Deep Secret Realm

The writing style is okay, the plot is not familiar, the text seems to be graphic, and the image of the male protagonist is vivid, which seems quite interesting. Come on, try not to stop updating, I believe the results will come up after signing the contract. Um, I'm saving it, it's best to update it as soon as possible.

Well written, keep up the good work

It's artistic, the writing is unconventional, and it's beautiful!

The writing is attractive and interesting, and attracts readers to read step by step, allowing readers to gradually understand the world (in the book) and understand Lu Yuan's deeds. The content is also unique and very good. As long as you continue to work hard, you will definitely be able to reach a higher level. Good luck.

My favorite type, don't let us rush you to update it, otherwise, just keep it.

The suspenseful atmosphere in the early stage is very well rendered, and the writing is not bad. You can narrate the plot flow. I would like to give you a small suggestion, which is to integrate the settings into the plot as much as possible. Although it is clearer to write them separately, if written in the plot, it will easily arouse the interest of readers.

I have finished reading it all. I personally like the character of the male protagonist. I hope he speaks less words. It would be better if he is cute and contrasts with his childish actions. I usually don't read the setting carefully. I just need to have a general understanding to understand the text. After reading the whole article, I don't feel very afraid of this hole. If the male protagonist grows up, should I describe the tension at the bottom of the hole again? That's all. My personal opinion is for reference only. It may be a bit one-sided, but it's really good. I'll give you the only recommendation vote, and you can't save it anyway.

The environment and background descriptions are very good. How can I put it, there could be more advanced vocabulary, idioms and so on The subject matter should be a bit like netizens and swallowing the stars, and it is also very novel I personally think that there could be more background descriptions in the front, or side descriptions to highlight it. I feel that the explanation is too fast, and the appetite in the front is not enough.

The previous setting is indeed too long, and it suddenly becomes too much like a game novel. And according to the settings, visitors can jump back to the levels they have passed and gain survival time. Then time can also be traded, which in disguise removes the tension of the protagonist's limited time survival. Fortunately, there is a restriction that the identity cannot be discovered. But this makes me think that the name of the tourist has nothing to do with these abilities. I hope it can be shown later.

By the way, all the identity abilities are given here. Of course, there will also be hints in the text later, but they are simply given here. You can read them or not. [Goodwill Ambassador: 1. It has a close effect on the indigenous people in the cave. It must be recorded so that the indigenous people can help you. 2. You can make a contract with the aboriginal people, and the aboriginal people will be able to leave their own level] ＊ [The doctor: 1. Has the ability to heal, and the ability increases with the decrease of the layer] ＊ [The engineer: 1. Can analyze weapons and create weapons 2. Collect, store and size items 3. The engineer is in a neutral state and cannot attack] * [Businessman: 1. Can convert time It is a physical "time coin" 2. The merchant's initial time is 7 days 3. The merchant is in a neutral state and cannot be attacked] * [Warrior: 1. Strength and physical strength increase as the number of layers decreases 2. Has an initial bound weapon] ＊ [Guide: 1. You can create animals to become your own eyes 2. The speed increases as the number of layers decreases, and you can create clones] ＊ [Tube Administrator 1. Incapable before the 108th floor 2. After reaching the 108th floor, you will gain the management rights and self-selected identity of a world 3. In your own management area, the time flow will stop] ＊ [Werewolf: 1. It can store its normal power in the body and explode at critical moments. The power it explodes can kill people beyond its authority 2. A naturally born werewolf can initially gain control of an element, and the degree of mastery increases with the level. Added] ＊ [Thief: 1. Has the ability to steal time and convert time into time coins 2. The thief has the ability to imitate, which will be released when meeting the real person 3. The thief's identity is revealed and time returns 0] ＊ [Acrobat: 1. Can jump into the cave level, and the jumping ability increases as the level decreases 2. Can displace body parts - simulated objects, and the difficulty of simulation increases as the level decreases]

Basic identity: The top ten most common identities are distributed among those who go down the hole before the 108th floor, accounting for 99.9%. They mostly serve as assistants to accompany the growth of those who go down the hole. Mutant Identity: Obtained on the -108th floor, a new identity is formed by merging the original identity and the self-selected identity. The mutated identity has weird abilities. Due to its huge energy, the fusion may fail. It accounts for 71.6% Of the identities of the deep cavers. It is strange and changeable, and is mostly the dominant position in battles. Advanced identity: Obtained on -108th floor, advanced from the original identity, the strength has been greatly improved, the ability is single, but the power is extremely powerful, accounting for 28.4% Of the deep cave identity, most of them are warriors. Rare identity: Unlocked (Representatives: Elemental Guard, War Officer, Creator...)

The environment and writing are well described, and some of the quotations are being considered and polished. I hope you will become a god in one battle! Come on!

The writing is okay, and the reading is still very good, but I feel that if the title of the book is changed, it will definitely become popular!

The Mid-Autumn Festival is coming, I wish you a sweet heart and a happy Mid-Autumn Festival!

You, I can't envy you the layout, I can't envy the writing style, I can't envy the dialogue frame, everything you write is to my taste.

All in all, I will definitely vote for you when I can vote! ! !

Come on, come on＾0＾~Received