Xi Nong Pavilion

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I walked around, looked at it, and stayed because I wanted to see it.

First of all, your paragraph is too long. It can be said that there are no paragraphs. Plus the name of the protagonist... It can be simpler The above is my point of view. I am also starting to revise it from the first chapter. The author wants to make some achievements, so he should start revising the article Encourage each other

I feel that Da Da is a person who understands life very well. It can be seen from the writing that it is indeed a bit slow, but it does not make people too boring. However, I have some suggestions. First of all, the introduction is a bit too white. It does not need to be too detailed. It can be more revealing and psychedelic to attract readers. , It should be clear that many excellent authors look very comfortable in sections, and they feel well-proportioned There is great potential, relax your mind, don't be too entangled in signing contracts, you can't make money, you can't attract fans, signing contracts is useless, just finish writing, just make a little progress every day I have also started writing books recently, and I understand the pain of stand-alone, but you still need to pay more attention to your body and observe more people and things around you, it will be helpful for writing. When you have time, you can come and read my books. I am also a newbie. The above are my most sincere opinions. Hehe, let's work together 😁😁

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