Teyvat AFK Master

There are too many originals, and it feels like you're watching fantasy instead of Genshin Impact, and it's hard to be popular.

Most people who read Genshin Impact doujinshi come here for plot-related reasons. Although the author's writing is good, the current way he writes it is too narrow for a narrow audience.

Don't be too short-sighted 🙂

How to put it, originality is fine, but the logic must be sorted out, the Genshin Impact timeline must be clear, what major events are there, and then add your own originality appropriately. And your villain gives people a general feeling.

Just keep it for now. If you die, you'll kick me.

Author, is Sword Master still updated?😭

At present, I have read sixty-seven chapters. The original content added by the author himself has enriched the work, but too much originality means that it is easy to conflict with the original work. Especially for MiHoYo, many settings are not included in the plot, so you can only read various documents in the game by yourself. The author's setting is decades before the plot. Based on the protagonist's previous life, it will take at least 50 years to reach the plot point. At this point in time, the plot characters that the protagonist can come into contact with are basically not born, and all the people he comes into contact with must be original. This has exponentially increased the requirements for the author, and there are already problems (I only found out that the author has changed it after reading the comments in chapter 53).

When I played Legend, my favorite thing was to use the alt account to explode and AFK. High risk-free return

The writing is not very good, so cut it?

Isn't it? If you keep it, it will disappear.

Why do I feel like I'm always jumping through the motions and skipping a lot?

My evaluation is that the original plot should be praised first (after all, if you like the original plot so much, why don't you go and play it again), the setting is not bad so far, but the plot seems a bit confusing (especially the jump after resurrection until arriving at Yuanxia Palace is particularly serious, I always feel that I missed something), and the birthplace of the protagonist is Inazuma, but the name... It should also be a point that needs attention. The plot of Yuanxia Palace is better, it seems coherent and more reasonable. This is how I feel right now

I found out that the old author of Sword Master came in to read the new book. This book still has the same old problems as Sword Master. It pursues too much strength and dilutes the humanity of the protagonist (it doesn't matter). I won't mention the magical changes to the world view of Genshin Impact. The author's description of the environment and characters is still relatively shallow. To be honest, except for the card drawing characters in the game, the original The characters are basically unimpressive. The novel frequently changes years and regions like a running account. It can be seen that the author's writing skills have not improved much. The protagonist's rapid improvement in strength will lead to a bottleneck in the number of words in this book. Otherwise, like the previous book, he will jump out of the Genshin Impact world later. I hope this book will not end hastily with 800,000 words like the Sword Master.

There are too many forces and too many complexities, and the locations and characters are nothing like each other.

Come on, author! Write as you think

First (🛋)

Hey, why did I stop updating? When will I update again?

Why is there no comment on the release? It was released after about 50 chapters. It feels a bit rushed, and there seems to be no chapters to promote or anything.