Ace Warhawk

I think it's like a running story, confused, and the protagonist is too pretentious. No matter how good or powerful he is, it's an army. No matter how strong you are, you have to obey orders and follow orders. Otherwise, it wouldn't be a society anymore. You can do whatever you want.

The inexplicable character creation, highly educated, stupid and bold, is grounded for seven days? It almost caused a major accident. The collision between the two planes was still a human initiative. The protagonist did not take any evasive action and just killed a regiment leader. This is absolutely unqualified for psychological intervention. He will be directly employed as a civilian or retired.

I have read a few chapters and my personal opinion is that I don't know why. I really hate the protagonist, and he doesn't look like a soldier at all. He is also arrogant and arrogant. First of all, he is a Chinese soldier. He obeys orders and listens to orders, not just talk. The protagonist is like the boss of the sky and I am the second child. I feel like I am awesome. A pilot who just got out of the army is as stubborn as the commander. Excuse me. Goodbye.

You are a soldier first, and you can grow into an ace. It's not that you think you're the ace. Stop writing about soldiers.

The protagonist is different from the assassin in that he is completely unorganized and undisciplined. The author takes the army too much for granted.

It's the first time I've seen such poor results when writing about this kind of subject. To be honest, the worst things I've written about this kind of subject are all excellent ones. I haven't seen that dead eunuch's monthly monthly subscriptions are over 10,000.

Well-written code results in a 404 error; poorly written code results in garbage.

The plot you wrote feels rushed, and the character development is quite poor.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. This is not an online novel, this is workplace PUA + military documentary literature.

I couldn't continue reading after a while; I personally found it uninteresting, not as well-written as "Rifle."