Start with the Dragon Clan and Penetrate the World

Book review post: I have read Chapter 640 so far, and the combat power system of this book has collapsed at this point, with a lot of contradictions appearing. First, before the Secret Blood of God enters the world of the fox demon matchmaker, it takes 3 large crystals to upgrade to one level. After it comes out, the level has not changed, but it costs 15 large crystals to level one. The explanation given by the author is that the physical quality improved by upgrading a level before was less, but now it has been improved a lot. At first glance, it is okay, but if you think about it carefully, the essence of the explanation given by the author is that a large crystal corresponds to a "fixed amount" of physical fitness. This is completely messed up, because the improvement of attribute points is completely based on percentages. The author previously proposed a "real attribute point" setting, which is used to improve attributes above level 100. The protagonist has used many "real attribute points" below level 100, which are one-to-one with ordinary attribute points. It would be contradictory to say that attribute points are added by a "fixed amount", which means that this thing is indeed improved by a percentage. Then the question arises. The attribute points added by God's Secret Blood when upgrading are a fixed 3 points. Then why does the space receive 5 times more large crystals due to the increase in "fixed amount" of physical fitness? Furthermore, there is a bug here that can be stuck. For example, I have 40 attribute points and 100 large crystals. If I increase the attribute points first, and then increase the divine blood. If the price of upgrading the divine blood is 20 large crystals, then I upgrade the divine blood first, and then use the attribute points. In this way, wouldn't it only cost 5 large crystals to upgrade the divine blood? Obviously, it is completely unreasonable. The reason for the unreasonableness lies in the fact that the attribute point combat power system is a DND type, which is a pure "percentage" type. In order to suppress the protagonist's combat power, the author used the "fixed amount" calculation method as an explanation to the readers, which led to the collapse of the whole game. Second, regarding the "upper limit", the author has repeatedly emphasized in the previous article that attribute values ​​exceeding the upper limit at each level are very precious. For example, the upper limit of level 3 is 70 points, which cannot be further improved with attribute points. The author also uses this logic to explain the power of some skills that do not have an upper limit, such as God's Blessing and Bloodshed. At the same time, this is why mythical equipment and epic equipment also only add one attribute, but the former is far better than the latter. However, the author also clearly wrote that as long as the explorer has the strength to transcend the current class boundaries, space will throw people into a more advanced world. This is very strange. The strength beyond the boundaries brings not the danger of doing whatever one wants but the danger of exceeding the boundaries? So what is so precious about the so-called "attribute points that transcend boundaries"? There is another bug here. The explorer can completely get stuck on the edge of the current limit, prepare all the things that can temporarily improve attributes (bloodline props, skill books, etc.), And then burst through the current world in a one-time burst in the world ready to upgrade to directly reach the peak of the next level, and then cycle this process. Theoretically, it is completely safe and there will be no risk. Anyone with some brains will find that this can be done, right? The so-called genius like the protagonist will become a joke. It is useless to have the talent to advance quickly and the strength far beyond the current level. If your attribute points are just entering level 4, you will be thrown into a world starting at level 4. When you first enter level 5, you will be thrown into a world starting at level 5. The explorers you will face then are all guys who are stuck at the peak of the current level and have prepared a bunch of explosive items. How does the protagonist plan to play? For example, when the protagonist was in the world invaded by the Abyss, his attribute points were only over 70, and he could only touch the edge of 100 with all his strength. The other level 4 explorers all had attributes of 100, and could reach 110+ by temporarily using accumulated bursts. Then the protagonist was a complete joke. The strength beyond the limit seems to be of no use except bringing enemies beyond the limit. So it is completely unreasonable to say that space can throw people to higher-level worlds. In this case, violators will no longer exist. If you violate the rules once, I will upgrade you to a higher level. Although the assigned task is simple, such as just going to the "Perfect World" for a walk, but I will throw you to the edge of the final battlefield for a "walk around"? The difficulty of the mission is "Easy - You must die". Whether you die or not depends on luck, so you don't have to work hard. You have to come up with a system of judges and pioneers. There are too many paradoxes and it is completely unreasonable. Finally, the author obviously subjectively and deliberately weakened the protagonist's strength. In Chapter 640, on the eve of the special qualification battle, all the equipment that came out of the box was for Eri Yi, and all the large crystals were upgraded for Eri Yi. I just don't understand. Is it Eri Yi who wants to participate in the qualification battle? Is it because Eri Yi wants to fight a group of top level 5s when she first enters level 5? Is Eri Yi a white-eyed wolf? On the eve of the protagonist's near-death battle, have you eaten up all the resources and prepared to run away? Obviously not, then obviously we can only think that the author is the fool*. At this point in the analysis, it can be clearly seen that the author is not good at writing infinite flow. He is not capable of constructing a logical and self-consistent combat power system. It was okay in the dragon world, and there were ready-made ones that could be used. However, once he arrived in the world of the heavens, it collapsed. I suggest that in the future, the author should either set up a combat framework before writing a book, sort out the reference value of various resources, and not just throw out a setting, or write more fan fiction and use other people's ready-made ones. After subscribing to chapter 640, I can't stand it anymore. The logic is flawed and I abandoned the book. But the first part is still good. New book friends can read it.

The writing of this book is really bad. Now that I have basically finished reading it, I would like to share my opinions from the aspects of writing, plot and character creation. The main body is a bit white in daily life, but it is quite good in terms of combat description. As for the plot arrangement, it's not sluggish, but to be honest, it feels a bit rushed. It's hard to say in terms of characterization. After all, there are at least two versions. Finally, the point that I can't stand the most is this. It makes me feel that the book is not well written. I read every chapter, including the Easter egg chapter, and I feel cheated. MD, where are the women's photos? Where's the photo of a maid in black stockings? 🐶

Although there are only thirty chapters, the writing style is full of style, and the complaints are all internal. I hope I can learn from Brother Shui, a good Dragon Clan fan. There are no other requests, just when will my wife Eri come out?

There are only four big words in the whole story: perfect ending. Elephant, a work that surpasses that of a fan, has made up for a lot of regrets in my heart. The writing style is also very good. It can be seen that it is extremely thoughtful. I look forward to the new book.

The portrayal is really good. Although history has not changed, the veil of the emperor's fall has finally been unveiled. He is too difficult. Even if the times cannot remember him and the emperor is unknown, he will eventually ignite the fire and become a pioneer of hope. As he said, "His era will pass away, but a new era will come." Brightness will eventually shine on the world!

I originally wanted to save up to watch it after the college entrance examination, but I didn't expect that it would be finished when I watched it today. I feel a little lost in a trance. But as the book says, dreams and beliefs are the beacons that guide the way, and we are always on the road. Isn't it stupid to look back and sigh at the end even though we know that all good things are in the process? I don't have such a powerful force, but I can have the courage that is not inferior to Lu Chen, and the beauty that is not inferior to him. What's more, isn't it the goal we strive for to defeat the so-called privileges above the ordinary for the sake of ordinary beauty? Originally I wanted to write a long article to commemorate Lu Chen's journey along the way, but now I think it's not necessary, because when I wanted to find him, he was always here. Dreams, beliefs, courage, and beauty are always here. What I think and long for has always been here. The story will always end, but our story is not over yet, so let's make it perfect from now on, at least in the end I think it is perfect. Finish and scatter flowers to commemorate.

It has been almost ten years since I first came into contact with the Dragon Clan. I believe there are many comrades like me. From the majestic city tower made of bronze and fire, to the sad songs scattered by the wind in the sky, to the cowardice and loss under the tide of the black moon, the forgetfulness and pursuit of Odin's Abyss, and the wandering and confusion in the Arctic Circle, the long river of time runs silently and solemnly. The passion of youth seems like yesterday, but the beauty or loss will remain in my heart forever. In this new illusion, I hope everything will end as desired. A destined hero is also our young dream!

We are all little monsters, and we will all be killed by the righteous Ultraman in the end I really feel for Eri, and I hate Herzog, this trash

Some book friends thought it was unreasonable and had bugs, and they complained about it. In fact, they probably didn't look back at all. Furthermore, it would be even more ridiculous to say that the author has not read Perfect. The in-depth setting analysis is very clear. First of all, the Emperor's Fall era cannot be tested. It spans many eras. There is no detailed time here. The article also mentioned the reason why the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths were destroyed, and introduced a new character, guessed to be the Footprint Emperor. This chapter is obviously about the end of the emperor's era and the reasons for the rise of the ancient immortals, including the issue of realm. In the article, Lu Chen was confused at the beginning and expressed his confusion many times. This is an obvious foreshadowing, and it must involve time and cause and effect. The article also mentioned that the nine days were glorious, and the reason for the temporary decline of this era was because of the war. The current speculation is also related to the Footprint Emperor. Anyway, I read it carefully, and there are no bugs. The seemingly unreasonable parts are all from Lu Chen's perspective. There must be answers later. I can only say that too many people take a sentence out of context without thinking deeply at all, and just want to understand it completely.

A very good dragon fanfic (at least for now), the protagonist's battles are cool and passionate, and most importantly, there are no blades.

Come on author, I found another good-looking Dragon Clan fanfic.

I hold 8 monthly tickets, 🐘The daily tickets for Duogendian and Little Monster are yours, otherwise the tickets will be canceled 🤫

Let me start with the conclusion: this book is readable and good. I'm not sure if I can invest, because whether it can be written down depends not only on the author, but also on the readers, that is, the performance. Since I only watched part of it, I won't discuss the plot too much. The only worry is that the infinite flow is easy to crash, and often, the last instance is a god, and the next instance is a sinkhole. So it's important to choose a good copy. Then there are the characters. It can be seen that the author is deliberately imitating the original work. This is not a shortcoming, but adds a lot of highlights. Why is it said to be imitation? Because I feel that the supporting characters are better written than the protagonist. The origin of the protagonist is unknown and no one is interested in knowing it. However, the protagonist's emotional drive, story development, and characterization are inseparable from his experiences in the first half of his life. Or to put it bluntly, how to write about this person later depends on what was written before. Because there are fellow dragons, Zhu Yu, in front of them, it is inevitable to compare each other. But one thing is for sure, the author does not want to write a story about a pure dragon world, but since he has written it, he might as well give it a challenge. Write each exciting story using your own ideas. In fact, I don't want to see another book that goes around the world and recommends it, even though the 7 million-word book has been at the top of the list for a long time. Come on

I have read Chapter 74 so far, and the overall impression is good. The writing is smooth and there are no disgusting routines. I hope it can hold up and not collapse.

The sea, you are all water, you are all water😏😏

Little Monster

Well! It's over, I'm a little bit reluctant to give it up. I've been following it for more than a year, and I keep up with it on time every day. I'm running out of books, and I'm looking forward to Xiang's new work.

It's good-looking and well-organized, the more interested the readers will be.

Can't wait, not enough to watch, too short and weak, please add more.

Why was it updated to 86? I'm still at 84 and can't watch it until the next dayﾍ(;´Д｀ﾍ)

A piece of advice for newcomers, the Dragon Clan chapter is the best in every aspect, including character description, plot, and fighting. They are the best in this book. If you only read Dragon Clan fan fiction, you can quit after reading the Dragon Clan chapter. And if you want to continue watching, the most you can do is see the ending of The Little Matchmaker. You can still have a good reading experience. Then the world behind them collapsed one by one. It affects the reading experience, especially the part about returning home, so it is recommended to skip it. Especially affects the reading experience.

Let me be clear, most people who read Dragon Clan fandom are here for the little monsters. Does anyone have any objection?

I'm begging you book friends, I really don't want to try drugs anymore, can you recommend some good books that you have read? I won't go fishing this time, don't mix it with poison Also, if you are interested, click on the collection of posts, it is useless to follow me. . . I turned on the shield. It turns out that I was young and frivolous and too irritable.

After reading the latest chapter, I was so happy that I decided to delete the copy of No Money to Go to College to Slay Dragons from my bookshelf. Compared with this one, which is very enjoyable, that one is now completely Riddler + Big Water Monster, and the protagonist has not even appeared in a scene for almost a month.

I really like this picture, it's so cute

A group photo of Chu Zihang, Caesar, Hui Liyi and Lu Chen (I will color it if the elephant is updated) By the way, please add some finer details 😃

In fact, this book feels a bit slow-moving, but what matters to me most is that the character of the protagonist has never collapsed, and the brilliance of humanity has never been erased in each mission world. Oh, by the way, is Chen Bao really a human being? With the secret blood of God, he feels like a god. No matter how much Jiang Nan harms his own works, at least when I watched Dragon Clan before, I imagined that I could save everything with my unparalleled fighting power, whether it was a fox demon, covering the sky, or perfect, so that the original Land Abandoned by the Gods was also impressive. My hometown is indeed a bit similar to Zhetian Perfect, but the problem is not particularly big. The previous and latest foreshadowing seems to imply that the ending may not be perfect, but it won't end up giving me a knife in the end, right? I saw Zhang said that someone was discussing the image of the little golden dragon. As a Rock player, I have always had the image of the war ax and the dragon in my mind. Let me put a picture here and ignore the axe. When I have sufficient funds after the college entrance examination, I will make up for the ones I missed before. In fact, it is a 50-50 split. When I have money, I always read it at the starting point.

If I don't say anything else, I'll reward Elephant for wearing women's clothing!

After reading this book, I have never read a Dragon Clan fanfic again. Everything has the best answer.

It's been a long time since I've read it, but I still can't help but come back to see Erika's happiness in this book☺️