Bandit Officer

Dear readers, please be cautious when investing in this book! Because the author is in school, he cannot guarantee stable updates. He is a man of integrity and we cannot deceive others Of course! If you really want to invest, I would like to thank you! (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴

Come on

Well written, keep up the good work😊 and learn from you

Definitely collected it! There is just too little content! Please update more! Come on! Welcome to visit us and give us advice!

I want to save the manuscript quietly and then make a big splash! ＼（￣￣）／

Comment: There are too many words and too few words, and punctuation marks are not used accurately, such as missing colons and missing sentences at the end of paragraphs. The sentence unfolds from school, and the layout feels a bit small, limiting the scope of readers. The beginning is a bit mediocre. Can the climax chapter be moved to the first chapter? The protagonist's appearance is a bit bland. Is it possible to set up a scene where the protagonist is at the scene of a battle between superpowers and escapes death? Being hunted? Etc. Personal advice, don't blame me if it's inappropriate.

Superpowers are pretty good, come on.

Received, please do your best＾0＾~

There are so many posts, I only have four.

It is well written and makes people want to read it.

Come on, look forward to your follow-up

Very interesting settings and brush strokes, but maybe it's because I have obsessive-compulsive disorder. I always feel that the punctuation looks a bit uncomfortable.

Are they related to each other? Already collected

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~