I Save Black Girls in Japan

Is the author prone to masochism or does he not understand the meaning of the word "step by step"? He went to challenge the Demon King and his demon generals before leaving the Novice Village? Who do you think the protagonist is, Minamoto Yorimitsu? What you write about these plot gaps is to consume the reader's emotions and interest. Although your writing is good, the plot is really unstoppable even with a rocket launcher~ That's all for your opinions~ Farewell

To be honest, the author must have masochistic tendencies, otherwise he wouldn't be able to write such a plot. Why write that woman so invincible? Isn't it appropriate? The reversal should be stopped in moderation. If you are so miserable, there will probably not be many people waiting for you to reverse. Think about it for yourself.

Why not focus on appearance or intelligence first? What the hell is physical strength? Can you spend time exercising to improve your physical fitness? Can you spend time improving your appearance and intelligence?

I don't know if it was influenced by the novel Loading Love Game. The similar light novels I read all have this kind of extremely strong and domineering female protagonist. And the male protagonist can't resist very well. It was quite refreshing when it first appeared, but it became a bit boring as time went on.

The male protagonist is too weak, the plot jumps and jumps are incomprehensible, and it makes people uncomfortable to watch. Goodbye and farewell! ! !

First there is a problem with the settings! According to your initial settings, unless the protagonist has the ability to clone himself and the plug-in is very powerful, no matter how hard the protagonist tries, he will still be surrounded by demons after a year. Then I read Chapter 20... There is no clone ability. The plug-in is not powerful either. I realize, you are planning to write a novel about a sadistic master...

The subject matter is very good and I'm really looking forward to the follow-up, but first I hope the author can stop himself from blackmailing TJ😂

Very enjoyable plot. 😁 Yuan Qingya happens to have a role in promoting the plot, and she makes the whole plot not like a bad Japanese light novel. The appearance of Yuan Qingya gives the male protagonist a goal and the opportunity to say some more endearing words. It also makes the image of the male protagonist more vivid and distinctive. To be honest, this character is portrayed quite well. Others are very average. So far, Asuka is just a very ordinary traditional Japanese anime heroine who is good at reading the air, socializes on the surface, and follows the male protagonist secretly.

It was okay until the psychotic female teacher came out.

It's a pity. If I keep it up later, I feel like it can still improve. Contemporary readers are really dumbfounded by mindless and cool articles.

I don't know if it's a problem that was revised in the middle. I feel that the plot is incoherent, and the heroine's force value and setting have crushed the plot to the point of incoherence.

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{"NickName":"Book Friends 20210324223141210","UserId":363960255} Personal suggestion, it would be better to change the title of the book 🙂

We have a suggestion: the blackening value (and then the prerequisite for seeing is a woman, which is the ability of the system, which can explain why they are all women) must be in contact with the protagonist and have a certain understanding (such as liking the protagonist or friendship, etc.) Before turning into a ghost, otherwise the normal situation is suicide (otherwise the world has already been a ghost, of course you can add Onmyoji, but our personal suggestion It's better not to, otherwise it's easy to jump.) Then if the first purpose of becoming a ghost is to kill the protagonist, (this can push the protagonist to always help others and not give up), and then read a little bit, the protagonist's character is set to be ordinary and kind, which will allow him to contact the person who is about to turn black instead of escaping (this is the premise that he will become a ghost only if he comes into contact with the protagonist), this way can make the novel more rational. A little personal experience of ours, if you find it useful, can you please add more details? (*/ω＼*)/P>

You can't see it anyway🐶

It's too difficult, woo woo, it's not enough at all

The plot is older. When I saw the free activities, I guessed that the new teacher who didn't come was Uehara. . The writing style is average, not considered a novice, and there are relatively few foreshadowings, so it's okay. Overall, it's a book that can be read.

Isn't Asuka the heroine? Pain 😖

So what? You stopped suddenly. Are you preparing a new book? (๑• . •๑)

I can't understand 😭 I don't like the plot very much

Did the author skip the plot? Why do I feel like I can't understand Chapter 50?