I Save Up Luck to Catch Pokémon

Here we collect your opinions and reviews of this book, as well as suggestions for the author. First and foremost, it must be stated that the importance of readers to a book is self-evident; your opinions and feedback are extremely important. Your comments and suggestions may influence the direction and quality of this book. I'm not exactly a newbie anymore, so I can handle things fairly well.

The book immediately becomes low-quality whenever there's any interaction between the male lead and female characters; it makes the male lead seem lecherous and sleazy.

How the plot unfolds is another matter. Whether it looks good or not, whether I like it or not, that's what I care about. Hmmm, overall, it's alright. There are some typos. Then, if possible, describe what the elves look like. Even if they don't necessarily appear, at least give people an impression. For example, the four types of spirits that the protagonist's father provided him to choose from only had names and no descriptions, which felt quite disheartening.

Elf: property: state: Combat strength: Evolutionary level: Skill: Introduction: This is a template; readers are welcome to use their imagination. Evolved or special types of spirits are welcome to post. If a suitable author provides a sample, their book review will be copied. 😁

Stunning... Submitting to fanfiction but writing original content... Not capitalizing on the huge popularity of Pokémon... The author is truly stubborn.

Let me put it simply. The ideas and concepts are pretty good. The main problem lies in the plot and character development. First, the purchase and birth of the Dagger Wolf gives the impression that the protagonist is plagued by misfortune and is born unlucky. Without a cheat code, he'd be doomed from the start.

I didn't see many elves, but I saw a lot of beautiful women. The pacing is off.

I came here from the "Beastmaster" tag, could you please take a look? 😅😅😅😅

There are just too many flaws. The game has been around for a hundred years, and things like speed boosts and bypassing obstacles are completely useless. It's shocking how bad it is in a competition, and the name... Seriously, it's just... Unbelievable.

This update is terrible! 😅😅