Magic Network Hacker

It can be seen that the settings have been carefully considered. It's just that I personally feel that the portrayal of the protagonist is a bit contradictory. The protagonist is a time traveler and a top student, and according to the current progress, he is a top student with a story. The behavior of this kind of protagonist should be mature, professional and thoughtful, and he should make decisions before taking action. To be honest, this kind of protagonist has a very high starting point. The way the plot of Taxi Driver was set up was too straightforward and made the protagonist seem too naive. After all, you can never be too cautious about participating in an underground party like that. The trust with that female hacker came too suddenly. When completing the second mission, it fits the character of the protagonist very well and is professional and mature. After that, the policeman's reasoning from God's perspective was a bit too much, and at the same time it weakened the protagonist's character. It is very logical for the princess to find the protagonist through a taxi, which can be seen at a glance. After a brief look at the third mission, the plot probably revealed part of the protagonist's past. So as far as I can tell, the magical setting part is quite interesting, and the plot is a bit straightforward. Judging from the plot, the author must have wanted to write a plot about an IQ showdown. This protagonist is both shrewd and naive, which makes it uncomfortable. It's a game of cat and mouse. It's too bad when the mouse keeps making stupid mistakes, and there's no sense of experience. It is recommended that the author read more mystery novels and absorb them. Come on!

Good guy, elves are thousands of years old. If you retire according to human age, wouldn't you have to pay a pension for thousands of years? Hiss... It's so scary.

I'm tired of reading this. I'd like to ask the book readers to go online and click on some new chapters every day. I'd like to thank you all here.

The author writes very well. The game between the core of wonders like the Magic Network Mage and capital. Confrontation between powerful individuals and disciplined organizations. What I never expected was that the Magic Network Master would be so badly beaten by capital and turned into a terrorist organization. Of course, what we call a terrorist organization is that it only harms its own kind. As a transcendent individual, it is logical for a mage to take revenge on an organization like the state and injure its civilians. Just like when mages fight against Zerg, they don't kill engineers but destroy Zerg production bases. They are very strategic. It's just that the author doesn't know if you have noticed that the protagonist is selectively taking sides when fighting against Avalon. On the one hand, as a former Chinese citizen who upheld core values ​​and believed in collectivism before time travel, on the other hand, after time travel, he was a traditional mage with a super high IQ. His great power was attributed to himself, and he was an extraordinary individual who made the world law with one word. The protagonist chose the former without hesitation. Even if he has a blood feud with the government, even if there is nothing wrong with his sister, the government agencies have tortured him half to death, so he still wants to side with the government? Author, saving civilians means assisting the government. There is no absolute dividing line between the government and civilians, so why bother? As long as you don't take revenge on society, do you really want to be a hero? Holy Mother goes too far.

I'm a little curious about how my sister should wash it. To be honest, I felt that the role of sister should be similar to Mikasa in Attack on Titan. He is capable of secret operations and values ​​his family. But the plot of the recent reunion with Solve is (personally!) Not comfortable to read. Knowing that his brother was looking for him, he even changed from a good student to a gray element wandering about life and death. She is still here as the Riddler. The key point in the article is that she always knew that the protagonist was looking for her. Knowing that his brother will continue to investigate, he will only say sorry. Sorry. Sorry. It's very hot. If you have to do this because of a deep secret, then look forward to how the author connects the previous and the following. If it is because there is a holy mother-like soul for some idea, even if it is to give up his brother, he will not hesitate. So I'm curious as to what kind of courage it takes to set up such a popular character in a cruel online article. Although I know that my sister is an important part of the main plot, I also guess that the subsequent plot will be washed away. But until the latest chapter, I had a very bad impression of the role of sister.

The writing is very good, but I feel that the introduction does not match the content. I feel that the main character is now an intrusion software, and nothing else. The creativity is very good, and I can write more with reference to current hackers. Looking at it now, it feels like the protagonist is very cool but in fact he is not strong at all. Emmm, I will continue reading. The author still writes very well in terms of writing style.

The plot of this sister is really irritating. She suddenly appears and seems to be a robot clone created by the government. She knows that the protagonist has been looking for her. You said before that you could go to jail for your younger brother, but now you are hiding from your younger brother. You haven't explained this at all, which feels a bit cheating. The protagonist sees the robot sister appear. After two chapters of the plot, the protagonist is not very excited. This is a bit inconsistent with the character of the sister who has been looking for the sister before. It makes people really depressed. By the way, the protagonist will not find the sister after looking for a book, and then find the sister, and then there will be a plot where the sister is persecuted. Is it now fashionable for the protagonist to be separated from his family, or for the supporting character to be persecuted by his friend or lover? I feel that when reading novels, I tend to prefer novels that have a certain degree of excitement. You are not good at reading them at all. I hope I can find my sister soon.

It was good in the beginning and the setting was good, but when the dark tide started, I felt that the plot couldn't stop the car. If the protagonist group can solve the problem, then the country has enough power and people to solve the problem. If the country can't, then the protagonist group shouldn't be able to solve the problem. And, forget it Let's see if it can be rounded off in the follow-up. It's suddenly a bit poisonous, of course, it's just for me personally.

Chekhov said that if there is a gun hanging on the wall in the first act of a play, it will go off. The same goes for this book. The author clearly took out the "gun" at the beginning, which is the Sword of Levadin that fits the setting of the Magic Network hacker and is the protagonist's only self-created magic. It looks very strong and has great potential. This magic helped the protagonist a lot in the early stage, and when he easily cracked the Ape Ascension, it faintly revealed an extraordinary flavor. To be honest, when I was about to fight the god, I once thought that the boss battle must be the author using an unexpected method, activating the Sword of Levardin to blow up the god. I even thought about it. The protagonist activates the Levardin Sword at maximum power, connects thousands of broilers, directly builds a small local magic network with the protagonist's Levardin Sword as the highest authority, directly constructs a pirated God of Magic with the authority of the God Becoming Ceremony to offset the divinity of the opponent, and finally drives the dragon roaring in the flames to blast the opponent. Not to mention logic, at least it's fun. The battle given by the author cannot be said to be bad, but it is too urgent. A bunch of new settings are involved in a few chapters, but the descriptions are very shallow. Although the protagonist also played a role, it was not enough. Even the final battle only played a role in delaying time. He neither showed his ability as a magic network hacker nor used the sword of Levardin. He didn't even make much talk, which was really not satisfying. The gun that was placed in the most prominent position on the stage in the first act was reduced to the background at the climax of the story. At the climax when the gun should be fired, the protagonist suddenly dropped the gun and drew his sword to fight with the villain. Looking back at the previous chapters, there are actually vague signs. Some key plots develop too fast and lack the process of mental change. The character settings are sophisticated but the specific descriptions are too few and superficial. My personal summary is that the author's settings are out of touch with the rhythm of the plot or the writing skills. The author came up with a bunch of very sophisticated settings that I like very much, but the plot prepared to show these settings seems mediocre and narrow in comparison. The things that should be described and presented in detail were not written well but passed quickly. I really felt like I was seeing flowers in a fog. It feels like the author first came up with settings, and then wrote a book to fill in the settings. In the end, as the author himself said, he was confused about what he was writing. To be honest, I only saw the end of the game, but I really hope that the author can get rid of the crotch and write this book well. I really like the setting shown at the beginning of this book.

The characterization is still too cliche. Especially during the healing period, to be honest, if alcohol is poured on the wound on the back, it will not be painful except for being "sensitive". In addition, there will be no "numbing" comfortable feeling when the foot is grabbed, and it will not work if you take aphrodisiacs. What kind of stupid and sweet, bitch on the outside and pure on the inside, the cold princess is too old-fashioned😅 reversed, this is it🥰

I think it would be too bad for the protagonist to stand on the opposite side of Avalon. He can be neutral but not suitable for opposition. Let the superpowers worry about it.

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I have only eight words to evaluate this book (it's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away)

It's too realistic. The protagonist is just a powerful hacker. He doesn't count as a cheat at all. Looking at the introduction, I thought he really had bug-like abilities. As a result, the protagonist is a weakling

It feels like the protagonist's mentality is really healthy and positive. If I encountered so many unlucky and tragic things, my whole mentality would probably have collapsed and darkened long ago. Except for my savior, the female elf, everyone else would not care even if everyone in the world died.

I remember that arcanists can cast spells without the network. I don't know if there is a star realm or a magic ship in the author's setting. If so, I feel that in this situation, the consortium should have the support of a great arcanist behind it. Otherwise, it should not be able to handle the magic network 🙂 It's just a personal guess.

I feel that the protagonist is a bit passive in doing things. He just goes with the flow and feels very uncomfortable. It feels like he always responds to things as they happen and then rushes to deal with them. This is not good. You have to be more proactive and take the initiative to make things happen.

I was fine before, but I didn't expect that the plot suddenly started to go crazy, just like the assassin who was sneaking with a dagger just now suddenly opened the Gundam. Because there was too little description of the sister, the appearance of the sister was a bit abrupt. Personally, I felt as if I had missed a lot of the plot. If the protagonist goes through more tasks and has more plots in the city, then the reasons why the protagonist and Icarus go back to defeat the professor will not seem false; if there are more plots for the protagonist to track down his sister's traces, so that readers can know more about her sister's deeds in the city in the past few years instead of meeting her just after knowing that she has been around, there won't be so many people (including me) who hate insulting my sister, but I still hope the author can work hard, the writing and world setting are very good