Becoming the Mastermind Behind the Scenes in the Ninja World

After reading a dozen or so chapters, I feel it's not quite right. It's too overpowered. The "mastermind" is a hidden hand operating behind the scenes! You need to create that unexpected, unsettling feeling! It's like a small organization—just an analogy here. The leader of this organization is Pain, and the one manipulating Pain is Nagato.

The protagonist seems a bit dim-witted, yet he wants to control everything; perhaps the author gave him too much of a power-up.

I suggest learning from Uehara Naraku. He's one of the more decent Naruto fanfics. After all, who wouldn't like a mastermind who makes things difficult for someone they've offended?

You're not as good as Uehara Naraku.

The word count and the number of favorites are terrible... Bro, let's go back to writing fanfiction, maybe something like Mystery or Dragon Raja.

Ten Naruto fanfics, seven of which are about invincible characters, two are about harems, and one is about Naruto's brother.

It's clearly the protagonist who got involved, yet they insist on calling him the mastermind. The idea is good, but the writing lacks the skill to convey any sense of intelligence.

I planted a picture

It's a good book, but it's not really suitable for reading with a strong intellectual focus.

Read this if you're looking for something to read, just for fun. If it's good, read it; if it's not, just leave. Expressing an opinion is fine; being a troll is pointless. No need