Start as the Overlord of the Old Ones

I vomited. Who is the protagonist? Piggy?

The author made the protagonist so stupid. It turns out that there are small details. After all, the protagonist is a blind, stupid and funny god 😏. 🤫 After all, other characters are normal, but once the protagonist is written, they become abnormal. Is the author here? I said this, right? Help me support it, thank you. 😏😏😏

To be honest, everything else is fine, but the main character stretches his hips too much. When I see it, I want to jump over to it 🔨🔨 Even if there is no B square, it's all kinds of awkward. I can't stand it.

If you don't tell me, I would have thought the protagonist was Alice... The protagonist has only appeared a few times. Good guy Alice is also planning to give her body to the God of Death? Forgive me for not seeing this development clearly.

This... Is simply a strange character plot design. I don't even know who you are portraying, author. When I read novels, I always introduce the protagonist. Now, I am fascinated by the supporting characters, but when the protagonist appears, I feel alienated... I recommend a book where the protagonist is from the past. He also issues swords, but the swords are all sent to the villain and the supporting characters directly related to the protagonist are usually fine and then muddy the waters. The perspective is always on the protagonist, allowing him to advance. Although the general direction is that the people behind the scenes set traps, he opens the trumpet himself to step on the traps and force the supporting characters to follow his rhythm.

Exactly the same

This book is really bad. I was addicted to it and I actually vomited at chapter 14. I really can't accept it. The character creation is like boiled water and the plot is hollow. I really don't understand what the purpose of this little girl is. They created such a bad character. They just lost their mother and they became happy in less than two chapters. Your setting is originally full of despair. You should reduce the background of this girl to a microcosm of a big era. . What you wrote has made it so that little girls are now wearing it! This novel is just gone. It really should be discontinued. If these genres were really popular, they would only be popular after hundreds of thousands of words. It would be meaningless if you stick to it now.

Alice is doing her own thing The bear is sacrificing Humanity is struggling to survive The evil thing is hacking Where is the protagonist? The protagonist is in Shenyin

The strongest thing about this novel is that it makes the readers not have any favorable impression of the protagonist at all. 😅But it's still pretty good-looking, and the other characters are well described. You can take a look, just ignore the main character.

I only see one loser, no loser who is at least sane.

When writing this kind of novel, you should play behind the scenes, and the protagonist should not find a girlfriend 😒 It is best to be single overall.

As a sealed evil god, it seems that the protagonist can only do things secretly, slowly seeping his power out of the seal, spreading his power in the world, supporting his own puppets, and spreading corruption. Why is he so familiar? It's me, Enzos!

This kind of protagonist has almost no sense of existence, which is quite difficult to write. Come on, author. It would be best if the protagonist has no sense of existence at all. Alice is the protagonist now, so let the loser protagonist remain invisible 😏. Love Alice, cute and beautiful, is the protagonist 😃

Why are they all criticizing the protagonist... Isn't this book just the behind-the-scenes flow, mixed with a little bit of the creation flow? The highlight is the story of the supporting character, the development of civilization, the protagonist's influence on the world... It's normal for a supporting character to die... For this genre, it is a failure to use a supporting character until the end... But as the author wrote, the protagonist's impact on the world is really too little...

Really frustrating, what is your main line? What is the protagonist doing? Don't tell me, after ordinary people travel through time, they become the old days compared to Lilliput. Do you know what the old days are? From a mortal body to an old thing in terms of concepts and rules? Are you kidding me? Still sealed? Are you kidding me?

According to the introduction, believers should try their best to release the Old Ones.

In this way, the author described some supporting characters in the early stage, foreshadowed the plot, and set the background very well. But in the back it was a mess. First of all, it negates a grand world view, and then it writes down the well-described characters, and wonders whether it will be able to describe new good characters later. This is fatal. And the most deadly thing is the protagonist. . . . . . I don't want to describe it too much, the front is fine, but the back is fine. . . .

Heart-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)

Looking for something good! But that's not a digression!

What did you write? I feel like the main character has been abused.

This is a dark and twisted world, with no worldview or anything like that. I have never designed or cared about it. Let me state this first. When reading this novel, you can understand that when the world is a madman, will you be a madman or a normal person? There is no leveling up to defeat monsters, just the boss making a fool of himself. When I designed the outline, I just ensured that the power system would not collapse. Actually, I have already revised the outline once. The original outline showed that Alice would not die so quickly, and would experience the ugliness of human nature, the betrayal of friendship, and the unfeeling love of relatives. But when I wrote the first part, it felt too dark. There was no need to convey negative energy. In addition, the unanimous appeal for Alice's appearance rate was too high, which made people doubt who was the protagonist, so I accelerated the progress. Moreover, the nine-series seal was originally designed to require the sacrifice of nine people, and Alice was one of them. That was my original outline. I felt that the seal was probably the roughest part of my writing. It directly caused the protagonist to violently break the seal. There was nothing I could do, because I changed the outline and gave it a knife.

Alas, the protagonist has no role and is boring 😒

In the latest chapter, it feels like the curtain is beginning to open. The grand show is about to begin.

Post a post here and ask a question, or the author can reply to readers and answer, what kind of beauties does the protagonist think about dancing every day or what kind of things does Heng Heng do in his dreams? Anyway, I don't want to talk about it, I just want to ask him if he can get out. Has the seal been broken? 🤔Asking for answers (cute emoticons)

I can't stand it anymore, the main character is just sleeping, oh my god

It's really frustrating to watch. When the protagonist escapes from the Dam continent, a low-dimensional can actually seal the protagonist. It's nonsense, and it can absorb the protagonist's power. Isn't Gao Wei's information omnipotent? Can't it just let the protagonist escape from trouble? It's nonsense to use the high-latitude extractor. Haven't you seen the 100,000 bad jokes?

Where did my second update go 🥺

I feel like I've watched a lot, so I'd like to reward you a little bit.

Crying, author, not only am I fascinated by this book, I can't live without it. I won't give up until you are responsible for updating 10,000 chapters for me. I don't care, so I'll update it as soon as possible.

What is finished? Why did it happen so suddenly?