The Heroine's Escape from Marriage Begins

I hope the author will not become a eunuch in the palace

I personally prefer Ziwei to be with the male protagonist. I am quite speechless about Gu Binghan, her role came out too suddenly. If the male protagonist only likes Binghan all the time, she is really not suitable. There is no force, no strategy, it's like your fiancée thought you were not good-looking and went to find another incompetent pretty boy, which is a bit like a tauren.

Justice! ! !

How to say it? So-so. The biggest problem with this book is not the plot, but the protagonist. Where there is a caravan, there must be robbers, and the female robber must be kidnapped back to the mountain. The plot is cliche but there is nothing wrong with it. The problem lies with the protagonist. The way the protagonist handles the problems he encounters makes people speechless. This plot is very uncomfortable to watch. It took me a long time to understand why it was uncomfortable. Because the main character is too ordinary. Yes, it's ordinary. The protagonist's treatment method will be the same for anyone, but it cannot be applied to the protagonist. The novel is not history, the novel is a story that unfolds the plot around the protagonist. It can only be the character who creates history, not the history that creates the character. In the book, the character description of the protagonist is not as vivid as that of the third master. There is no bright spot, no aloofness, no wit, no stubbornness, no perseverance, no nobility, no calmness, nothing at all. If you can't be good at literature or martial arts, can you only be good-looking? There is no highlight that highlights the main character, making the book look bitter and boring. I haven't read much, so maybe what I said is not accurate. I don't know if the author understands what I mean. I don't have the habit of posting book reviews, but I hope it will be helpful to the author as he is a newbie. The early stage of a novel is far more important than the later stage. I would rather end with a big start than a complete one.

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In fact, I think the protagonist has thought them through. They wanted to bury the protagonist from the beginning. Even if the boss was unwilling to use force on the protagonist later, the protagonist was married and his reputation was gone. What's more, they said they had never killed civilians, but as for the escorts for the Chamber of Commerce and the servants accompanying them, weren't they all killed?

If the emperor knew about this first, all those who loved the child would have to be killed except for the family the child was forced to marry in order to protect the reputation of the child. Whether the family the child married to could survive would depend on the child's mood. After all, royal face is also very important. If someone doesn't care for their children, just say that the prince has died of illness and push him aside, it will not cause any loss to the royal family's face.

Suddenly I felt that the pure love in the female queen must be a clear stream.

This type of book has a common problem. There's actually no difference between the male protagonist's character and the female protagonist's

Are you a eunuch? There has been no update for three days.

It has a single female protagonist, and it's still a harem story. I gave up on the harem.

Update quickly, brother

How can a man be described as dripping with fragrance? Sweating dripping with fragrance is the right way to describe a girl. Although "Stupid Book" is a book about women, readers don't like to describe men in this way, except for female readers.

Very handsome

Author, you can come back and read what you wrote from the beginning. In the real world, if the heroine is replaced by a man and the male protagonist is replaced by a woman, is there no sense of violation? Yes, the heroine comes from a world of female supremacy, so she has no problem with it as a male. However, the male protagonist comes from a male-dominated world, and it doesn't feel out of place at all if he is a woman.

It's like a female channel because it's a female protagonist's perspective. It feels good to write a female channel.

Only children make choices, and both heroines want it.

There is no sense of peace if the female channel is changed to another gender. I even think it is just a female channel copied with another gender.

Emmmmm, after reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that the writing is pretty good, but I found several poisonous points (in my opinion). The most poisonous one is the character of the protagonist, and secondly, the content of my thoughts is so awkward to read

Let me tell you a very outrageous thing. This is what I think about the female-dominated worldview. I just change my thinking. Female = male and male = female. Therefore, a woman should have a harem in a female-dominated world. That is to say, her old "husband" is allowed. Because it is a female-dominated worldview. Then think about it, wouldn't it be true for a man to have a harem in a female-dominated world? ? ? Then let's talk about the dedicated route. Maybe this can avoid these, but just because I think so, I never read these female virtuous articles. This time I came in to comment because I was idle and bored.