Seven Emotions and Magical Ming Dynasty

Please give me a scolding post~~~ The newbie went astray, climbed up the Liangshan Mountains and fell off the grass, and started to make a living by dancing, writing, ink, and talking about dreams. However, he was only half a foot tall, but his heart was as high as the sky. Today, I take advantage of this place where masters are hermits and crouching tigers, hidden dragons, with my new work "The Seven Emotions and Six Desires of the Magical Ming Dynasty", and open a stall to ask for criticism. I invite the literati and elegant guests and heroes and righteous people who pass by to leave their valuable opinions. I thank you. There are only two purposes for opening this post: First, I want to make progress. In the novel I wrote, I lost my objective judgment, and I am clear on the outside. I want to use the comments of readers to understand my own shortcomings and improve myself in a targeted manner. Second, maybe you can wake up and extinguish the delusions of the moon in the mirror and the flowers in the water as soon as possible! Opening a thread to ask for scolding seems crazy, but in fact I am confused, but I have nowhere to find a good teacher and friend to support me. I don't know how to write in Qidian to get signed? PS: Dear readers, you can criticize the work but not the author. After all, they are all people with ID cards. Please respect yourself.