The Dragon Civilization of Xiongbinglian

As long as the protagonist doesn't go to Earth to be an instructor, that's fine

To be honest, I don't like the protagonist who has two souls in one body.

It's boring. The most cowardly time traveler in history. Two protagonists. The real ones are natives. The time traveler is suppressed to death. It feels like the protagonist who comes from time-travel is just to deliver express delivery to the indigenous protagonist and then act as a dog for the indigenous protagonist. So far, no matter what the author writes, it cannot change the fact that the time traveler protagonist is the subject of the indigenous protagonist. The three kings are also kings, but Kesha is Kesha, and Liang Bing is also a king. Kesha, who is disobedient, is still chased by Kesha. Even if you write that the two protagonists are equal, it cannot change the fact that they travel across the world to deliver express delivery and then become a dog.

Not bad, good work. It's very well written.

I don't even know who is the protagonist. Generally speaking, you have a time traveler at the beginning and you give a lot of scenes. The audience must have preconceptions and the time traveler is the first point of view. But later on, you are marginalized. You said that the plot line will come later, but the audience is divided in the front. What do you bring to the back?

The main leaders of one proud race all married into another race. Do you think it's realistic?

I can't watch it. The two main characters are not pleasing to the eye, and it's even more disgusting that they are mainly indigenous. It's better for the time traveler to just hang up.

Author, your writing is awesome. You persuade a group of people at the beginning, you can just write about the struggle for hegemony You have done so many dragon kings, I just watched Flea and I can't stand it anymore

Too many self-created characters are easy to collapse in the later stage. Do you plan to write a few to death? One or two original characters can squeeze in. You can make nearly twenty at once, and it is estimated that more will be added in the later stage. How to write it when the time comes, I feel awkward and messy when I look at it now. Are you planning to match every female in Super God with a partner? After reading dozens of chapters, it is still frustrating. In the later stage, are you planning to introduce the current situation of a character in one chapter, or will he become a missing person after writing it?

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Kill this cancerous Karl directly.

This book repeatedly emphasizes that he is a king and must be beneficial to civilization! But slapped in the face repeatedly! I love being a father and raising a daughter who has no blood connection, especially this daughter who is so annoying and unlovable! Also dual protagonists! Can anyone read this book? Got it!

I tried poison today, but I died from the poison

What the hell are you writing? I've withdrawn.

Hexi, one of the kings of a civilization who has lived for thousands of years, has this character and IQ. If you say he is a primary school student who has not graduated from elementary school, I will believe him. Also, the angel pursuit force led by Hexi was unable to defeat the hunted Sumari and was easily wiped out. Are all angels fools? If the Dragon Man hadn't come over, He hope would have died? You are forcing the plot 🤔🤔🤔🤔

The image of the emperor is very similar to the protagonist