After the Old Ancestor Fell

It's better for the two sisters to separate; after all, the female lead has already repaid the debt she owed to them.

If I were to write a book, I would elevate my sister to an incredibly high level, showering her with praise. After all, I do have an older sister, and that's exactly what I'm going to do! My sister must be the number one genius in the cultivation world, the number one sword master, the number one sect leader, beautiful and cool. 😆😆😆

Serious novels without a main female lead and no romantic pairing are getting no readership; instead, romance-obsessed stories about palace intrigue and power struggles are all the rage! It's ridiculous.

The pace felt a bit fast towards the end; it's probably because they wanted to escape from those ordinary people as quickly as possible. However, the female lead's ruthlessness is truly amazing; she shows no mercy to either the female or male supporting characters. Apart from my sister, everyone else is irrelevant, which is fine. I like protagonists who don't have families to support. Keep it up, everyone! ٩(๑òωó๑)۶

It's very well written. The relationship between the two sisters is very sincere. 🙂 I also hope that the two of them can continue to accompany each other. By the way, how many words does the author plan to write?

I truly felt like I was cultivating immortality. There were attachments, but more importantly, it was a period of training. There was no time for scheming or intrigue, nor the energy to care about irrelevant people. My heart moved as I pleased, entirely according to my mood. Before I knew it, many years had passed. I became increasingly insightful and carefree, acquiring a sense of ethereal immortality.

Although it's a novel without a male lead, which is quite rare, I still want to ask: what is this disjointed and haphazard writing? Was it trying to depict strategy? But it's all scattered and lacks any coherent narrative, leaving the reader with only one word: chaos. There are also some things or people that happen suddenly, without any transition or cause. After some time, it becomes clear that these people or events, once over, seem completely unnecessary and utterly useless.

I suddenly realized something: there are six characters in the character list, but three of them are already offline! Haha, I thought they were important supporting characters, but now half of them are gone. These supporting characters are just thrown away. 🤭

The female lead's personality is quite good, but there's too much drama and worldly concerns, and the pacing is too slow.

I hope my sister can continue on this journey with me. Even if we can't ascend together, I hope we can cultivate together.