Liaozhai Guishen Inn

What a great novel. It has the flavor of ghosts, gods and strangers like Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio. If this book were placed in the fairy tale or fantasy category, the results should be much better than it is now. But as long as you persist, this book will definitely become popular.

Is the protagonist Conan? One person dies in one episode, and you do one thing this episode. . Is it too urgent? Slow down. . . It's so frustrating to watch. .

This book is quite good. The writing method of fantasy novels is originally to describe people and ghosts, and there are also police and stories. It is recommended not to write in the direction of an upgrade stream. It is enough for the protagonist to be one of the important participants and important organizers in rebuilding order, and it is more story-telling. Lead a group of living partners, do something righteous and successful, and then return to being a living person.

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Author, get up soon and update. If the protagonist can maintain his character, his three views must be correct. Come vote, vote, and I will help the author canvass votes.

How did you get such an updated book recommended?

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The main character is too useless and should be unhappy, dragging on and on, and the emotional scenes are also a mess.

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Shown back in the 1980s. However, I would like to remind the author that this is the starting point of online writing, so don't write high and let yourself go. Secondly, don't engage in such things as "the people are easy to abuse, but God is hard to bully", karma and retribution, and God's impartiality in the dark. Reality can be magical, but fiction must be logical. There are not so many coincidences, but the inevitability of "killing people to pay their lives, and paying their debts to pay their money".

Ah, here, the best thing in Liaozhai is Cthulhu, and the whole letters describe whispers, and Nuwa also made it up... I don't know what to say, the beginning is good, but what is this later, I can't accept it.

You have to be persistent when writing novels, and don't fantasize about becoming an instant hit. Those are rare cases, so you need to practice more.

It's not interesting. I feel that this land is of no use. It's okay for mortals to urinate and cover your eyes. You can also say that you are different from immortals or not to interfere in the affairs of the world. But you don't even know that the mink ran next to you and killed someone. Even though the person was rescued, you don't even know if the demon entered your land next to the person. What kind of land do you do?

The writing is good, but the IQ of the male protagonist should be mentioned. Moreover, the male protagonist is too happy-go-lucky. He does not work hard to cultivate or cultivate a relationship with Liu Ruyi. He has no ambition at all. Could it be that he only knows how to meddle in other people's business and fight landlords, and nothing else. Please let the author make the male protagonist a little more motivated.

I've been reading the beginning for so long, and it's okay at the beginning, but you keep tugging at the text, looking at it, and you don't know. Some places are incomprehensible, and some paragraphs need to be read several times, otherwise you don't understand why

This book has been updated since I first started using the Qidian platform, and it is still being updated now. Diamonds are forever, and a diamond will last forever. This book is like a diamond that can be updated for a lifetime.

I just want to say that the style of this book is obviously a Cthulhu novel disguised as a fairy tale, but it is full of a sense of powerlessness, there are many villains, the protagonist is incompetent, and the full sense of powerlessness is really unreadable. No wonder it has to be updated!

The water-avoiding beads are a treasure for dividing water, not a treasure for storing water. How can we save the white dragon? There is no mention in the book that the pearl can be used to fill the sea. If the dragon can be saved without water, why not pay the pearl in advance?

The main storyline was so confusing to me that I couldn't understand it.

Two monthly passes, I don't know if there is a monthly pass sprint for the lower month

As a modern person, you are a bit old-fashioned in your thinking. No matter how you read the books given by others, they are just bait.

An ordinary person finally becomes a strong person in a self-motivated online article. No matter how hard an ordinary person counterattacks, he cannot become a national leader. Those who can become a strong person are not ordinary. The protagonist in the author's writing is just an ordinary person, and the upper limit is there.

Very pretty. It was a bit awkward to watch at first, there were no major plot points, and some parts were inexplicably poorly explained. It's much more exciting later on. The protagonist is regarded as a factor that connects the story, more like a group portrait novel. Several characters are well portrayed. There are a lot of typos, and they have been pointed out in several comment areas. Please fix them when you have time.