Abyss Game: Superman Lord

You can keep it, and you can read it when you are short of books. The main reason is that the author writes a little bit with a hammer and a stick, and I have forgotten some of the settings, such as the devil wolf lair and the skeleton lair Farming, hunting, cultivation, each chapter is written in a different way, and sometimes even a chapter is written. There are no chapters at all, they are intertwined, and it feels very messy There is also the issue of Superman's bloodline. Apart from having a sense of presence at the beginning, after completing the dungeon and adding points, it basically doesn't appear much. At most, it is the power of the sun. What are those Superman bloodlines for? Isn't it good to write a sun here?

If you don't realize Superman's ability, you give me this boxing practice. I'm here to see Superman, not martial arts. Moreover, the author's manipulation feels too heavy. Since it is a game, isn't it normal for the protagonist to find system bugs? Just add various settings to prevent the protagonist from getting sunlight. If it is farming, then you should expand the farming scale and cabin.

I thought this book was an invincible text, but I didn't know that it gave a system at the beginning, and then it was cut down to the Superman template, and then the Superman template was cut down until it couldn't develop without sunlight. It feels like even the protagonist's IQ has been weakened.

I thought it was an invincible article, but it turned out to be a new book, just like those that give you super talents at the beginning. If you want to see superhuman invincibility, I suggest you don't be fooled by his name.

It feels a bit like picking up sesame seeds and throwing away watermelons. Everyone is watching Superman, um, you have a golden finger, but the author seems to be deliberately going against the readers, writing a lot of unintelligible things, which means that it can be concise and less written. The readers want to see Superman become stronger, so he wrote very little. Equal to nothing. Putting the cart before the horse. What are the things you do when you practice martial arts? They all make the body stronger after practicing, and there are very few benefits. You also write a lot. I just picked up the sesame seeds and ate them hard, throwing the watermelon far away. The author needs to develop his imagination and stop going astray.

After reading Chapter 50 or 60, I'm ready to withdraw! This is just my personal opinion, I hope the author doesn't think I'm a scumbag! 🙏 First of all, the stall is too big, the combat power system is confusing, the demon god (or even above) appears in the early stage, and the presence is constantly refreshed. How can I put it, the protagonist does not look like the protagonist... And various settings are laid out. As a reader, it is difficult for me to remember and I feel that the number of characters is too low... The protagonist has already turned into several legends before he changed his job! It's not impossible to write like this. I've seen it written like this in other books, but I think it's difficult for the author to control it! Secondly, the protagonist is obviously a bastard. Wouldn't it be nice to write a cool novel, but he has to write a mundane story about mortal struggle... Could it be that the author writes whatever thoughts he has in his mind? Want to stew New Year dishes in an iron pot? 🤔

Generally speaking, Superman is a term for invincibility. However, almost every Superman is suppressed by him. Why do you write Superman? Otherwise, you just know everything about Superman and just write some random stuff on your own. How difficult is it to write Superman? Because invincibility It is already difficult to write Superman using only brute force. Why? The plot can't go on, the bad guys punch one after another. What should the editor write? Not to mention Superman who uses his brain. It's not that Superman doesn't use his brain, but it's unnecessary. His brain can keep up with the Speed ​​Force all the way down to The Flash.

When writing a Superman template, don't start from scratch and practice slowly. You can make the enemy strong, but don't make Superman weak.

If you don't like it, force yourself to suppress your strength. You can enjoy 1000+ sunshine at the beginning without adding attributes. You have to stay at home for a few days, which is called controlling your body. Can your 20 points of strength beat a 300-point strength pig?

What you wrote is not Superman. You have to touch the porcelain Superman. Does it make sense?

The style of painting is so weird. It's obviously Superman coming to do dnd, but in the end, it's mixed with martial arts? To be honest, the story belongs to that classic pop style, not brilliant but not bad, but the style is too messy

In fact, the name of this book is "Crossing the Abyss, Superman's Body Begins to Practice Martial Arts" Other players have no meaning at all, the protagonist can just travel alone. The superhuman body is of no use, and he only has higher martial arts qualifications.

Superhuman blood, a mess of magical powers and martial arts!

I came to see Superman become invincible, not to see you play Lord.

Thoughts after reading Chapter 60. You may say that the author's writing is not good, but there is no major poisonous point. Even if there is a backstory, it will be rounded off. For example: there is a trade on the fluorescent grass, but when the protagonist has sufficient supplies, he does not think of trading. After a few chapters, the author added that only what the protagonist collected himself would have that kind of fluorescence, and this small hole was filled in. You want to say he wrote it? But what he wrote was so numerous and messy that it felt like he had even forgotten it. For example: In the first copy, you get the creature lair, the Abyss Demonic Wolf. At that time, the protagonist experimented once and made one, but then it lost its sense of existence and completely ignored its existence. And that lair is obviously a good thing for explosive troops, right? The protagonist doesn't have to be good at it, it's understandable, he probably doesn't intend to take that path. As a result, when I came to chapter 50, I took the lord route again. As a result, there is still no sense of existence. ┐(´-｀)┌I doubt that the author forgot about him. And author, what do you want to do? What do you want to write about? The protagonist will practice that for a while, and practice this for a while. I'm practicing my superhuman bloodline. What a sense of presence. What about your addition? I can't even feel any change in the protagonist's strength, I just feel like a lot of things have been changed. A bit too cluttered. After reading about 60 chapters, I really couldn't see the attraction, so I withdrew.

I would feel embarrassed if I just call the martial arts lord in the abyss, not Superman.

Superman does not need to practice to control his power, otherwise how could he get married and have children? From a biological standpoint, there are too many protagonists!

In fact, it is a training style wearing the skin of Superman You can directly ignore the word "Superman". Because of the author's setting, the protagonist cannot shine in the sun in the early stage, so just treat him as a traditional training style PS: If you want to see the kind of invincible style with a body of steel, infinite strength, and a sneeze that destroys the solar system, you can directly bypass the traditional Superman.

What about your topic, author? Abyss Game, Superman Lord is the reason why we clicked in to watch it, but what did you write? I don't use Superman's infinite possible bloodline because the magic resistance is low, so I accept it. The ability to upgrade and kill monsters in the Abyss game is very good. I choose the mage to start, but I don't develop it either. I just practice martial arts. Although I am an ordinary person and have two skills, do I believe that I can break the heavens with my fists and blow up everything? Just like I am an ordinary person, but I just need to work and earn money, then open a store and expand it, one becomes two, two becomes ten, and then expand infinitely to become the richest man in the world. I don't need the support of noble people or angel investment, just because I am the protagonist, I have no advantages and no mistakes, but I can succeed.

Where is your demon wolf lair

The food is tasteless, and I feel that the protagonist is useless. To do something, take notes first. Are you suffering from dementia? You can't remember it.

When I woke up, I was a little confused. My friend said that my comment section was flooded, so I came over to take a look and found that a reader friend was talking about the disappearance of Superman's bloodline. I didn't want to explain it at first, but it just affected the score of the book a little bit, so I will say a few words 1. When the bloodline disappears, the ability will not disappear or exist in another form (please forgive a patient with severe persecution delusion) 2. I am too lazy to explain, I just read the book myself, it is all in the book!

Why do so many people like Superman? Just because you can level up by being in the sun, if you eliminate this, you might as well not write Superman?

Tell a joke. Superman learns Wudang Ladder and Tai Chi.

Superman is completely a representative figure who upgrades and becomes stronger while lying down. You can become infinitely stronger just by lying down and basking in the sun. Also, Superman has low magic resistance or even no magic resistance. And compared to one's own physical resistance, it is only low. For example, ordinary people have 1 magic resistance and physical resistance, while Superman has 10,000 magic resistance and several million or more physical resistance. The magic that can be useful to Superman is the magic used by top people. Rather than just anyone using magic to deal with Superman. There is also the shortcoming that Superman has no magic at all in the middle and late stages. In the later stage, Superman can only be defeated with great power, and Superman becomes stronger by basking in the sun. It does not mean absorbing the sun's energy to become stronger, but developing the power contained in one's own. If it is said to absorb the sun's energy to become stronger. With the energy of the sun, it is impossible for Superman to become so powerful that he could explode the universe or even beyond just by basking in the sun.

Fellow Taoist, it has been collected, keep writing! How about adding some highlights to a picture?

. . . After Superman's passive power was converted into magical power, it actually required the power of the sun to be used. Does Superman use solar energy? Shouldn't solar energy be the key? For example, eyes are obviously useless. If you open your eyes, you can't use them now without energy. If you want to be free from the restrictions of bloodline, you should at least wait until your strength reaches a certain level. The big boss who started his career by relying on bloodline did not rely on bloodline to quickly upgrade in the early stage, but later studied bloodline to get rid of bloodline restrictions.

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This thing is written by porcelain clark

... The title of your book is very embarrassing, and the subject matter is also very embarrassing. Let's tell a joke: Superman, a weak demon with low magic resistance, went to the abyss to try his luck.