Shrouding the Heavens: Beyond Redemption

Not bad, much better than the one next door. The one next door is really surfing with cerebral thrombosis and blood! If a hegemonic body dares to run into the hibernation place of a great holy body, he is really not afraid of being slapped to death by Huang!

Speechless, since a hegemonic body uses a sword as a weapon to preach, it is like a big man using a needle to embroider flowers. What else is a hegemonic body? The hegemonic body is so insignificantly developed. That hegemonic body is not created by beating.

It's very good. It's much better than the Ji family's hegemony. At least your protagonist can come out to experience it after reaching the four extremes.

Why do you have to step on Ye Hei's little stone if you are a fan? Does this make the protagonist you wrote very awesome? Bullshit is not

Don't learn the story of how to start from covering the sky and using mud to shake off the quasi-emperor's blood. It's so stupid.

Your domineering body is not domineering enough 🤭 Why do you like to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and you also have to use a pseudonym? Isn't it better to be upright? Be more domineering. Your domineering body is not as domineering as the original one.

Now I feel annoyed when I see the sword, there is the Yin Yang Sect, a genius of the Great Emperor family is bullied, that's it, that's it? The current plot feels that the protagonist's presence is not as strong as that of Wang Teng and Qi Fei.

The layout is too small! Has Ye Fan concealed his identity since he rescued King Jiang Shen? In the past, I had to hide my identity because I had no backing, and being alone with a treasure would attract attention, so I concealed my identity to avoid unnecessary trouble. Protagonist why is this happening? He has a strong background and can support the protagonist. You can fight in the same realm without fear, and you can also conquer across realms. So for what?

When writing about a successor of a great power, one must write about his arrogance and pride. This is difficult to grasp. The arrogance of standing on the commanding heights is in line with the character. For example, we have a family that is said to be rich and powerful but reasonable, proud but not contemptuous from the Ming Dynasty to the present. I think I'm better than you but I won't underestimate you.

A hegemonic body, the tool for proving the Tao is a sword. This has cut off the path of many Taoist friends. I am holding on to a few, and if it doesn't work, I will run away.