Dark Survival: I Have a Castle

The author has good writing skills, which can be seen in the first chapters. However, there are big flaws in the overall writing. First of all, the description of the environment and characters is not adequate, and the language description is also slightly inferior, which cannot well reflect the integration of the complex and the situation. These are some writing skills that need to be strengthened. Then, the plot of the story is relatively confusing, or rather unclear. The initial chapters do not give readers a good sense of immersion. Although the foreshadowing in the first two chapters is a bit deliberate, it is still acceptable. However, the following chapters are still in the battle plot, which does not give readers a good buffer to get involved, that is, the setting of the story is not very clear yet. Although it is revealed bit by bit as the story develops, it overall gives people a rather abrupt feeling. It is not clear whether the rhythm is fast or slow. My personal reading experience is that after the protagonist experiences the initial impact, a buffer period should be needed to allow the reader to officially and completely enter the perspective of the protagonist. Secondly, the development of the story is not that attractive. Fans of this genre may click in to watch it, but I personally feel that the highlights are difficult to retain. It is necessary to think over the plot again and again, conduct a lot of current story progress from the reader's perspective, and make reasonable arrangements. It seems difficult to chew at the moment. Thanks for the invitation.

The author's book is quite interesting at the end, and you can use it as a joke. But the first two chapters are quite confusing. I really can't understand it if I don't read it well. Come on, it's very interesting.

Generally speaking, it's actually pretty good, but there are still some flaws in the details. Overall, it's pretty good.

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