Beginning to Seek Immortality from the Republic of China

The title of the book is good, I was attracted by the title, but dissuaded by the content. In short, it's dog licking, double standards, water, new readers don't care, starting point, old readers don't click, it will kill you 🙂 I really can't describe this plot... Recommendation index 0⭐

The most successful part of this novel is the title. At least I read it because of the title and then abandoned it.

It's a little bit poisonous, I can't stand it. At the beginning, the male protagonist is described as being very poor. He doesn't use his hard-earned money, but uses it all to lick the female protagonist. As a result, she doesn't like the male protagonist (I feel stupid when I see this, and there is such a naughty operation). The male protagonist also gave her the initial defense equipment, but it still has no effect. The most important thing is that the male protagonist is too obsessed with the operation. He keeps giving away money and equipment just to set up a skill. In the end, his mentality is so good that he has nothing. He is so poor and still feels that he is making money. This is really awesome. (If you can accept it, then it's actually okay)

This can be said to be the most disgusting book I have ever encountered. The protagonist was a dog licker at first, but after getting an opportunity, he began to become a so-called protector. At the beginning, he clearly promised to only care about himself, but later he started to have the righteousness of the human race. And this Si Teng seems to have no effect at all, as if Si Teng was written just to write about the character Si Teng. It has no role in advancing the plot at all. Later, when the protagonist forced the scumbag, Si Teng seemed to be of no use when written. The protagonist seemed not to like Si Teng. There is also the chapter about the Lotus Demon. It really disgusts me to death. Moreover, this book seems to have a tauren and a licking dog. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore

You are a female channel author, why do you come to a male channel? Come here to scold me.

It will definitely collapse in the later stage, and there will be no outline! There is no world view! Just write it blindly! As long as the protagonist is awesome! The question is not well written and nothing can be written! This author is also a talent!

I think it's better to focus on a Taoist priest. This kind of focus on another person (although it is a holy fetus) makes people feel that the author has exhausted his talents. I hope the author can return to the main story as soon as possible. I will treat these chapters as extra chapters.

When will the author put it on the shelves?

It's really well written 🙂🙂🙂🙂😍

Author, your fight should be written like this: I don't know how long it took, Qin Yue suddenly moved, moved! I have never seen such speed, it seems to exceed time, faster than years. He pounced on the man in white at an incomprehensible speed, but the man in white remained motionless, as if he had been standing there since the beginning of heaven and earth, he was standing there now, and he would stand there in the future until the end of time. Bang", at this moment, the sky and the earth lost their color, the sun and the moon lost their light, and even the stars and rivers dimmed. The world was roaring, all the ways were shaking, and the two great figures seemed to have started fighting before the heaven and the earth, and they were going to fight until the end of the world. The battle intensified, and everything seemed to be reduced to chaos. Suddenly, the two of them stopped. A large pit with a diameter of five meters appeared where they were standing! They are indeed the two most advanced martial arts masters in the world!

The protagonist travels back in time and has nothing. He has been practicing breath-taking for two years and has nothing magical. When he meets the heroine, the booklet (system) gives a reward of three choices, a protective robe, a jade pendant for meditation, and an unknown skill. You guessed the one the protagonist chose... . . . . . . The robe, I didn't expect it, and I didn't expect it either.

After reading Chapter 14, I have lost more than a year's savings since I met Si Teng and spent money on her. This can also be said to be an investment, after all, I only met this one demon. But in Chapter 13, you gave Si Teng your robe. What did you use if you gave it to her? Later, he also explained that "no matter who you rely on, it is better to rely on yourself". Damn it, you gave her the robe on your own, the robe is yours, it's your life-saving thing. I felt guilty for giving her the robe, but I regretted it later, and after reflection, I came up with some truth... If the author doesn't like it, just delete it, just pretend I didn't say it.

I thought it was a book about seeking Taoism and immortality, but later I found out that it was a book about seeking Taoism and immortality. Then I started to find out that it was a story about seeking Taoism and immortality. Then I found out that it was a book about Taoism and immortality. It kept jumping sideways. When I met Si Teng, the protagonist was completely abnormal. I couldn't understand why the protagonist started to think and think about her as soon as he met Si Teng? The double standard is extremely powerful... This is not asking for immortality, it is just asking Si Teng to love me for once, and the two are not clear and unclear, which is annoying!

As a cautious person, I gave up on the first chapter. Author, are you writing about your protagonist or the male protagonist in "Siteng"? The protagonist who has traveled through other worlds has experienced several lives and deaths and is considered a charlatan. But when he meets an injured woman lying on the ground, he goes to save it. Although there is a psychological struggle, it is precisely the psychological struggle that makes me not want to read it, because it is more like a reason for the deceased to die with peace of mind. When a Jianghu person who can truly live to old age encounters such an injured person asking for help, his first reaction should be to observe the private environment to see if there are wild beasts ambushing the pursuer. Then he will look at the clothes of the fallen person from a distance to determine whether he is a farmer, a lady, a warrior, etc., And then quietly walk towards the fallen person to prevent it from being a killer who deliberately set up an ambush, and then check Check whether the wound was caused by the claws of a wild beast or a weapon, and then explore her body to see if there are any dangerous items. If you have the ability, you can also pinch the bones and muscles to see if she has fighting ability. Then, summarize whether you are in danger of saving her life and whether you can save her money. Of course, in this case, saving people is a loss-making business, after all, the protagonist is a small person.

Si Teng (Jing Tian) stills

How to say it? As for the title of the book, those who read it soon after it was written should know that the title was repeated many times, but it was not changed by me, but by the editor. It should be to avoid risks. There is also the issue of readers in the book review section saying it was poisonous. I didn't feel it was poisonous when I wrote it, but readers said it was poisonous. There is nothing that can be done about this. After all, everyone has different tastes, but I will learn a lesson and avoid being poisonous in subsequent plots. But after all, I alone cannot represent everyone. If I don't think it is poisonous, readers will still find it poisonous. This is a matter of taste.

If the update speed is too slow, readers will leave and no one will read it, and it will be boring.

The title of this book is "Seeking Immortality from the World of Si Teng", so it is recommended that the author intersperse some small fragments of Si Teng's current situation in the branch story or in the advancement of the main plot. I feel that this will be more attractive to readers 😁

Good guy, the heroine is Si Teng, and in a blink of an eye she becomes someone else's second concubine, the Six Greens of the Central Plains. The hero fights for Si Teng, life and death, and the heroine in a blink of an eye becomes a mistress. She might as well write a pornographic novel. . Taoist Wealth Couple, I thought you were writing Si Teng in the direction of the couple, but it turned out to be on par with Ziyang's crappy book.

The protagonist is a dog licker. The title of the play is that he started practicing as a dog licker in the Republic of China. He is still a pug. The women don't fuck you, but you still lick it upwards and hard. When something happens to someone, you'll rush up like a dog without saying a word, and even ask someone to plant a curse on you, like a loyal licking dog. So disgusting

It doesn't look good, but it's better to be poisonous. It's just strange. For the first time, Si Teng can say that he wants to turn his bicycle into a motorcycle to save a group of people. There is no reason to save her for the second time. The reason given by the author is very far-fetched. If I save her again, she might agree to give me some practice skills. Not to mention whether you can practice the demon clan's skills. Even if you can, Si Teng is locked up here by a person who is stronger than her and tied up. You let him go like this. Do you have the strength or the backing? What if it was a pervert, wouldn't he torture you to death? After the rescue, he also said that he wanted to fight against injustice. This sentence was too purposeful and boring.

Let's discuss, Chapter 4, the issue of choosing "Dharma Robes" instead of "Gong Techniques"! The first point is that the male protagonist Si Teng took the risk to save him in order to practice the immortal skills. As a result, the heavenly book has skills that can be collected. You choose a robe. Funny?

"Starting as a licking dog from the world of Si Teng"

I gave up on Shang Sanjiang's book before reading even 5 chapters.

The plot of the author's mistress is a bit serious. The heroine in the introduction is Si Teng, who suddenly becomes someone else's mistress. It is extremely poisonous and she is 6. Goodbye reading.

The protagonist is too kind to Si Teng. If he had watched Si Teng's TV series, it would be okay to have a crush on the heroine, but he has not watched it at all. It would be okay if he fell in love with Si Teng at first sight, but he didn't. If he was here for cultivation, wouldn't Master Xuan be a better target? So it was really against Si Teng's kindness. What did he think?

A cuckold licking a dog? 🙂

The protagonist is a dog licker. The title of the play is that he started practicing as a dog licker in the Republic of China. He is still a pug. The women don't fuck you, but you still lick it upwards and hard. When something happens to someone, you'll rush up like a dog without saying a word, and even ask someone to plant a curse on you, like a loyal licking dog. So disgusting

Traveling through the Republic of China, normal people should at least have the heart to fight against the great powers, right? How can I still be in the mood to practice Taoism?

The protagonist of this novel is a rag-picking heroine. She is a licker who licks her ex, and then has sex with the hero without licking her. It's really disgusting to me.