Marvel Gambit Fusion Superman

It's so embarrassing. There's no sense of involvement. It doesn't even have the aura of a king or a strong man. It's just a ripe waste.

The plot is too brainless and the writing is poor. The dialogues and fights written are awkward, but they also like to have fun with themselves.

Superman's biological force field. Without this, every move he makes can destroy the earth.

Diaosi novels are so good at YY

After reading Chapter 2, this is too good. . .

The Loki TV series is out ~ there are new pitfalls ~ maintaining the sacred timeline ~ that means there is a time traveler in the movie universe ~ this organization will definitely know 🤫 kill the fan series

Those who can write love lines can do it, but those who can't, I suggest you have one or two. I saw a weird author who obviously couldn't write love lines, but he wrote so many female protagonists. In the end, he gave away all kinds of weird girls, just for YY, to give away girls. I wrote a novel by promoting all kinds of weird events to promote the plot (not long after I fell in love with a girl, the girl temporarily stopped being with the protagonist, and then continued to write about other girls and sent them to the protagonist in this cycle, which is really disgusting), which caused the protagonist's character to collapse.

This choice of words is used in sentences and writing. . . . It's so hard to watch

Silver Superman seems to have had a hard time beating the Abomination, so why not just melt his heat vision into slag?

Invincible sees it, is it cool?

This is an anti-Japanese drama 🙂

The Variety Maid

Can you give the author some advice? If the author feels that the main character is too boring, can you give him some interests and hobbies? For example: Collecting beauties Collecting technology Collecting various strange items (magical items) Another example: Devil fruits, martial arts secrets, Taoist weapons. In short, he is a character in your writing. Can't you make him move?

I feel a bit self-conscious! And he wrote General Ross like an idiot!

Yuriko (Death Girl)

Stop writing about the anti-Japanese war. It's not interesting. Wouldn't it be good to do more about foreign countries?