I'm Digging Treasure Chests in Konoha

Did you feel any killing intent after being hit by Tsunade? So what if it indirectly causes the death of the rope tree? And Tsunade just let Tsunade drag her away with her sword and she didn't even think about getting it back? What kind of garbage protagonist?

Even though it can cool down, it basically won't ignite. I see that your skill cools down in 8 seconds, and others can kill you 8 times in 8 seconds, not to mention that according to Hokage Buki's point of view: ninjas all travel at the speed of light. It can kill you 8,000 times in 8 seconds.

The writing is great, but it's hard to watch. I don't know what the protagonist wants to do. He has no family, no friends, no obsession, no ideals, and he has no nostalgia for Konoha. In this case, why are you still staying in Konoha? Hatching chicks? I don't even know what's the point of pretending to be a grandson several times.

A bad batch. Now I can't understand what the main character is doing. Are you going to be a dog for the Third Generation and Danzo? It was amazing to write this book. After all, he is an Uchiha and has a system. Is it that wasteful? At first I thought the subject matter was good, but the more I read, the more useless it becomes. Nausea.

I've read about 10 chapters and summarized it. The protagonist has done nothing and has done nothing. Since he has traveled through time and is still worried about whether it will ruin the plot, the protagonist's only role is to promote the original plot. It looks awkward. The protagonist seems to have never practiced and just relies on adding points to open treasure chests. The introduction says that treasure chests will grow in all directions, but in the end they all grow on the heads of the characters in the plot. It is just like other treasure chest stories. There is nothing new. Also, the apprenticeship is too stiff and the fighting has no sense of graphics. If the treasure chest didn't grow on the head of the plot character, it would still be interesting, but the setting is not enough.

The author's protagonist's abilities are mixed with a hammer and a stick. He started to practice ninjutsu for a while, but after failing to master it, he practiced guns and carried swords, which was not very good... Then he upgraded his Sharingan, and then he became blind again. Author, do you find it interesting to toss the protagonist back and forth?

Why do every fanfic about Naruto have to be tolerated? Can't you learn CKL without being a ninja? Not to mention those who are reborn as commoners, but also those who have a family? Why? You can't live with your elders and study there, and don't go to a ninja school! I'm very confused!

You can develop a general direction of development For example [Traditional Ninja] with ninjutsu as the main part and taijutsu as the supplement; Auxiliary, imitate Aizen's Kyoka Suigetsu, and engage in weird style martial arts; A weapon master who mainly uses equipment and ninja illusions as a supplement; In short, the ability must have a framework and main line, otherwise it will look very messy and affect the reading experience

Let's not talk about other things. Overall, it is not cool enough. He is threatened and taken advantage of at every turn. The protagonist seems to be enjoying it. He is chopped once, twice. There is no one in Goldfinger who is so miserable.

There are so many different skills and weapons, it's so confusing, and there is no main line!

I don't know why so many people criticize me. I think it's well written. Maybe it's because there are a thousand Hamlets among a thousand people

A bold idea. If the author uses a lot of props from Tencent games, will he be sued by Tencent? (゜ロ゜)"

The biggest poisonous point is that the skill has a CD, which is already doomed to always be a weak one. In front of opponents who have refined their speed. No power to fight back

Open a new book early

The props in Tencent are a failure

I have read the latest chapter. It can be said that I am getting better and better. I have written a very interesting and fun world of Naruto. I plan to keep this book for a lifetime. Come on! You are the best. If you update more, your fans will not let you down. Vote for submission

Has the author changed the book so that it is inconsistent?

The author can write about the behind-the-scenes stories of the vest, invincible writing

Typos, few words, too many words. Seriously, 6 times in one chapter.

What does it matter to you?

I couldn't understand it when I wrote "Holy Grail", and it was very short and didn't explain anything. I felt like I just wrote a few chapters on a whim, and it was done hastily.