Global Arrival: My 2D Copy

I have read about 50 chapters. Let me give you my impressions. I think the author's creativity in this book is good, but the text is too childish and does not reflect the tension of the apocalyptic novel at all. The overall mood is too flat, without a sense of three-dimensionality and layering.

People in the Ming Dynasty don't tell secret stories. I came here for the campus revelation.

It is not recommended to merge the world, it is thankless, it is a test of writing skills, and many people do not like the merge of the world.

I just found this book and read the introduction. Why are the three abilities of Void - Treasure - Cage Hand mixed with the move of abandoning treatment? I feel strong discomfort due to obsessive-compulsive disorder.

After seeing the Iron Armored City, let me talk about the poisonous points or the unreasonable settings in my opinion. The first one is the protagonist's "King's Power". I don't know if the author has any misunderstanding about the limits of human beings or the use of the void is too expensive. I feel that this skill is only B level at most. This skill gives me a big sense of gap. From the flagship version to the youth version, there is no such huge consumption in the original work The second one is the King's Treasure. The cost of projecting the weapon from the King's Treasure is only that of opening the door. No matter what level the weapon is, it only consumes the point when the door is opened The third one is the big blue medicine. It feels very tasteless. It is tasteless. It is not used at ordinary times. It is not very useful at critical moments. If you last for one or two minutes, it will be fine. Five seconds is too short, or you can change it to no consumption for the next attack.

I feel that the advantages of Academy Apocalypse are the guns and girls

I'm telling you if you're a man you should know how to write! ! !

If you have any questions, please report them here and I will try my best to modify them. You can also tell me what copies you want to see, and I will pick some and write them in.

Speaking of the infinite flow of zombies at the beginning, it seems to have become a convention, which is... Quite fixed... (As an aside, a question comes to mind: How to select reincarnations with certain qualities Answer: Verdun, Normandy, Stalingrad, three wars are thrown in, and those who survive are all capable, even if they are not capable, they are lucky) Blessings, let's go 🙏

The Wise King

The protagonist has a lot of tricks, and no one in the supporting cast has a strong talent.

Good news for fans of two-dimensional books. The first few dungeons are fine, but the last dungeon, where several worlds are merged together, is a bit messy. There are several timelines in this dungeon, which is particularly confusing and difficult to sort out. Overall, it's okay.

What is this book about? I thought it was about the protagonist traveling through the world.

Chapters 26/27 have been changed, much better than before

It's a pity that Rei Miyamoto is dead. He would have been a good teacher.

5.1 Special Update Event From now to 5.1, For two days, for every 5,000 points from everyone's rewards, an additional chapter will be added. Since it is not on the shelves, the update method is 2+1 every day (actually I didn't save the manuscript). 2 is a guaranteed update every day, and 1 is an additional chapter. The upper limit is to keep adding updates until they are put on the shelves (I think it should not be possible to have so many rewards). The event ends at 24:00 on May 1st, and subsequent rewards will not be counted. If the total reward is less than 5,000, only one chapter will be added. If there is no reward, everyone will just pretend that nothing happened.

The professional crown prince is useless at all, and it keeps lowering his favorability. It's OK if he's bad, but he doesn't choose a good holy spellcaster, and he chooses this useless profession.

. . Chapter 32. The protagonist is still a weakling. Except for Void and Wang Cai. What else. . Use a void and it will become empty immediately. . The same goes for Wang Cai. . This is too impotent.

It feels funny when I see the attribute of charm

Yes, there is Kabane, and the fusion world of Crimson and Sin. It would be great if an empire of the heavens was established. What a pity eunuch

Poison point collection post, tell me what you think is poisonous here, and I will choose the correct opinions to modify it.

Have you offended someone? When I searched for your book title, it didn't directly show this book. I scrolled down a page to find it!

If the dungeon is too frequent and there is no rest time, it will crash. Keep killing monsters to upgrade.

The writing is a little immature at the beginning, but it improves a lot later on.

So the question is, when will Emperor Rulong come?

So the two-dimensional power system beats other systems? Is this what this introduction means?

Guilty Crown Apocalypse Iron Fortress is well-known, but not many people have watched it. After watching a few episodes, I really don't think there's much to watch. The most popular two-dimensional comics are Migrant Man, One-Punch Man, Dragon Ball, Jojo, Fate, Sword, Doraemon, Titan, Starting from Zero, Bone King, Demon Slayer, and Jutsu Kaisen. There are also those movies like Weathering with You, and the more famous Chinese comics, which are not good at writing, but Apocalypse of the Iron Fortress.

What type is this? Will the heroine of the harem appear in other world copies?

It feels like I'm playing a game

Is the author a eunuch? Or is it the Mid-Autumn Festival?