I'm Trying to Get Lucky to Catch Elves

Here is a collection of your opinions and evaluations of this book, as well as suggestions for the author. First of all, it is self-evident that readers are important to a book. Your opinions are very important, and feedback is also very important Your comments and suggestions may affect the direction and quality of this book I am not a newbie, so I can bear it. I also ask all book friends to speak freely, make comments or complaints, and even make comments about my writing style or plot. I can accept these. Compared with compliments, I prefer to accept pertinent opinions, and I am even more afraid that some book friends will feel that they can't leave without saying a word after reading. In that case, I will not understand what I did wrong 😭 (Of course, please do not involve personal attacks and insulting remarks, otherwise the comments will be deleted, because this will greatly affect the mood of other book friends, and the harm will be far greater than the good)

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What the plot is like is another matter. What matters to me is whether it looks good or not, whether I like it or not. Enmmm, in general, it's okay. There are just some typos. Then those elves, if possible, also explain what they look like. Although they may not appear, they at least give people an impression. For example, the four elves that the protagonist's father gave him to choose from only had names and no descriptions, which was quite uncomfortable.

As soon as there is an interaction with the female character, the book immediately becomes low, and the male protagonist feels lustful and wretched.

Elf: Attributes: Status: Combat power: Evolution level: Skills: Introduction: Here is a template. Book friends can use their imagination. Evolved or special elves can be sent out. If there is a suitable author, I will copy the book review as appropriate 😁

Sluggish. . . If you submit it to a fan, you will write something original. . . Pokémon is so popular. . . The author is really stubborn

Just say it briefly. The ideas and concepts are pretty good. Mainly because the description of plot and character is unsatisfactory. Let's talk about the purchase and birth of Dagger Little Wolf first. It gives the impression that pig's feet are prone to disasters and are born unlucky. Without a golden finger, I'm afraid it will be useless at the beginning. It was obviously a normal day of luck, but for the sake of an indifferent plot, all kinds of unlucky things happened. In fact, just start the game normally, and just use the luck value to improve the pet's talent. It's simple and clear. Filling in a bunch of plots doesn't work well. Then there is the issue of pet personality. The character description of Dagger Little Wolf at the beginning is that he is diligent and docile, and Pig's Feet also values ​​this character. As a result, the little dagger wolf with pig's feet was raised into Erha. Let's put it this way, although Erha is very popular in reality, it is not suitable to appear in this kind of pet battle. Moreover, the reason for Erha's personality is that he is energetic in modern life and is not born with it. There's no need to indulge in this kind of heat

I didn't see a few elves, but I saw a lot of beauties. There is a problem with the rhythm.

There are too many flaws. It's been a hundred years since the elves came. Speeding up and bypassing this kind of thing is useless. It's so surprising in a game. And the name is really numb.

I came in from the Alien Beast stream label, please understand 😅😅😅😅

This update is too flattering😅😅

Does the author have multiple heroines or a single heroine? If you are single, don't be ambiguous. It's really a bit poisonous to be ambiguous and not accept it.

I don't know why the author likes Husky so much. He has written about it so many times but he still hasn't written about how powerful and special he is. Or does the author think everyone should like huskies?

Is the author planning to drop A?

😒This kind of originality is very uncomfortable if you don't know what the elves look like or what their skills look like

It should be a light-hearted novel + an original elf world. Goldfinger is not too big at the moment. The writing is okay. Overall, it's pretty good.

When writing about Pokemon, just write about fanfics. Why do you want to be original? What does this little dagger wolf look like?

How should I put it, I originally read Elf, but ended up reading half a chapter of Legs. To be honest, I really couldn't accept this kind of beginning, so I withdrew. No matter how exciting the rest of the show was, I wouldn't be able to stand it. Of course, everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage, so just feel free to feel good about yourself.

Don't worry, the author will definitely become popular if you write more. The more you write about the world view, the more perfect it will be. I can't stop seeing the latest update.

The plot is so dragging, I've read several chapters and I still haven't chosen a pet.

The process of the novel is a bit tedious, and the description of the elves is not very memorable and picturesque.

High EQ: Original Elf Low EQ: Change the soup without changing the medicine.

Who likes to read Pokemon and Pokemon-like articles about women? The focus should be on cute and handsome elves. Women should be put on the sidelines or even deleted entirely. Or are you saying that if there are no women in the book, you won't be able to write it? There are too many women in this article, and the male protagonist is too wretched, making it uninteresting. How is this different from a third-rate urban novel in which, except for the male protagonist, all the other characters are beauties? It's just that they are dressed in the skin of an elf. I hope the author can change something.

I saw dozens of pictures, and they all seemed good. It was just a few-month-old wolf with extraordinary talents. It was outrageous to defeat a scorpion that had been cultivated for almost 2 years and ranked eighth in the national competition. I felt that the protagonist was growing rapidly while the others were staying put. Not long after looking at the catalog, the protagonist had evolved. This scorpion, which was ranked eighth in the country, was still in its initial form, and its combat power was a bit broken. I stopped watching after the battle. Farewell.

It's too boring and too watery. After reading ten chapters, there is no key point at all. One chapter is watery, and I'm embarrassed to say it is foreshadowing. The plot progress is too slow. In general, I will read the first few chapters of a work and decide whether to read it or not based on the quality. I personally prefer elf and beast-controlling stories. You can keep jumping to see if they are still so bad.

It's too long-winded, the plot is bland and not interesting.

Do you have any recommendations for farming articles? Could you please give me the title of the book?

You can learn from some of the prototypes of Digimon, childhood memories.

You can try writing Pokémon fan fiction first, it's easier

When will you finish writing the outline of your new book? Remember to write a side note to remind you⁄(⁄⁄⁄ω⁄⁄⁄)⁄