Life in the Ninja World

It's okay to watch without thinking, but the character timeline is completely messed up. Naruto Sasuke has entered the ninja school! Itachi is actually still in his second or third year 🤐 The two brothers are six or seven years apart in age. . . Basically write whatever comes to mind😅

Yes, it is really fun to read without thinking. This is a sand sculpture novel. Don't call it true

Well, why shouldn't I submit my contribution to the light novel derivative fandom in Alternative Fantasy?

There are several points that should be avoided in Naruto fanfics. 1. Stay away from Naruto. Naruto will always be monitored by people from the Anbu and the Roots. Those who are not innocent will be investigated if they get close. Are any time travelers innocent? 2. Stay away from Sasuke, not too far apart. I didn't read much, so I stopped talking and left.

This novel is so poisonous. . . Forget it there are a bunch of typos, there are also a bunch of suspected typos, and there is also the infuriating energy of Renshangren Clan Hui Hui? Swirl whirlpool? ... Having kidnapped Hinata and even been caught by the Hokage, he still forced Hinata?

By the way, so many time-travelers have gone to Hokage, why are so few considering creating their own ninjutsu? Fortunately, those who have time-traveled to Hokage are all modern people, and have been baptized by many fantasy novels about cultivating immortals. Ninjutsu is simply the Tao, and the difference with magic is just in the form of expression. If you can't even create your own ninjutsu or even re-develop a ninjutsu, why are they all invincible in the end? Those who learn from me will live, and those who resemble me will die.

Kyuubi: I, Kyuubi, not only don't fight bravely, but also act fairly and justly. I want everyone to have a share in the inheritance. Ichibi can testify 😆😆

You can't watch it without thinking. It's not ridiculous enough to say it's ridiculous, and it's completely irrelevant to say it's serious.

And it feels a little bit poisonous. It's a fool's errand, but there is no bottom line. You even robbed Naruto of his money and even his favorite Ichiraku Ramen.

The author should write something about the theatrical version, such as the zero tail, the movie maker, or the wishing machine. I haven't seen anyone write it for a long time. The last time I saw it was 18 years ago.

Just like what Jiraiya said, he gained great power and floated away.

Take a look at this comment area, I'm sure you'll know how the author is doing

Watching it without thinking and feeling uncomfortable at the same time, how can you retain people? Advance too slowly. Like a big flood

If you read it without thinking, it's okay. It's pretty silly, and the writing is pretty good. The protagonist is basically invincible. It's a good read. It's not as dark as other fics. I'm tired of Konoha's always writing conspiracy theories. It's a change of taste.

From the time you absorb Itachi's Mangekyō Sharingan, you can use Susanoo and start releasing poison 😰😰😰

Why does every Naruto fanfic talk about how rich the Fourth Kazekage is, but not how rich Orochimaru is, who was reincarnated in the dirt with the body of the Fourth Kazekage?

Some jokes can be written once or twice, but if they are used too much, they are actually boring and awkward. Especially the jokes between Naruto and Sasuke, it is not a matter of using them too much now. It seems that the author really wants to write in a gay direction. Just say thank you as a joke, it's really embarrassing for them.

Damn, this protagonist hasn't even fought at full strength a few times.

I read Chapter 43. It looks like pig's feet are very powerful, but it turns out that pig's feet are so rubbish.

Is there anyone who wants to whitewash the bull and the weasel? Do you want to be a fan who brutalizes Itachi and brings pain to Konoha F4?

There has been no update for 20 hours, and the production team's donkeys don't dare to rest like this.

I don't agree with the establishment of a harem, not for anything else, but because of the current heroine. She did not appear in the original work. If a harem was established, what would you do to keep her at the top position? You really can't have a harem, but the writing of this original heroine is still very good! ! ! ! ! !

You are so courageous, you will not correct such a big mistake in the past, and you are still writing later. Although Naruto has many timeline errors, Kumogakure snatched Hinata when she was three years old. This is for sure. If you change the results, it will be much better. Why are you unwilling to change it? You can't bring it back, right?

The first time I read the novel, I laughed out loud several times. No matter how cold and ruthless the ninja is, when he meets the protagonist Izumi, his style changes! The inner expressions of the characters are all in place. The only flaw is that the daily interactions with the twelve strong people in the Ninja Village and the Sannin of Konoha were not written in the early stage. They did things together. The twelve strong people can also be tricked, right? Also, in the first three generations, wasn't it speculated that the protagonist Izumi's parents were Senju and Uzumaki? So after Tsunade becomes the fifth generation, Tsunade should know these things, so Tsunade and the protagonist Izumi should have more daily conversations, such as urging the protagonist to have babies quickly, have more babies, etc. Tsunade should position the protagonist as a younger brother. After all, he is the same race and the only one to inherit the blood contract between Senju Hashirama.

I hope the next book can keep up the good work, author, come on

It's too silly! Always a string of ellipses and then X234567! So annoying! The protagonist is lazy, which is acceptable, but if it's too dull, it's a bit annoying!

Speaking of which, can the five types of ninjutsu be like this? The wind type is forced out of position, the earth type is locked up, the water type is introduced, the thunder type is hydrogen oxidation, and the fire type is detonated.

The way to obtain the power of the universe generally requires the blood contract of the Uzumaki clan. The ancestor of the Uzumaki clan and the Senju clan is Asura, and the ancestor of the Uchiha clan is Indra. Only by combining Uchiha's eyes (yin) plus Senju Hashirama cells (yang) and the Uzumaki blood contract (inclusiveness) can the power of the universe be synthesized.

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I felt very happy when I saw the radio waves. I laughed out loud several times.