My Immortal Domain Connects to the Myriad Worlds

I'm sick of reading Jin Yong's time travel novel! ! Isn't the original world delicious? ? ?

It's best to write about this kind of original world, and there are also Jin Yong type worlds to write about. I really want to persuade you to give up. I'll stop here. I can only give you suggestions. It's up to you whether you want to or not.

I'm so tired from reading. There are more than a hundred chapters for Yitianshui. How many chapters should I write for Projection of All Heavens and Worlds? Can you finish it in your lifetime?

After reading the first 3 chapters, I feel that the setting is really good. When I see Yitian, I immediately feel like a good guy. Why are you writing this 😅

It doesn't matter if you drive high and low, just write it well, but after reading more than ten chapters of Yitian, it is really watery, and there is a long story of Yitian, and the description of the protagonist is still very boring. There are various exclamation points, and the focus is always on describing the protagonist's immortal temperament, but in fact, as written, it gives people the feeling of a juggler performing a chest-breaking performance.

In Zhutianliu, I have no problem writing about Jin Yong. After all, the audience is huge! The problem is that it was not written well!----First of all, we must realize that there is a problem with Lao Cha's world view! He was also anti-g at the beginning. Otherwise, can we do it together with Ni Kuang? Later, I just took advantage of the situation. ----This explains the problem very much. Secondly, we have to keep pace with the times, right? Back then, when Lao Cha's books were popular, the quality of readers was still low. Mainly middle school students. Nowadays, middle school students are busier than scientists! Times have changed. Even for online articles, everyone's requirements are quite high. Third, what Lao Cha has always been obsessed with is that he wants to go to Peking University and Zhejiang University to get a history degree. Why didn't it succeed in the end? Obviously, his level is not good enough. Therefore, Lao Cha's book is far, far away from the word "rigorous" (either in terms of structure or system). For example, as far as I am concerned, no matter how you wash it in "Yitian", that Zhao Min should die! There are various reasons, such as age, beauty, and different stances (the most damning one is "national integration"). Never watch it.

When watching this kind of videos, you must read the catalog first 😅

The writing is too poor, typical of opening high and going low

Personally, I just read the beginning of this book, but it has a lot of flaws, just the problems I found in the first few chapters. The author here writes about immortals, so it is obvious that a problem arises. The belief in immortality and incense is of no use to practitioners of immortality. Instead, it is a burden because there are too many causes and effects mixed in. When I first read this book, I was a little surprised. After all, there are quite a lot of articles about farming and cultivating gods in the divine space recently, but there is basically not much about cultivating immortals to open up blessed lands and caves, and then evolve into the world. As for the author's book, it is obviously the divine realm of practitioners dressed in immortal jade. Human beings are exactly the same. If they even insist on changing it, they would change the divine power to immortal energy or something, and add an infinite stream, or a heavenly stream. So I said goodbye.

It looks so awkward, gods want incense, and immortals should bring luck. It would be nice to just accept the main characters and supporting characters in the small world. Now in this setting, what is the difference between the Immortal Alliance and the Western Divine Alliance?