It Began When I Became a Ghost Reaper

😅This is written too deliberately. The protagonist is a ghost messenger. There are things that can be solved once and for all and you can even get ghost merit points, but you deliberately ignore them. And it's not just once or twice. I've read about forty chapters. Several times you deliberately ignore them and don't solve them.

What a waste! This is such a great subject matter, and it's written so haphazardly. Couldn't you have made the character more distinct? Is he cowardly or brave? You've turned him into an idiot. His reaction when he gets double-crossed is just awful. Is he stupid or what? Ughhhhhh, why are you torturing me like this?

Is this the legendary impotent rage? He said he'd kill the female ghost, but chickened out halfway through? Did his penis fall out? Did it go limp?

The story gradually deviates from its title and theme. The descriptions of ghosts and gods are vague and lack detail. Aside from invisibility, the fighting in the ghost and god state consists mainly of sword strikes and energy releases, with no real details, resulting in fragmented combat! When the focus shifts to human martial arts, it's filled with descriptions of martial arts at length.

I feel the protagonist's goals are unclear. Wouldn't it be better to focus on developing one skill? Why does he have to climb to improve his martial arts? He's supposed to be a demon or god, so this whole thing makes it unclear what kind of person he is.

What a waste of such a good subject matter! I can't continue reading. Here are some suggestions; I hope the author will keep trying. First, you might as well just write a system flow; that's completely different from a description. Secondly, the plot you wrote takes so long to build up in just one city, and many parts feel stiff or rushed when you put them together.

The protagonist encounters only women, constantly being approached by them. A female doctor who's studied abroad, the heiress of the Jia family. I'm speechless.

Ugh, I was looking for a good book during my reading slump, but then I died right at the beginning. You think you're something special after sleeping with a female ghost? You get worked up and become a ghost, and you can't even beat a female ghost? And what about the cheat system? A newbie gift pack would have been enough!

So what if they're ghosts and gods? Why go and cultivate martial arts? Wouldn't it be better to level up quickly, lead your ghost minions, rebuild the order of the underworld, and meet with the authorities? Is it going to lead to human cultivation later?

A Frankenstein's monster, I've read 100 chapters, and it plagiarized three novels: Here's a Demonic Stories, Ghost Blows Out the Light, starting from the mastery of fist techniques.