Become a Creator from Marvel

Embarrassing. Being embarrassed is embarrassing. The more you look at it, the more embarrassing it becomes.

The protagonist's own home was destroyed by the Trisolarans, and then he ran to other people's homes and began to pretend to be a god controlling everything. You ridicule others for treating yourself in a high manner at first, but don't you do the same for yourself? Dismiss others because you are invincible. When I first read the first two pictures, the protagonist said: I will never take action against my compatriots. I thought the protagonist was the kind of person who hates outward civilization but is gentle and kind to the people on earth. Then he started fighting after a few wrong words, and turned into a dictator villain. I was really baffled when I read this🤔🤔🤔 When people ask you what you are here for, just say it! ! ! Don't be the Riddler! ! ! (The introduction was quite interesting at first, but the result was not what I expected at all. I'm not happy if I don't complain.)

The protagonist doesn't look like a scientist, and he's very silly. It's a bit awkward for the author to forcefully push the plot forward. And if his ability is so strong, why is his performance so weak? The Trisolaran civilization is also a bug in the face of higher civilizations. It is disappointing that the protagonist has only this little power after four hundred years.

This is the Yi Xiaochuan who traveled through time, a time traveler aiming for the world after he has traveled through. . . . There is a kind of protagonist who strives for his father's ex's passerby. . There is also this feeling of being invincible and not invincible, like a micro-sculpture of rice grains, just like the transcendent molecular man who became a disciple of Master Ma and became a little twisted.

The protagonist is not very strong. Does the author have no idea about Dr. Manhattan? He also needs materials to make iron and steel to build a pyramid. Even the mutant from Apocalypse is better than the protagonist. He can change the atomic order of an element to turn him into any kind of substance. To put it simply, he can turn a handful of soil into a special metal, a glass of water into a handful of yellow sand, and oxygen into tangible gold. This is all possible, and the protagonist cannot even teleport. He flies over every time, which is a bit sorry for the setting of Doctor Manhattan.

You are the kind of person who wants to write an invincible article, but doesn't want to make him invincible. Typical self-contradiction.

The protagonist's IQ is equal to the author's IQ, the protagonist's diploma is equal to the author's diploma,,,,, it's better to write a fantasy novel

A low-end version of Dr. Manhattan, which boasts a lot but cannot be written. The protagonist has not matured for hundreds of years, and his thoughts and actions are similar to those of a 10-year-old child. It gives people the impression that he wants to pretend to be B after he has some skills. Dr. Manhattan was like this at first, but after more than ten years at most, he knew how to use his power. Even if he gave up the last bit of humanity, it was because of human reasons. It's like a joke that the protagonist has been alone and lonely for hundreds of years and then watches the fragmented memories of souls left behind after death.                                                                    I would like to make a suggestion: come to the Marvel world - become familiar with your own power - learn knowledge (otherwise you will be another Iron King) - understand the laws of this world (otherwise how will you go back) If you don't go back at this point, this book will be declared cool. Don't write anything that will lead to OAA forming a force and a female protagonist, really.                                                              ~Return to your own universe - resurrect human beings and destroy the three bodies - make a copy of your own memory as an ordinary person (before the God-creation plan) - learn the knowledge laws of this universe and so on. With power like Dr. Chen, it feels like you are basically a research madman, and the only thing left is to wander around thousands of worlds.

I'll just leave a comment: Diaosi's writing brings real emotions into the plot of the novel. It's disgusting! There is a reason why so many people complain! Someone commented that it was at the level of a primary school student, and they agreed after reading a few chapters! Bye-Bye!

After reading the introduction, you know that the protagonist is not very good in mind. Will he detonate the sun to take revenge on the Trisolarans? Please, even my water droplets can withstand solar explosions

Maybe it's because of my personality. I think the main character's thoughts, actions, character, and beliefs are all nonsense! I can't agree!

It feels like hundreds of years in the third body have been wasted, but if I had read a few papers, the protagonist's abilities would not be like this.

The real pretense is to be very mellow and make the readers feel incomprehensible, rather than purely relying on a bunch of words such as shock, horror, disbelief, etc. To set it off. . . . Personal opinion.

If you guessed it correctly, this is the template for Dr. Manhattan, right?

This protagonist looks nothing like the Quantum God

Can the author read the physics book?

I gave up and really wanted to give this book a dimensionality reduction blow.

Has the protagonist never seen The Three-Body Problem? Actually, a two-way foil has already flown towards the solar system. How about the author find another reason to travel?

It can only be said that it is watchable, but not enough. The protagonist feels like a stinky loser, switching back and forth between a loser and a superior who has lived for four hundred years. One moment, he is an indifferent master who will crush Loki to death if he disagrees with him, and the next moment, he is quarreling with the jumping Avengers. The matter that could be solved by just saying "Are you teaching me how to do things?" Must be kept talking to the mother's heart.

First: Is the protagonist a time traveler and a native of the Trisolaran world? … Second: Does the protagonist have power beyond the gods? Are you kidding me? Just being incompetent and furious, running to the solar system to seek revenge for what the gods can do with a wave of their hands? You can pull it down! Or is it that the author's power beyond the gods is just that of a weakling who is stronger than ordinary people? The protagonist has more power than ordinary people and goes to another world to show off his power ... Third: Since he is a time traveler, since he has traveled to the Trisolaran world, and then arrived at another world's attitude towards human beings, what do you mean by compatriots? … Power beyond the gods? Compatriots? Revive human civilization?

How should I put it? The protagonist should follow the template of Dr. Manhattan, with the power of God and human thinking. This shouldn't be the case. He can't use his power. How awesome is Manhattan?

Build an opinion building! Look at how many people are reading this book. If you have any opinions on the plot, or if you have any reference plots or ideas that you would like to propose, you can comment below. From now on, I will take time to read it every day and discuss the follow-up plot development with everyone. I hope everyone can speak enthusiastically. Thank you!

Additional refinement, understand?