My Magic Is Not Mine

First of all, I would like to commend the author for his perseverance... However, I would like to give you a suggestion... Speed up the progress and finish it (don't cut it... Cutting books will become addictive!) The reason for this suggestion is that your book has not been exposed at all. Except for people who know the title of the book, no one else can find it. The following is a summary of the serious reading. Sword and magic, fantasy theme... Well, I was confused in the first few chapters. I seemed to have read it but not yet. How should I put it? The writing is smooth and no problem. The story can basically be told clearly. The main characters appear quickly and there are no supporting characters. This is an advantage, but the disadvantages are also obvious. First of all, the protagonist, that metaphor is quite embarrassing, and then there's the lyrics... It's too dramatic and destroys the sense of immersion. Secondly, the female character... Appears, but there is not much feeling, and the character design has no highlights, and it is easy to be forgotten. Secondly, the rhythm. What does it cover in a few chapters and nearly 10,000 words? What I can extract is that I don't want to take the exam and am afraid of being beaten It seems to be setting the stage, but it doesn't seem to be the case, that is, there is no sense of expectation. A brief introduction to the world view is still okay. With a few sentences of dialogue to roughly explain the background of the times and the background of the world, I can roughly judge what era it is. This book has its advantages and disadvantages. More importantly, it is boring to read. I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists can be clearly stated and there is no need to hide it like this. The male protagonist is slow and seems to be pretending. To summarize The start is mediocre, relatively slow, with no sense of expectation, no suspense, and no sense of conflict... There is a feeling that it doesn't matter whether you watch it or not. For a less popular theme like fantasy, if you do it this way, the probability of death is very high The above is my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write it. It will make the author embarrassed. What other settings are there, what kind of innocence are you pretending to be?