I Regret Making the Elixir of Longevity Very Much

I just want to ask if you can be more cowardly 😥

I just wish there wouldn't be a female protagonist in one thing

So far, this book has been written to my liking. The characters are mediocre and the plot design is interesting. I am used to eating big fish, big meat, and rice porridge. Occasionally eating vegetables and side dishes is still delicious. Maintain this level. Keep updating, and if you have three recommendations, you can still retain readers for a long time, and hopefully it will become a high-quality product.

For example, if a bull-headed horse-face appeared in front of you, would you still say that the real world is just a world of technology? Open your mouth and keep silent about martial arts, don't know how to cultivate immortality, speechless

Hey, I thought that if I successfully practiced medicine and gained immortality, I would be chased by all kinds of monsters, live on the streets, and interesting things would happen one after another in this mortal world. I didn't expect that there would be a chat group, and no one would talk about medicine in the medicine-practicing exchange group. If you only have old knowledge about medicine, wouldn't it be better for everyone to prescribe new medicines together? Oh, this book is really a mess.

From the author's answer, we know that the author may be a little different from normal common sense. Maybe the author finds it difficult for you to connect these two words, so I will give you an analogy: there are heavenly soldiers and heavenly generals, but there is not necessarily a heavenly emperor. There is no essential connection between the two. Do you think there is a problem? Let me tell you why there must be immortals if there is an underworld. Anyone who understands these four words will know that they are from myths. Moreover, as long as there are myths with this setting, why are the cultivators who appear in myths not cultivating immortals? Strengthening gymnastics? Even in movies like A Chinese Ghost Story and The Underworld, there are cultivators, and a world protagonist with magic powers still defines martial arts? You're not naive enough to think that only your sect has it, right? Moreover, the author also said in the comment area that Fengyun is a martial arts. As long as you know a little bit about it, you will know that in the past, as long as there was martial arts or something, it was defined as a martial arts regardless of the upper limit, because there was no such thing as a fairy at that time. Did you know that "The Legend of Shushan Swordsman" also defined martial arts? But do you really think it is a martial arts novel? Fengyun Ah Thunderbolt Ah is defined as martial arts, but anyone who has watched it will not think that it is a martial arts world. Those who say Fengyun is a martial arts are mostly making fun of it, but it doesn't seem like a joke from the author's point of view. The author wouldn't take it seriously, would he? No way? No way?

People's preferences are not taken into account. Your carefully designed cultivation system is just a few words in the eyes of others. A lengthy introduction to the practice system. It can only dissuade readers. They should either watch a literary drama with an interesting plot, or a martial arts drama with exciting fighting processes. It's really boring to introduce the world view endlessly.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and it is not easy to find novels that I can read. This book is very interesting to me. There are a thousand Harry Potters among a thousand people. I can only say that the author did not get your pleasure, and it is not suitable for you to read... It is still very good. Now that the pressure is so high, there is no need to find faults... If you have this time, you can find another book that you can read 😁

It's quite poisonous. The problem is that the protagonist is not up to par, and so are the teammates in the chat group. They all feel cheap. And always giving free help to others will always make readers uncomfortable. Pay and gain must be equal, not to mention that as the protagonist, there must be 200% receipt to balance the reader. You just upload the three spells you put at the bottom of the box, and then you give the spells to Liu Bei to fill the civil and military dynasties. What's the difference between it and a tool man who gives away treasures?

High EQ: ** Low EQ: Have you ever considered becoming a tragedian?

This plot of more than ten chapters is a bit disgusting, isn't it? It's annoying to insist on names, but it's nothing, and it's explained that it's an apology. In addition, the protagonist doesn't understand, and the woman doesn't understand much. Doesn't this ruin someone's innocence? The most important thing for ancient people was to be innocent. How could she get married in the future? ? ? Don't you want to change it? ? ?

Night Owl read around the book reviews after reading the book, and most people seemed to have bad opinions about it. What is the best thing without a female protagonist, and the protagonist must get 200% of the benefits, otherwise readers will not like to read it, the words are not up to par, and the chat group system is rubbish. There is also a person who said that the protagonist cannot practice cultivation. The main character of Zhu Xian's Kung Fu cannot return to the advanced world. As a result, this point makes people want to discuss it. I would immediately run away from such a poisonous book. Even if I read Taiyi and Kaitianlu again, I feel sick. I have personal preferences for this kind of problem. If you don't like to read it, it doesn't directly mean that all book friends don't like to read it. If you write it like this, no one will read it. Just read Douluo: xxxx every day? You don't like to read and use things that you think are wrong but are actually not big problems to disgust the author. As the old saying goes, sweet words keep me warm for three winters, but bad words hurt people in June. I don't mean that you have to be sweet, but at least come up with some issues worth discussing before hurting people with bad words It's better for the author to make a fan value statement and control it. Sooner or later, write slowly and the wealthy people will see eye to eye with you.

Do you think that if Lao Tzu and Zhuang Tzu were sent red envelopes to the world of the protagonists, would all of them become saints directly? Then I find that someone is plotting against the protagonist. In order to repay the cause and effect of becoming a saint, they educate the protagonist in the world of Hua Tuo, so that the protagonist will have one or two chances a month for the saint to take action, because in the human world, the power is not controlled by the way of heaven. This "plug-in" can be used in the fairy world. Until the protagonist becomes a saint 🤭 Perfect... Give me the essence, there are so many words

The setting is too weird, you can't use spells when you go to other worlds! It has no life-saving ability at all, what a weird setting!

The writing is not bad. As long as you stick to it and don't just write it down to 150,000 words like the previous book, you should be able to make money as it slowly attracts more people.

It would be boring if the world level was determined purely by strength level The scalability of the following text is not strong. It would be much more interesting if the world level were set based on rules priority, stability, exclusion, crystal wall strength, etc. For example, if you set a real world without supernatural power, no matter what world the power comes from, once you enter it, you will become an ordinary person and cannot recharge. This kind of world level can't be called low-level, right? After all, its rules override other rules, and I am the only one who rules. In ancient times, it was just alchemy and medicine refining. This kind of world can be used for bioengineering, cancer cells will not die, and the virtual world will last forever... Personal imagination, for reference only.

Everything else is fine, but the author's setting is too weird. Do you need luck to cast spells? Then what kind of immortals are they cultivating? Tian Buyi can use magic to save people, but can't cast spells?

The writing style is too plain, there is no ethereal naturalness and fairy spirit of cultivating immortals, and there is no funny and domineering chat group. The author is writing it, but he doesn't want to read it. The story is not coherent.

If I don't cut it, I think I can become a god (if I write it properly later)

A suggestion, don't travel so frequently. After all, traveling to other worlds should ultimately serve this world. Wearing clothes for the sake of wearing them is just a hodgepodge of fan fiction. What's the point?

Really, forget it if you don't want to write. It's just like a monkey moving a watermelon. You just go with the flow. If you don't want to write, you just want to give up. I look down on you.

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Very nice. Suitable for old bookworms. Just don't be a eunuch

Why did you write a very good subject matter and turn it into a waste stream?

I'll cum too!

There is a guy who calls me @ on a trumpet account, what should I do? The reason is that on July 26, I commented on another novel, and then he said not to review the book based on my poor experience, and then I said, no matter how little experience I have, I am still better than you, a free prostitute, right? Anyway, we said a few words and then we never talked again Then thirteen hours ago, he suddenly liked me and I forgot about him. Then a few minutes later, he kept @ scolding me on his trumpet, and then I found out that he was not only scolding me He was also the operations officer of a book. I scolded his trumpet directly, and then my trumpet account was banned until 11 o'clock on August 24th.

If you get the Xuan Qing Dao of Tai Chi, you won't be able to practice it. It's a bit disgusting for the author to write this. I mentioned earlier that I have great luck and good talent. Is anyone still interested in the loser style now?

Gold mining in Shali finally pays off

Come on, author, this book is very interesting to me and I look forward to your growth!

It feels frustrating to watch, so just throw it away, bye bye