Hogwarts Spell Player

According to the protagonist, the entire magical world is his back garden, so the heroine Duoduo has all kinds of creatures. The book ends when Harry Potter is in third grade.

If you read it, you can still read it, but the writing is too unrealistic. When you are in the first grade and you don't know anything, you just change a magic spell to the same skill. Just think about it and you can turn the blackboard into a wolf or dog.

It's just a feeling. Self-pleasure is a bit serious and nonsensical. One more thing. Normally it shouldn't be Hufflepuff. Although I know it's a transliteration, Hufflepuff is really a bit strange.

I hope to go, Ravenluck, because Penelo (sexy big sister flirts with men online) is the best 😏😏😏

I will abandon the book as soon as I see Hermione as the heroine.

To be honest, Hermione is really tired of aesthetics... And the character design of Cedric's dog-licking is too bad. Is it necessary to imitate the setting next door? The author's description of this thing in your pen has made people feel very uncomfortable. In other words, the novel will silently read the dog-licking in the heart and then continue to get along. A normal person would never like or make such a friend.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the author's writing is okay, but the plot concept is a bit taken for granted, especially the serious stuffing and smuggling of personal information. The most familiar one is the anti-reader translation, especially the act of changing the spell. The spell "Sudden" (I don't know whether it is the spell changed by the author or the author's unique translation) made me feel embarrassed when I read it. There are also some overly obscene phenomena. For example, Apparition is not a very advanced magic and most adult wizards can master it. There is also a group of brats fighting, and Hogwarts actually opened the Apparition ban just to send the fighting students there for punishment? Should such a common thing be put on the line like this? If Hogwarts' restrictions were so casually opened, it wouldn't be much safer than a park. There is also the matter of academy points. Points can be deducted for fighting on the school-opening express. There is no such thing as losing academy points. Otherwise, how could Harry and Ron deduct points when they drove to the academy in a speed car?

It's not me who said that so many fans are always trying to make some kind of battle card. It's too low. It's better not to write it and focus on the plot!

Wait, let me tell you something... I am a fool

Crowdfunding to write a book! It's too difficult to come up with a name. If anyone wants to participate, you can leave the information about the character you want to create below! Of course, the more detailed the background information, the more it can be upgraded. Anyway, I only have a rough framework. Basically, I have to re-finalize the outline before writing each volume. I am also the kind of author who pats my forehead, right?

The reading is not smooth enough, it feels like there is a lot of nonsense, and there is no progress in the topic. Your magic player

I don't know what the current author thinks. It's either Azkaban or Obscurus. Azkaban is a cleansing of negative energy. Obscurus is like the current genetic collapse, which is probably incurable. It's not that I look down on the young people of the 20th century. How much willpower do they have to resist this kind of harm? This kind of congenital deficiency caused me to be unable to continue writing, and then I entered the palace.

Emma Watson I'll just put it here, I'm just greedy for her body, I'm honest!

I think Pansy can do it!

Actually, I'm just greedy for Emma's body

Many ideas are borrowed from Hogwarts on the tip of the tongue and Hogwarts of a certain magic. The purely original parts are boring.

The first few chapters of this book are quite interesting, and the problem of transliteration can be understood, however. However, when I read further, I found shadows of other Harry Potter-themed novels in many parts. I saw the shadow of a certain science in the education reform, I saw the shadow of a certain tip of the tongue in Potions Class and Forbidden Forest Acromantula, and even the shadow of other novels (I can't remember which one) where the Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher was hospitalized. In the end, I don't know whether this is a fine piece of clothing or a piece of fine cloth. Abandoned the book.

The national conditions are completely different. If the Ministry of Magic of the Soviet Union dares to violate the will of the Soviet Union and not rescue, it will fall into an absolute war of extermination. First of all, the Muggle leaders in the novel know the existence of the magical world. Secondly, if you dare to tell the Soviet Union that you will violate the confidentiality regulations and not rescue, the Soviet Union will tell you what it means to have full coverage of poplars.

I just watched, Zhang Qiu is the heroine? , What happened to Cedric? If not, then don't spend so much time writing about her. Make her the same as the heroine. Otherwise, how do you plan to write it later? Can anyone who has read it tell me how the author handles this relationship?

Chapter 17, I can't stand it anymore. If only the translation issues were a little awkward. It is really unacceptable to portray Vice-Colonel McGonagall in this way. The exact words I asked in the group next door were: I didn't know for a moment whether it was more outrageous to gouge out the principal's bones or this book.

The plot development is updated too slowly, and all kinds of trivial matters are forcibly written. In order to prevent the protagonist from being pushed aside, various reasons are created to prevent the protagonist from taking action. If you update more, this won't be a problem, but if you have a slower plot and the protagonist doesn't have a chance to pretend to be B, it won't feel better. Let's take a look at this week. If there is no improvement in the future, it will be 88.

If you think the Taiwanese translation is good, then watch it. If you think the Taiwanese translation is awkward, don't watch it. Really, just embarrassing

I read the comment section and read a few chapters myself. The biggest problem is that the narrative is too long-winded. One conversation can take up to 3-4 chapters. This is too serious, and the plot progress is extremely slow. Looking at it makes me want to sleep...

After having plastic surgery for a round face and a fat chicken, I knew who I copied from. Later, when I looked at the theory of deformation book, it turned out that I copied it.

It is full of self-complaints and makes the reading experience extremely uncomfortable.

Don't read it, this book is unfinished and the author abandoned it

There are too many meaningless dialogues that obscure the plot, making it difficult to even discover what the plot is about. I suggest that when a character appears, it is best to introduce it first. Suddenly a group of people appear and start crazy conversations, which will only make people confused.

After seeing where the sorting is, I feel like the protagonist is so conflicted. Does the protagonist know the development of the plot? First, he told Hermione about Hogwarts a year in advance. Second, the fake name was Tom Riddle (Voldemort). There are also freshmen who have not entered the school. They know where the kitchen is, but they don't know that Greg was killed by Bloody Barrow and engaged in a secret marriage. I feel that since the protagonist knows Tom Riddle, he should know that he (Voldemort) deceived Greg into getting the crown of Ravenclaw. Now that he knows It feels a bit disgusting to talk about hidden marriages. The fight on the train feels like forcibly changing the hospital sorting process.

The first volume was pretty good, but then it fell apart

Awesome, Hermione is a Soviet