The Young Master of the Night

Is there a female protagonist? ? ? Who is the heroine? ? ?

I'm still asking you to join us today, so forget it and I don't want it anymore. From Chapter One to Chapter Thirteen. The original setting has been changed to pieces by you. The emotional description is vicious and embarrassing, and the junior uncle in it is closer than your father. You might as well just write about an orphan. Rely on the defense! ! ! Others are getting better and better as they write, so how come you quit.

Chapter 34 is a memorial to the abandonment of the book, and the beginning of it is sparsely written. The protagonist seems to want to do everything, but actually does nothing. The force settings are broken. The 6 realms can't defeat the 5 realms. They keep pretending day by day. They talk a lot, but they don't do anything they say. They just focus on a dog lifting the door curtain, all with one mouth? I rarely comment. If you can force me to comment, you are considered a talent. The main reason is that you want to create your own settings. Why do you want to write a fanfic? Do you expect those who read the fanfic to have never read the original work? How much tolerance do you expect people who have read the original novel will have for you?

Don't you think it's disgusting that you don't kill the author even though you have the ability to kill him? Apart from the master of the temple who has Haotian Shenhui, does anyone else have it? And the main character is also a good virgin who won't kill those Xining soldiers. He will never kill in this life. I originally thought you wrote it well, but when I read this, I was really disgusted.

A disgusting Madonna, whose self-moved feelings are pale and feeble. It's really poisonous. How come the monthly tickets for this book are actually hundreds of monthly tickets?

Let me go, you are still writing. Six. After writing novels for so many years, you have not made any progress at all.

I have a feeling that the author has never read the novel

After reading about it, I think the poisonous points 1. If you don't learn or study the techniques given by Golden Finger, you just play 2. The protagonist in the 6th realm can't beat several of the 5th realms, and I think everyone in the 5th realm is Liu Bai. 3. For the original work of Shui, I will kill no one who can kill ...... I feel so numb.

I feel my intelligence has been insulted and my eyes have been stained

Holy shit, this is so disgusting, run away now

There are a lot of typos in the first chapter, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

The writing is very good. Life is like this. You grow step by step. Different environments create different personalities. Even if we are book readers, we are only book readers. You can't really integrate into it. So even if you are traveling through time, you should understand something step by step, rather than cheating like Long Aotian, which is unrealistic. It's like history repeats itself and we keep making the same mistakes. Come on! Very well written!

Please update more, one page a day is too few.

Write the protagonist as if he is mentally retarded and forcefully reduce his intelligence. What is the point of practicing cultivation? His mind is that of a seven or eight-year-old child.