Konoha: Madara's Image Is Completely Ruined

Wouldn't it be cool if Madara himself traveled through the past and changed his ending? What's the use of a time traveler other than knowing the plot? We have to have a time traveler dress up as Madara

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Tobirama

There is a difference between a sand sculpture and a fool, so grasp it carefully. There are many people who want to write nonsense but end up being stupid.

Banye

After watching it, to be honest, everything else was fine except for the emotional scenes, which were poorly written. An original plot character appears inexplicably. The protagonist falls in love at first sight for no apparent reason. He likes her so much that he dreams of getting married and living a life of respect and respect. Where is the other party! It doesn't matter who you marry, as long as you have status and strength and are suitable as a marriage partner. That's not to say that you can't write emotional dramas, but the way it is written makes people feel like they are licking dogs, which makes them very sad to watch. Especially when Mito Uzumaki appeared later, the emotional scene was even worse for the senses. With a perfect score of 100, this book would have scored 70, which is above the standard. It is necessary to pursue it. In addition, the lousy emotional drama will deduct at least 20 points, leaving only 50 points. It is an unqualified product and is only suitable for reading when there is really no book to read. The above is my personal reading experience. A thousand readers are like a thousand Hamlets. I am just explaining where my readers feel uncomfortable, without forcing their approval.

Second generation, yyds

Everyone remember to reward more! It's rare that a good book comes out at a time when Naruto fandom is in total decline! Don't feed yourself to death

Please add more... One chapter a day is not enough 😭

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silly

It always feels like reading a beautiful article in Qidian. The most important thing is that there is no sense of violation, everything seems to fall into place. It's like the relationship between the two is building up little by little, without the feeling of falling in love all of a sudden, nor the kind of forcibly giving the heroine wisdom to make her like the hero (although comparing Madara to the heroine is a bit fucked up, but that's what it means). . . Of course, it could also be that I am jealous of others.

There is another setting that causes misunderstandings in anime every time. It is Jiraiya's family of ninjas. The Myoboku Mountain scroll is passed down from his family. Don't talk about toad conspiracy theories

I have read seventy chapters. The subject matter and setting are quite attractive to me originally, but what is the character of this protagonist? He is willful and does things casually. He hides and behaves like a turtle when he does something wrong. He has no responsibility. The protagonist's handling of Mito's affairs feels like he does not treat her as a human being, but as an object. When something happened at Ichiraku's house, he still thought it didn't matter, so he just wanted to take Ichiraku to Konoha just to eat ramen? His father is about to die, his family is ruined, and the protagonist just wants to eat his ramen? Ichiraku's father was described like a fool. His life and that of so many villagers could be indifferent.

Uchiha Ma

My best looking one

How come the author likes to write, the protagonist takes the girl with him in everything he does, does it feel good to hold the girl while fighting? Is this a romance novel, or have I watched too many Chinese TV series? Hey... Where can I find normal novels?

I feel like Tobirama is so weak now. Has he not signed a contract with the sea yet?

Waiting for the update, hurry up and sign the contract. Once it is released, as long as there are no poisonous points, I will definitely order it all.

I feel like the author is a fanfic written by someone who read the fanfic

Magic! (⌯︎¤̴̶̷̀ω¤̴̶̷́)✧︎!

I recommend a very good book next door. I, Madara Uchiha, don't dance easily.

Author, A-Zhen has become a god. I want to see how you want to write it down. If you can still edit it, I will give you a thumbs up.

Author, you'd better update twice a day. One update a day will kill you. Evolve quickly.

No more? ! You've made me lose my faith! ! ! !

Chapter 217: Funny, Hashirama's granddaughter turned into a daughter in an instant

It's very beautiful. Keep it first and don't go into the palace.

Azhen is not going to be the heroine, right? The last few pictures look weird 😄 Azhen has lost the memory of her previous life and only remembers Ban. Ban also went to Azhen's memory, from Huo He to the information that wanted to match them 😄 Did Ban treat Azhen as a girl?

What about the extra story? What about the extra story that we promised?

It seems that the results were not good so it was unfinished!