King Crimson Begins with Steel Ball Run

Italian enchanting woman——Diablo

The update is stable, so you can read it with peace of mind. I have always felt that SBR is a great work, and in my personal opinion it is the pinnacle of the JOJO series. Therefore, I must treat this work with respect. I will carefully consider and adopt the settings in the article. If the examiners find any problems, please point them out. The second is the original plot. I will use three stand-in battles to transition the battle mode. In view of the powerful instant kill power of the Crimson King, the enemies that will appear later will appear in the form of a two-person combination, and the abilities of each other will be increased to increase the difficulty of the battle. Finally, if you have any readers with great imagination, you are welcome to leave your avatars or characters. Those that are interesting or consistent with the plot will have a high probability of being adopted. Thank you readers for your support. The small tickets in your hands are my biggest creative source! ! ! Grateful! ! !

Elsa appears! Touch a big head to commemorate it XD. This time it's the eighth style of painting

This book is a good fan novel written by Qidian, and it is also my favorite seventh JOJO fan novel. Originally, JOJO fan novels are very niche. The original Diablo is mysterious and powerful. His forbearance and suffocating sense of oppression are the most distinctive features. I think Diavolo is not suitable for teaming up with others. The other reason is that Diablo's ability is too buggy. It is not suitable to fight a protracted battle with the protagonist group and it will easily break down. Diablo should stop licking the protagonist and hope to have his own values and dark thoughts. You don't have to be a villain, but at least he should be a neutral evil. Now I feel that he is a bad good guy. I still don't understand why he helped Gerogioni and the seventh part. I like Longlong and hope he can have a good ending.

I discovered this book by accident. First of all, I would like to state that I am a master chef. If I had not seen King Crimson, I would not have clicked in. Before reading it, I had prepared for myself whether the character would be broken or there would be certain plots that might embarrass me. I read it after revising my first name, and there is no sense of immersion problem mentioned in the comments. As for the embarrassing plot, surprisingly there is no such thing! Even for Li Qing's book, after Dio was "resurrected" by a stand-in, I felt that the plot forced me to stop reading (I don't mean to criticize anyone here, it's purely a personal opinion). I was only worried about this book for a while after Elsa appeared, but the author handled it very well in the follow-up. I don't know what other readers saw in this book, but I saw growth in it. The growth of Diavolo in the author's writing, as a "doppelgänger" Elsa (who can also be regarded as the original time traveler), this character really exceeded my expectations. She undoubtedly has a golden spirit. There is also the growth of the author. It can be seen that the initial collection of illustrations should be to give the protagonist a golden finger. I was also worried about whether there would be some collection-related plot points. I am glad that this ability was locked in the middle period (of course, it may be that the Crimson King is strong enough). As for the plot plot, I did see challenges in it, both in terms of the characters. Faced with the challenge of a desperate situation, or the author facing the challenge of feedback from the work (not ideal - I really don't want to use the word "bumping", because I really like this work), the author can withstand the pressure and finish the book smoothly. From this point of view, the challenge should be a success. I hope that the author can face other life challenges in the future and be able to move forward and succeed immediately. I've talked about a few things, but now I want to talk about Diavolo. He is my favorite character in Jojo that I have ever seen. I feel ashamed that I don't like DIO or Jotaro. As a villain chef, I wasn't particularly touched when I watched Kaz and Yoshikage Kira (except for Killer Queen, There should be no one who doesn't like the cool pink cat wearing a skull decoration!), But there is an indescribable liking for Diavolo. He is dark, powerful and sick, overconfident in his own strength and unwilling to appear in front of others easily. In order to cut off the past and hide himself, he even split into a second personality. I don't know if you have ever dreamed about stupid or unsatisfactory things you did when you were a child at midnight. Every time this happens, I wish I could lose my memory on the spot, or I might run into my former elementary school classmates on the road when I go back to my hometown. At this time, what I hope most is that the other person will not recognize me. I don't want to have anything to do with my former classmates. Of course, my situation as an ordinary person cannot be compared with that of my boss, but I have felt the sense of security after hiding myself for a certain moment. Before reading this article, I had never thought that Diavolo could reconcile with his past self and choose to carry his past instead of cutting it off and leaving it behind. In my opinion, even if his abilities were enhanced, he would only become more extreme. Even though I know that this is a fan fiction and that the boss is actually a person who has been transformed and is no longer a pure Diavolo, I can't help but think that among millions of parallel worlds, there may really be a boss who can challenge himself and defeat the past? The ending of Golden Wind really made me sad. It was clear that the boss had caught the arrow, but the arrow passed through the Red King's hand and fell to the ground. After reading this article, I felt that maybe the boss's will was really not strong enough. He had never encountered any challenges while walking on the uphill road. He was indeed a slave to fate. Speaking of which, I still like Diavolo, but the sense of humor that the ending of Golden Wind once brought to me has disappeared. As for other comments saying that the protagonist of this book looks like a good person? I don't think so, not to mention that this Diavolo is not the original, but when it comes to the definition of good and bad, isn't it just that there is good before there is bad? If he treats Jojo well, he is a good person? But in the eyes of the president, the three of them are complete bastards. I said a lot of things in a confused manner, but I still want to praise the author. No matter how this work looks in the eyes of others, it is a success in my eyes! Very beautiful! ! ! So is there still an Eye of Heaven to see? Happy reading, it's a ball! !

It's pretty good. I think Diavolo Part 5 will fail for three reasons. The first point is that because of the character creation, Araki felt that it was too strong and didn't know how the protagonist group could win, so he added the definitions of Insect Arrow and Requiem, plus Diablo was not enhanced; the second point was that Diavolo's abilities were not deeply portrayed and explored, which led most viewers to think that the combination of Time Delete and Epitaph was nothing more than that; the third point is that I won't tell you what you understand 🙂

I'd say it's average. The plot of this book is just like the original SBR. The original book is good enough, but it can't be improved in any way. There are also some of the author's own ideas mixed in, but the writing style is obviously not good enough, and he can't control his own thoughts, and it looks a bit sloppy. Let's talk about the setting. I wonder, author, have you ever thought that a substitute is the embodiment of a mental state? Apart from the title, there is nothing like the original Diavolo. What is the charm of the boss? Isn't it that kind of dark, forbearing, cautious, like a poisonous snake that kills with one strike? In your works, the character of the protagonist is basically not related to the above. You explained that the protagonist is a suture of the soul, so why didn't the substitute have your own original adaptation? Of course, your setting of the protagonist's separated soul driving the plot in another place is commendable, but your control of details is still not very good. The fighting scenes in chapters 4 and 5 seem to be just watery, and there is no sense of tension and excitement at all. In this regard, you can refer to Li Sin. Although he is a bit disgusting about Diavolo's double standard, he is still not very picky in other parts. In summary, this book is almost average, neither too good nor too good. Come on, author

Although I have been focusing on plot so far, the plot of SBR itself is good enough. As long as the writing is good, it can be written well. I hope there will be more original plots in the future. Come on

I stayed up late and read it all in one go... I feel ashamed to say that this book was recommended to me in June last year, but I was busy hunting a wolf at that time and had no time to read it. Later, I made up for the updates of other books for a long time. Recently, I read this book because of the shortage of books. I didn't expect it to die... Let me talk about my feelings first: I still haven't finished reading it. As the author said in large chapters and separate chapters, this book has problems of one kind or another, and the core values ​​seem to be developing in an indescribable direction, but for a fan fiction, it is an extremely excellent work. The original intention of fan fiction is to make up for the regrets of the original work, add one's own understanding of the original work, and fill in private information for readers. The author has done the above points perfectly. At least I am very happy eating the author's private food... Actually, I don't care how Diavolo transcends heaven in the end (it seems that the original text is not transcendence, maybe it is a higher level, I don't know) I don't care how Elsa is resurrected, and what kind of things are there in the new world. What kind of story, what kind of interpersonal relationships, what I really care about is the determination of the author to finish it. I have read a book before, which has many problems, a lot of foreshadowing, and even the income is very bleak. But what surprised me is that he wrote more than two million words, and I read more than half of it. After reading the author's book, I found that the last chapter was actually written in August last year, and there is no idea of ​​publishing a new book. I want to say to Sike Dada: If you still have the idea of ​​continuing to be a street writer, just keep writing. We will look forward to your follow-up works.

SBR's strongest woman