The Apprentice Grim Reaper of Detective Conan

Kneeling in reality... A scream echoed in the art museum, and from then on, the protagonist and effeminate man became synonymous.

Your character development isn't very likable, especially the part at the beginning where he signs the contract with Kogoro. Fanfiction readers tend to prefer protagonists with more distinct personalities.

I'll say something, please don't take offense, but I've been skipping chapters and just skimming through each page of this dozens of chapters. The plot isn't engaging. Keep it up! I forgot why my last book was okay, but now that the plot is basically the same as the original, I have no desire to continue reading.

It's Haibara Haibara again! Eight out of ten Detective Conan fanfics feature her as the female lead. I just can't take it anymore. 😭

The protagonist's character... I've looked at dozens of chapters and still can't understand why he would go to the Mori tribe to work for free without food or lodging. It's so frustrating, I can't bear to watch anymore...

The writing style in my last book was a bit too plain; let's see if the new book is any better.

Did the author have an outline this time? The plot is moving too fast; the protagonist has already surpassed Kyogoku in just 550,000 words. There's not much room for the protagonist to grow later. Perhaps the author hasn't read enough of Detective Conan and Magic Kaito, lacking descriptions of daily life and ordinary cases. The main plot progresses too quickly, often leading to a rushed ending.

The plot feels contrived and unreliable in some places, almost as if it's forced to fit the storyline. Some character traits also feel inconsistent.

Oh, so you've raised it to the point where it's ready to be sold?

Author, when will Ai Haibara finally appear?