I Save Up Luck to Catch Pokémon

Here is a collection of your opinions and evaluations of this book, as well as suggestions for the author. First of all, it is self-evident that readers are important to a book. Your opinions are very important, and feedback is also very important Your comments and suggestions may affect the direction and quality of this book I am not a newbie, so I can bear it. I also ask all book friends to speak freely, make comments or complaints, and even make comments about my writing style or plot. I can accept these. Compared with compliments, I prefer to accept pertinent opinions, and I am even more afraid that some book friends will feel that they can't leave without saying a word after reading. In that case, I will not understand what I did wrong 😭 (Of course, please do not involve personal attacks and insulting remarks, otherwise the comments will be deleted, because this will greatly affect the mood of other book friends, and the harm will be far greater than the good)

As soon as there is an interaction with the female character, the book immediately becomes low, and the male protagonist feels lustful and wretched.

What the plot is like is another matter. What matters to me is whether it looks good or not, whether I like it or not. Enmmm, in general, it's okay. There are just some typos. Then those elves, if possible, also explain what they look like. Although they may not appear, they at least give people an impression. For example, the four elves that the protagonist's father gave him to choose from only had names and no descriptions, which was quite uncomfortable.

Elf: Attributes: Status: Combat power: Evolution level: Skills: Introduction: Here is a template. Book friends can use their imagination. Evolved or special elves can be sent out. If there is a suitable author, I will copy the book review as appropriate 😁

Sluggish. . . If you submit it to a fan, you will write something original. . . Pokémon is so popular. . . The author is really stubborn

Just say it briefly. The ideas and concepts are pretty good. Mainly because the description of plot and character is unsatisfactory. Let's talk about the purchase and birth of Dagger Little Wolf first. It gives the impression that pig's feet are prone to disasters and are born unlucky. Without a golden finger, I'm afraid it will be useless at the beginning. It was obviously a normal day of luck, but for the sake of an indifferent plot, all kinds of unlucky things happened. In fact, just start the game normally, and just use the luck value to improve the pet's talent. It's simple and clear. Filling in a bunch of plots doesn't work well. Then there is the issue of pet personality. The character description of Dagger Little Wolf at the beginning is that he is diligent and docile, and Pig's Feet also values ​​this character. As a result, the little dagger wolf with pig's feet was raised into Erha. Let's put it this way, although Erha is very popular in reality, it is not suitable to appear in this kind of pet battle. Moreover, the reason for Erha's personality is that he is energetic in modern life and is not born with it. There's no need to indulge in this kind of heat

I didn't see a few elves, but I saw a lot of beauties. There is a problem with the rhythm.

I came in from the Alien Beast stream label, please understand 😅😅😅😅

There are too many flaws. It's been a hundred years since the elves came. Speeding up and bypassing this kind of thing is useless. It's so surprising in a game. And the name is really numb.

This update is too flattering😅😅