few dragons in other worlds and use the sky-swallowing magic power to absorb the essence? I feel that the plug-in you arranged is of no use at all and is directly suppressing the protagonist.

Relying on the demon god flower to catalyze the dragon egg, and using the demon-devouring power to steal the physique, is it actually a top-notch physique? What a child's play, and there are all kinds of scriptures that are dismissive! Passing by Zishan, I didn't even learn the Heavenly Book of Origin. The Secret Code and the Heavenly Book of Origin can be combined to set up a great formation of heaven and earth. In the holy city, I have to pretend to be a prophet!

The writing is okay, and I can be considered a relatively intelligent fellow Zhe Tian. . .

Write more characters about the earth, such as those quasi-emperors and various schools of thought

Seize Ye Fan's opportunity, some book friends find it boring! Not to take away Ye Fan's opportunity, some book friends said it was the Holy Mother! . Pretending to be a slap in the face, but also saying that you are brainless! Step by step, careful planning, but it's too plain! It's really difficult for newcomers!

Thank you for taking me to experience a classic again, but the main character is a bit annoying

The protagonist always hunts for treasure like a prophet, which is a bit annoying... Especially when he takes people there and then gives excuses that are full of loopholes.

Spoilers. The male protagonist, the Holy Mother, licks the dog. Ye Fan is his father

I'm really speechless, the main character Huang Huan is so outrageous! Ji Shen Cai Dao Palace is always showing off and spoiling everything, daring to reveal any treasures in the Holy City plot, and showing off the true dragon bloodline everywhere. You all know that the protector who swallows the blood of the Qing Emperor + the Demon God Flower + the dragon bloodline, and shakes the light of Hua Yunfei is a fool, right? Why haven't you come and dragged away the protagonist? Hurry up! I'm worried for you 😅😅😅

Through the plot, I foresaw and secretly obtained the opportunity. I would say that the protagonist is the protagonist. He knows that opportunities are touching and knows how to keep a low profile. But my strength is low, as weak as an ant, but I like to pretend to be B in front of others. In front of many people whose strength is far higher than myself, I can get opportunities with great fanfare. I can only say that I am worthy of being the protagonist. Doesn't this mean I will die? Doesn't anyone except the protagonist know how to kill people and seize treasures? The plot of Kaiyuan Shi is really bad. It's just shit. In front of hundreds of people, he prescribed a dragon-patterned black sword and the elixir of immortality. As expected of the protagonist, he never worries about high-level monks doing evil things to him. Speaking of the author, have you read the original text? Do you understand the prevalent monastic ethos? It seems like killing people and grabbing treasures is the norm, right? And the protagonist doesn't have a real backstage, right?

Why do we need four swords? I really don't understand. Can't kill an immortal with just one sword? Wouldn't it be nice to combine the profound meanings of Dao patterns and follow your own path? You also learned the four swords of Lingbao Tianzun. Will you practice another formation later? As for imitating Lingbao Tianzun in this way, I am speechless.

No one knows about the Great Saint Guard Yi of Tianxuan Shifang, and he has no deterrent effect on the Holy Lands. The crazy old man is unconscious and his whereabouts are uncertain. The Holy Lands are just afraid of him and will not kill the protagonist openly. Furthermore, as long as necessary, the Holy Lands would even dare to kill King Jiang Shen who was guarded by imperial soldiers. What's more, Zhou Feng, who has an unknown relationship with the crazy old man, has angered the Holy Land and will be killed. As for the big talk and secrets, pretending to be 13 questions? Don't pretend to be a plot? If the main character develops quietly and doesn't cause trouble, what's the point? Without the ups and downs of the plot, do you book lovers really want to read it? Of course, novice authors must have many shortcomings, please understand.

Why do so many fan authors change the settings of the original work? Write the essence of heaven and earth as spiritual energy of heaven and earth, the divine power as spiritual power, the source stone as spiritual stone, and the sea of ​​suffering as Dantian? You are writing a cultivation novel here! Can you read the original work carefully and stop making such shocking jokes?

Successfully poisoned by the resurrecting spiritual energy! Gone! It looked pretty good from the front!

As soon as I read the novel and saw the word cause and effect, I knew I didn't need to read it.

Too licking, a little bit IQ, but just a very annoying philistine mentality. The benefits he gives are inexplicable, but other than that, he is somewhat intelligent. It's a pity that it feels like a small family in a big city is annoying.

Who is Ye Fan's licking dog? Come out and feed you.

You know so many secrets that the Holy Land doesn't know, why don't they arrest you for marriage search? I'm so speechless. I just showed it off after a few pictures.