My Immortal Domain Connects to the Myriad Worlds

I'm sick of time-traveling in Jin Yong's novels!! Isn't an original world better?

This kind of writing is best done in original worlds. I'm sick of writing Jin Yong-style worlds; it's really discouraging. That's all I have to say. This is just advice; take it or leave it.

It's exhausting to read. There are already over a hundred chapters for "The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber," and how many chapters would it take to project it across countless worlds? Will I ever be able to finish it in my lifetime?

After reading the first three chapters, I felt the premise was really good. But when I read "Heavenly Sword and Dragon Sabre," I was like, "Wow, why even write this stuff?" 😅

It's okay if it starts strong but ends weak, as long as it's well-written. But after reading more than ten chapters of Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber, it's really padded. There are long sections of Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber plot, and the descriptions of the protagonist are very boring, with all sorts of exclamation marks.

Among the various schools of thought, I feel that writing about Jin Yong is fine. After all, the audience is vast! The problem is that it wasn't written well! ---- First, we must recognize that Old Cha's worldview is problematic! He was initially anti-government. Otherwise, would he have been aligned with Nie Rongzhen? He simply changed his stance later. ---- This speaks volumes, doesn't it?

When reading these kinds of short stories, you must first check the table of contents 😅

This is poorly written; a classic case of starting strong but ending weak.

Personally, I feel that I've only read a little bit of the beginning of this book, but there are already a lot of flaws, especially in the first few chapters. The author is writing about immortals here, so a problem is obvious: immortals value life, and incense and faith are of no use to immortal practitioners. On the contrary, they are a burden because they involve too much karma.

It looks so awkward. Gods need incense offerings, while immortals should be blessed with good fortune. Just recruit the main characters and supporting characters from smaller worlds. With this current setup, what's the difference between the Immortal Alliance and the Western God Alliance?