Global Copy: Two SSS Templates for the Start

It feels okay, but every time I encounter a high-level enemy, I feel that "No Injury" has no effect at all. There is no non-injury, and there is no counterattack with real damage.

I feel a little sorry for the author. It's hard to write a stand-alone game, right? After reading about forty chapters, I have a few suggestions, well-meaning suggestions from old bookworms. You can delete it if you don't like it. 1. The author does not have enough grasp of the refreshing feeling of data flow. If the game is too high, it will give a feeling of emptiness like playing a stand-alone game with modifiers turned on, especially when the protagonist's game has no effect. What this kind of data cool article wants is that I can do what you can't do, and you can't understand what I can do. What's even worse is that when the protagonist wakes up, he immediately feels like he's been stripped naked by someone else. Add in a few completely indifferent supporting characters, and it becomes even less exciting and interesting. 2. Setting issues. In order to highlight how awesome the protagonist is, the talent level is set too outrageously. Basically, talent determines everything. If I have high talent, I won't play with you who have low talent. This kind of universal value seriously violates the basic three views of modern people, and also violates the background of the book (a disaster background that requires full cooperation). Several conflicts between talent levels made it difficult to feel immersed in the game. 3. The character of the protagonist is essentially a loser. There is no reason to cheat, and the double top talents come out of nowhere, but it doesn't matter, Shuangwen is cool, I can accept it. But the fight in the arena in more than thirty chapters was inexplicable. Don't you have a B number? If he didn't die, could he beat the S-class? Doesn't this seriously violate your settings? As we all know, when it comes to playing games and playing dungeons, a good T is your father. Especially in a world view where people really die, this kind of flesh and blood body should be respected by nature, right? But so far I haven't seen anything. I've only seen DPS and Nai's contempt for T, as well as T's own inferiority complex. This is completely unreasonable, very unreasonable. 4. Dragging the rhythm. I don't understand where the author learned this outdated old technique and deliberately dragging the rhythm. You see, when you play the game, any valuable item you get in the early stage will be used immediately, right? Because for a poor game character, even a white outfit is a picture from 0 to 1. What about the protagonist? I got a treasure chest but didn't open it, and then another, and then another, and by the time I saw it, I already had four in my hand. I just want to know, is your protagonist already in the stage of becoming a god? It doesn't matter if the treasure chest is opened or not, there is no need for it anyway. Or maybe the treasure chest can produce babies? This old-fashioned method is very discouraging. If I had been following your new book issue, I wouldn't have posted this. I would have just clicked on it. I looked at the titles of the subsequent chapters, and it was really unpleasant. The author has worked very hard, with more than 700,000 words in a single game, and he is still writing. I will support you by subscribing to Chapter 10, but I really can't read it. Come on, just practice writing, don't pursue speed, think more while writing.

Are these two sisters the only ones who will be permanent teammates in the future? At present, it seems that these two sisters are not strong enough. The gap is too big. There is no difference between playing alone with two girls.

You can lose the team battle, but the wet nurse must die. . The mortality rate of meat shields is definitely not as high as that of milk

Good looking

Those two sisters are so vicious, are they the vases that are holding them back? Does the protagonist have to be a nanny?

It's outrageous. Monsters attacking the city are just for fun. The ratio of wild monsters to humans is 100,000:3???

Chapter 36: Wild monsters attack the city and start to enjoy themselves

It is recommended that the author not use so many numbers. Those attributes take up half of the chapter and affect the reading experience.

The first real copy was badly written.

Why is there no villain to slap you in the face?

The wind follows the dragon, the cloud follows the tiger? I kind of know why no one has read this book.

Like, praise. Inappropriate dog licking, all orders will indicate

It's just a lie about the word count. Each two chapters has more than a thousand words about the protagonist's attributes.

Emmmm, I read 200 chapters, and I feel pretty good. It's not as bad as what the comment section said. There's no intelligence-lowering part. To say I look down on T is just a joke to say that T doesn't look as handsome as mages and warriors because it's the easiest to GG. It doesn't seem to have any special effects, but it's just not handsome enough. Others I think are pretty good. There's nothing poisonous about it. The comment section is so malicious 😅

I am a novice at writing, but if I have been reading for a long time, I will probably be able to finish it after 2 or 30 chapters. The content is not logically rigorous, and there is no sense of immersion when reading the whole article. Reading a refreshing article gives people a feeling of being stuck, but the author's writing of the book gives me the feeling of completely letting myself go and writing with my own ideas.

It is recommended that the author publish the protagonist's attributes as a single chapter, otherwise a large section of the main text about attributes will affect the reading experience.

It's just plain. I feel like sleeping when I look at it.

I feel like the writing is weird to read, as if the writing is not flowing smoothly, but the story is really good.

I don't understand what kind of world this is at all. It was the same at the beginning. I didn't know any equipment, and it was difficult to do tasks. Could it be that I teleported there? No beginning or end

The author is a geography teacher who failed to teach me well, but left some foreshadowing. When I saw Xidu, I felt all kinds of discomfort. The protagonist was not confused, right? ? ? ? Feng is from Chongqing, your food is from Xi'an, and Mount Tai, Mount Tai is in Shandong, how did you get there?

I just found this book and it's finished. Can anyone tell me what this book is like?