Spiritual Qi Revival: The Great Netherworld King of All Worlds

(On the surface) the high and mighty King of the Underworld is flirted with by a mortal woman, and then flirts with her back. That's just too damn hot! It's called the underworld, but there's no reincarnation. What kind of underworld is that? Obliterating other people's souls is just scattering their spirits and absorbing their soul energy.

Goodness, only a few chapters and you've already thrown out all sorts of melodramatic plot points. Seriously? Can't you write without these kinds of things? A simple, uneventful start wouldn't be good enough? Amazing!

The premise alone is riddled with flaws. The City of Reincarnation only allows souls to be obliterated to obtain the origin. How many souls can you possibly obliterate in a single world? This premise is worse than the Abyss in the West. At least there, souls emerge from the River Styx as abyssal worms, becoming demons. With yours, they're simply scattered. Seriously?

A slight upturn at the corner of his mouth, then a slight twitch... Could you please stop mentioning the corner of his mouth? It appears several times in one chapter! 🥵🥵

I'm impressed, they really write about everything. The protagonist starts off as a useless character, mocked, and the villain even forces him to make a bet online. Later, the Hall of Reincarnation was opened to directly obliterate souls in order to gain merit/reincarnation points.

This opening is truly appalling. The protagonist's name, a gigolo, a fat guy, and a brainless villain—it's too much! I can't bear to watch anymore.

Huang Rong calling someone "brother" is so toxic! Calling someone with such a huge power difference "brother"? Normally, people would call them "master" or "senior," right? Even the way they address people in real-world storylines is toxic. I couldn't take it anymore after chapter 20.

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is terrible, a hodgepodge of melodramatic plot points. There's not a trace of Hades' gravitas; as Hades, he meddles in everything, showing no air of superiority whatsoever. He should be ruthless and emotionless when seated in his position. The author's vision is too narrow; the story will most likely fall apart.

Is the author writing about a multiverse city? Making living beings live in a place where the undead reside? That's garbage!

The first three chapters are supposed to be amazing? The first chapter is already this bad? I didn't even finish the first chapter.