Start with Deadly Black Orchid

It's really just for the sake of the plot. The protagonist talks about various dangers and shouldn't rely on them. The author uses all kinds of blunt excuses to lure the protagonist into the plot. It's not a task issued by the system. Participating in the plot will do you no good. Why should you participate in dangers? Isn't it because you are the protagonist and can't die?

Go back and finish updating Transformers, quickly! 🙂

1. There is too much nonsense in the first chapter. If you have traveled through time, don't bother writing about scenes from your past life. Readers don't care. 2. Chinese people... Chinese people have no problem, but this is a European and American movie. Why don't you give the protagonist a European and American name? A semi-European and American name is also fine, (Mark Lee), just like the protagonist in ancient Chinese novels is named (John F. Kennedy)? ? ? Why use European and American names? They are all European and American names. It's so awkward that you only have a Chinese name. I really don't understand what everyone who writes American dramas is afraid of now. In fact, it's best to be fair-skinned when writing about foreign time travel. If not, then mixed-race, and then Chinese-American. You have traveled to the United States to become third- and fourth-generation immigrants. You are already an American. Why do you care about your skin? ❤️[As long as the protagonist travels through the past and his heart is red, he will always be a Chinese dragon]👍. Excessively highlighting the Chinese identity will only be a loophole. 3. The golden finger is too long... And it appears very abruptly, and the writing style does not match it. Why don't you use a farming system for your gun battle story? I haven't read a few chapters... You have brought out all my poisonous spots...

In Vengeance, the protagonist is ready to fight a gangster for 30,000 US dollars. What are you after? Are you after his chick body? Or is it just to add to the plot? The income is not directly proportional to the danger. I don't understand where your brain is.

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away, forget about the few updates, and it's still out of stock! ? It's been so long since I've been completing an eight-legged monster dungeon mission, and I've been looking forward to it for nothing.

Stop writing and find a job in a factory.

Why do you keep recommending such a bad book to me? ! It is recommended that Qidian add a "blacklist" function, sorry!

This book has serious logic bugs. The protagonist Goldfinger is a space farm. There is no benefit in participating in the plot. Normal people should avoid horror monster movie plots when they see them. It's not like you can level up by killing monsters. The logic bug is too serious.

The roots suddenly started to cut off three months ago. What happened to the author?

Stop working in this studio. If you can't write, just find a job in a factory.

The conflict between the three views of the character's personality is too serious. It's impossible to attract readers by trying to climb the wall on both sides. Either he takes the route of a bad good guy who wants to take revenge, or the hero is more selfish. He wants to be a good guy at one moment, but seems cold and unkind at the other moment, and loves money and sex but even black orchid. Don't do it either. One moment, he even said he didn't like the person he wanted to stay when he came to adulthood. There was no stable personality at all. In addition, he was confused about how to deal with the social network of the original person after the time travel. One moment he was afraid of trouble, and the next moment he would stick to the past. He didn't know which personality was the main character.

Why not update Transformers, which is arguably the best Transformers novel on the market right now.

Brother, what's going on? Please tell me clearly what's going on! Don't be silent!

He talks about cherishing his life while seeking death in various ways

I won't even come back to say anything when I open a new book! Are you worthy of us?

What does the protagonist lack? Firepower, firepower, it's so hard to hit a deformed person with firepower. There is a serious lack of firepower. The protagonist should go to the Middle East where the international arms market is active. RPG, anti-infantry mines, anti-armor mines, broadswords, individual anti-aircraft missiles, anti-aircraft missiles, etc. I have bought tank missiles, recoilless cannons, heavy machine guns, mortars, flamethrowers, and rocket launchers. For weapons that cannot be hand-held, such as heavy machine guns and Gatlings, you can buy a tracked machine such as a small excavator or something to transform it. , It has a lot of ammunition and can be equipped with steel plate bulletproof. When needed, it can be opened directly and then retracted when it is not needed. When the time comes, it doesn't matter what the deformity is, it can be directly divided into two sections. Even if it can't be bought or cannot be bought, it can be stolen. It would be great if you can get a self-propelled artillery or something. Well, today's artillery has a range of generally 50 kilometers and a lethality of 100 meters in diameter. What's more, it can also load automatically. If it encounters a malformation, it will immediately clear the arsenal and blow up everything in the arsenal. Who knows what is missing┐(─__─)┌

There is no main line, it is just a collection of various plots. There is no goal or direction, and it is not interesting at all.

The protagonist is still a small private detective. Others can spend tens of thousands to get the male protagonist who has taken NT-48 to complete the task. Author, private detective is just an identity. Its function is only to allow the male protagonist in the early stage to have access to the plot of the movie. Why does the male protagonist need to do other people's commissions now? Wouldn't it be better to be a rich man who travels around and get in touch with beautiful women and dramas? Can you imagine that the never-ending male protagonist takes the medicine and instead of using it to make a lot of money for eating, drinking and having fun, he stays at home and writes novels to make money to pay the rent? The protagonist now has Goldfinger and NT-48, and with such a good template, why is he still a private detective, armed with several guns to fight against abnormal copies of alien monsters and eight-legged monsters?

It's too difficult to read your book when both of you are in the palace.

It was already three years ago. Pay attention to rest and take care of yourself. 😊