Earth Immortal!

Also, let me mention the protagonist's overpowered abilities. I feel there are too many: the Foundation Establishment Platform, the Dharma Hall, and other halls, etc. It feels like there are too many functions. The biggest flaw of the previous novel was that it had too many settings. Too many settings can be overwhelming. Well, I think the author likes to lay out the background.

This incredibly powerful immortal built several impressive structures, yet there wasn't a single way to conceal or protect them. And those three eagles—the protagonist has to feed them; they can't hunt for themselves.

Don't rush into writing a book. Calm down and work on a good outline, then think about how to make the opening stand out. Releasing a new book every now and then, like that Zhongtian Ziwei Emperor before, will eventually lead to the collapse of your Daoist heart.

Advantages: 1. No level suppression, the character has already reached the Foundation Establishment stage before being published, which is better than those characters that only reach the Foundation Establishment stage after two or three hundred chapters. 2. Harem novel, the protagonist is not abandoned, and dual cultivation is allowed when necessary. Shortcomings: 1.

Like the author "Zhongtian Ziwei Emperor", he started with a desert novel, while you started with a novel about following the path. The timing was similar, and the subsequent development trajectory was almost the same. The first book was a hit, the second one was a flop, the third one was abandoned, the fourth one was abandoned, and the nth one was abandoned.

The author's setting—that a single authentic-level cultivation technique can only allow one person to reach the Golden Core stage—feels illogical. Cultivation relies on resources and talent; this setting essentially maximizes the limitation on talent. Becoming an apprentice becomes the end of the path in cultivation; without creating an authentic-level or higher technique, one cannot break through to the Golden Core stage.

The Qi Refining and Foundation Establishment stages shouldn't involve any unnecessary chores. These stages should focus on one thing: preparing trump cards and focusing all efforts on reaching the Purple Mansion stage. Once at the Purple Mansion stage, finding a Daoist partner, son, and demonic pet are all matters to consider.

To put it simply, it feels like the protagonist reached the Golden Core stage too early, his foundation wasn't strong enough, and his descendants had to find resources from outside to build their foundations, as they couldn't produce them themselves. This conflicts with the idea of ​​farming; the foundation was still too shallow.

Let's keep an eye on it. The main character Chen Nianzhi in "The Path to Everlasting Green" is so well-written, I hope this one doesn't disappoint!

Can you please write the item prices properly? The starting prices are a mess, how am I supposed to write them later? If you can't do it, just use IA (Information Technology).