Original God's Sword Master

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​Feud out that it is written about a world of cultivating immortals with Tiyvat skins, and it cannot be substituted for Tiyvat at all. Whether it is the inexplicable alienation between the owner of the Eye of God and ordinary people, or some common settings in fairy novels, I feel that it is incompatible with Tiyvat. I haven't read the rest of it yet. From the comments section, it seems that the ending is not ideal. If you think it looks good at first glance, it should be okay to treat it as a new world that uses some of Teyvat's settings.

( ﹡ˆOˆ﹡ ) Come on

I think it's ok, give it a thumbs up if you agree, and count the number of people.

Are there any slimes from next door? Most of the people next door were crazy about being crazy, and then I realized that there were no normal protagonists in Genshin Impact until I read this book and realized how good it is!

The last struggle of the guarantee 😩, let me withdraw money without any mistakes! ! ! !

The plot is mediocre, with no ups and downs at all. The Invincible flow is a bit fake. I don't mean that it directly steps on the seven gods and points to the heaven. It is good now, but the protagonist's character is like a passerby, as if he has become a Buddha and has seen through the mortal world. It is not at all exciting. The Invincible flow is for everyone to watch. Reading this type of novel can relieve stress in daily life. There are also authors who just follow the plot now. I don't know if the author doesn't know how to write or something. When other fanfics write so many words, the plot has already started to rise and fall. Alas, I don't know what to say. The main reason is that the current plot is too bland. There are other fanfics that have been written so far that they have a lot of wives. You don't even have a wife at this point. It doesn't mean that you have to have a single female protagonist in the harem. Okay, and the most important point is whether the heroine can be a cook who can't cook. This is the most important point. You see, the protagonist is considered a god now. God matches God perfectly (dog head) Anyway, come on, I quite like your Genshin Impact novel.

Let's comment on the post again to get some contribution points. It's best to have some highlights.

There is a plot in the first half of the book, which I excerpt here for everyone to see if you can accept it: The protagonist traveled to a corpse in Teyvat, and ended up meeting the murderer who killed the body in the city. The murderer set up an ambush in the wilderness and tried to kill the protagonist again, but was easily subdued by the protagonist. At this juncture, the murderer's psychological defense has collapsed and he is willing to reveal the mastermind behind the scenes. So: In order to prevent himself from being affected by the residual thoughts of his predecessor, the protagonist killed the murderer directly, not wanting to let himself hear who was behind the scenes. His reason is: "To avoid trouble." About this behavior, book friends have commented, whether they support or oppose it. But I do feel that this behavior is more or less... (I will consider a less hurtful word first) ... Self-deception. 1. Since everyone has been honest, including the protagonist himself, he has also speculated that there is someone behind this incident. So how does the protagonist make sure that he will not suddenly encounter this mastermind while walking on the road in the future? When the time comes, they will make a sneak attack and give you a big one to play with, and a set of combos will be taken away for you. 2. If the protagonist is worried about the impact of his predecessor's obsession, then at least the reader must see that the impact of your predecessor's obsession is indeed significant. The influence of the protagonist's immediate thoughts in your article is almost to the extent that after waking up in the morning, he wanted to go downstairs to eat soy milk and fried dough sticks. Maybe he changed his mind when he saw that the bun shop was not crowded. In this case, it can also be said that under the premise that you have the opportunity to know who your enemy is, and you can't afford to offend him and can't hide, you play it like a werewolf killing, and you don't know when you will be attacked by someone. 3. If the protagonist is worried about his own lack of strength, or simply does not want to cause trouble. Is it safer and more convenient to not know who is behind the scenes suddenly stepping on the thunder one day in the future, or is it more convenient and safer to avoid it in a targeted manner after knowing who is behind the scenes? 4. We all know that this is a novel. After reading online articles for so many years, who doesn't know what the routine is? Hit the younger one and the older one comes. To put it bluntly, this arrangement is to force the plot to follow up and not to give information too early. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying that you won't be allowed to use this plot, but that your method is too outrageous and your handling method is almost perfunctory. Even if the author makes the young murderer be fierce when he is about to receive lunch, and use the information about the mastermind behind the scenes to trick the protagonist into getting closer, and then self-destruct, it is better than this method: Not only can the clues be cut off reasonably, but the standard of the matter is also raised: For a rich young man to be a human explosive bag, is it the mastermind behind the scenes who has great eyes and eyes, or is this rich young man deeply scheming? Or maybe this guy has been brainwashed? Let the protagonist analyze it in his mind and constantly improve the villain's character. Even if it turns out to be a battle of wits and courage with the air, it will still have an entertainment effect. One final point: Use less exclamation points.

My name is Kamisato Ayaka. I am a zombie. I am the acting leader of the Knights of the West Wind. I like divination and own a Dawn Winery.

The adventure level is 48, and one gold is released. Is it normal for Sugar to have full health?

Let me ask a very real question, are there creatures like horses in Teyvat? The plot says that Mondstadt has cavalry, but I have never seen a creature like a horse after playing Genshin Impact for so long. Even the current cargo is balloons or wind slimes. I said that when the plot reaches a certain level and Mondstadt cavalry appears, I will be a little curious about what creatures they ride. (I hope it's not the Wild Boar King like I thought, the one on the snowy mountain.)

I feel very embarrassed now. The strength of the protagonist could be written more interestingly, but I don't know if the author is not good at writing battles, so he makes the protagonist very Buddhist. It feels like everything he does is just muddling along. Although he wants to write the protagonist's indifferent state of mind as a cultivator, it doesn't feel as sharp as a sword cultivator 😥

As for the update progress of Genshin Impact 😅, it's really hard to write a fanfic

I don't need to say anything else, the person who likes it must be the God of Thunder.

The rest of it has nothing to do with Genshin Impact. . .

4 Monthly passes, please refine 🙂

This book is quite good. The plot is not derailed according to the setting, and the interactions with the Genshin Impact characters are also in line with the settings. Most of the other fans are similar to "studions" in nature. The intimacy of the Genshin Impact characters with the protagonists is a bit unreasonable [good]. In terms of relationships, most of the protagonists and Genshin Impact characters in this book are relatively unfamiliar, and It is more reasonable and will not "stall", but this kind of alienation and inaction in seeking help from the Genshin Impact character makes me or other readers who are more passionate about the game feel uncomfortable. However, it is undeniable that this is what a time traveler should look like. The inexplicable affinity and intimacy with the Genshin Impact character are the most ridiculous in my opinion. However, as the plot progresses and some readers complain, the author seems to have deviated from Teyvat to write the story of the Star Sea. This is in line with the author's purpose of the protagonist "becoming stronger". However, for readers, Genshin Impact fan fiction deviates from Teyvat and Genshin Impact, which makes me feel very uncomfortable.

Have I seen through MiHoYo's thoughts? 🐶 To be honest, when I said this, I still felt a little unsure.

I feel that the protagonist's strength is a bit skewed, with too much emphasis on the power of the ice element and little use of swordsmanship. But as far as the title of the book is concerned, the protagonist's ability should focus on swordsmanship, and the ice element should be a derivative rather than the main body.

11 Chapters have been updated in two months. Good guy, I call him good guy.

I see that there are so many fans with divine eyes that are stronger than those without divine eyes. When I was going through the game plot, I saw that many without divine eyes were able to kill those with divine eyes indiscriminately.

It's finished..... This is unfinished, no

It's a pity that it's unfinished. To be honest, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. I really hope the author can continue writing. Or maybe write a second part. Or you can update chapters according to the game plot 🌹

Damn it, you finally added a chapter to the Lifetime series.

? After finishing the book, I took a look, this is a eunuch

It's been half a year and there's still no fucking update. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

How to disband the group😭