It Began When I Became a Ghost Reaper

😅 The writing is too deliberate. The protagonist is a sinner. It is obvious that he can get rid of things once and for all and get moral points, but he deliberately ignores it, and not just once or twice. I have read more than forty chapters and deliberately ignored it several times without solving it. In the end, it is all troubles that I can't let go. Once or twice is nothing. The problem is that you do it again and again. Aren't you disgusting?

What a waste, this subject matter is so good, but the writing is sparse, and the character cannot be clear, whether he is cowardly or brave, you have written him as an idiot. When someone is being insulted, just that reaction, you say whether he is stupid or stupid, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why are you torturing me like this.

Is this the legendary incompetent rage? ? ? ? You talk about female killers, but you give up halfway? Chicken bar dropped? Withered?

It gradually deviates from the title and theme of the book. The length and setting of the ghosts and gods are not detailed. In addition to being invisible, the fights between ghosts and gods are all about slashing and energy release. The details are not included, and the battles are sparse! Now that I have switched to personal martial arts, I just write about martial arts in various ways. The article is quite long. I don't know if your martial arts in the later stage will have any bonus to the state of ghosts and gods? It is obvious that he is more powerful in the ghost state, but the extra points are all martial arts, which is quite incomprehensible. Also, the heart is gone at the beginning, but it can still supply blood, carry blood, and carry qi and blood to practice martial arts. How to fill this hole? According to the system, it is to keep you alive but not completely dead. You can change martial arts and secret martial arts into ghost and god skills. It is nothing more than a different use of energy conversion!

I feel like the main character's goal is not very clear. Isn't it good to just level up? Why do you still have to climb up to martial arts? I am a ghost and god, so I don't know what it's like to do this.

It's a waste of a good subject, I can't stand it any longer. I would like to give you some suggestions, and I hope the author can work harder. First, you can just write the system flow. This is completely different from the introduction. Secondly, the plot you wrote took so long to be laid out in just one city. Many of them are very stiff or too hard to put together. It feels like you suddenly thought of adding drama to the protagonist. Third, now that you have planned to be exposed, and people from the country come to your door, you actually resist. If you don't want to join, then just do it secretly, or if you want to take advantage of it, you can also try to join, and you can still mock them after the fight.

The events the protagonist encounters are all involving women, and they are approached in various ways. Turtle female doctor, the daughter of the Jia family. I'm done, I'm done

Hey, I originally thought I had found a good book in Shuhuang, but as soon as I started, I died. You said you slept with a female ghost. I thought you were still a human being, but you were exhausted and turned into a ghost. You can't even defeat a female ghost. You are talking about cheats. Open a new one. Isn't it just a gift package? I'll give you the person behind the ghost mission and tell you his last words and say a few words before handing over the ghost mission system to you. Excuse me, are you being used or not? You don't mind. I don't mind. You are the worst protagonist in the starting point.

Ghosts and gods are ghosts and gods, and they even go to practice martial arts. Advance to a higher level as soon as possible. Bring the ghost soldiers to rebuild the order of the underworld. Isn't it good to meet with the official? Do you want to become a human immortal in the end?

Stitch Monster, I read 100 chapters and plagiarized three novels. There are demons here, ghosts blow out the lamp, starting from the master of boxing.