The Screenwriter Is Mysterious

After catching up to the latest chapter of this book, it is obvious that the author still wants to take the path of the mastermind behind the scenes, but compared to the previous book, which took too big a step, this time it is much more restrictive. The protagonist's ability in the previous book improved too quickly, and the goal set by the author at the beginning was too small. As a result, the protagonist's ability can fully achieve the goal later, but the overall plot actually feels like it can continue to be extended. Secondly, the division of combat power in the previous book was not rigorous enough, and the settings of various organizations were not detailed enough, which also made it impossible to continue writing in the later period and had to be unfinished (of course it is much better than Eunuch). In fact, to put it bluntly, the development of the characters in the later books exceeded the author's initial expectations, resulting in the inability to grasp the rhythm, and he could only rely on occasional bursts of inspiration to write. This would only make writing very tiring, so it was also a wise move to leave the last book unfinished. After talking about the previous book, let's come to this book. As mentioned earlier, the author probably learned the lesson from the previous book that progressed too fast, so this time the role must have plot value, and cannot keep doing things like the previous book. This is also worthy of appreciation. This time the protagonist is not in a movie world, but a world similar to a parallel universe. I won't go into the specific plot, it's better for you to watch it yourself. This time the protagonist is no longer directly invisible like the previous one, but appears more frequently. The plot is okay, it feels like watching an urban literary copycat, and the writing is relatively reasonable. It is not a direct copy, but a selection based on the background of the times. I have always had a question, how did the protagonist remember so many movie plots? Could it be that he was really a screenwriter in his previous life, so he re-wrote it based on his impressions? I haven't seen an explanation yet. Of course, it's possible that I missed it. After all, it doesn't affect reading if I don't know. Next, let's talk about the key things. This time the author did not directly use the ready-made plot, but made slight modifications by himself. In fact, it was just a mix and match. Of course, this is still in the early stage, and the mix and match is not very strong. I'm looking forward to the later scenes of werewolves fighting Maoshan Taoist priests. Of course, I don't know whether the author will let the reality created by the protagonist develop on its own, or whether every alien activity must be arranged by the protagonist. If it's the latter, then I feel like the book's enjoyment has dropped a notch, and I hope it's not like this. There are only four plots for the time being. I personally like the first and third ones better. I think they are quite interesting to write. Although the first plot is very short, the horror and madness is still very eye-catching. The second one I didn't like very much. I couldn't even tell the names clearly while watching it. In this kind of short plot, it's really difficult to tell who the author is describing. Sometimes both men and women get into the plot without understanding. After all, it's original and not a familiar character. In addition, the plot did not appear again after only a few chapters, so it was a bit hazy, so I suggest that the author pay more attention to the plot arrangement in the future. I think the third plot is the most exciting so far. It really feels like watching a blockbuster movie. It is well written and has a good setting. After watching it, I feel that this is the right direction for the development of the protagonist's abilities. It's also very interesting to create the characters here. I won't spoil the details. You can see for yourself. However, the excessive plot at the end is really boring. Maybe it's because it's like eating ordinary food after tasting something delicious! Anyway, I didn't watch that part seriously. If there is another plot like this after it is released, I don't really want to subscribe. It's okay to go too far, but I hope these plots can be more closely connected with what the protagonist is doing, without causing a serious sense of separation. I'm still watching a fantasy blockbuster earlier, and later I'm going to have a banquet and entertainment in an urban novel. If you can abbreviate it, just abbreviate it! It's not that you can't have excessive plots. For example, in the third plot, the hotel uncle delivering the meal was very interesting. He made the stingy and greedy uncle very vivid, and he also used this character to add a little lubricant to the plot. But the banquet entertainment is really not interesting. Coming to the fourth plot, I won't say more about this content. It's just that after watching it, I felt a little hesitant to talk. I felt that the plot this time was not worth spending so many plot points. And it doesn't match the style of the third plot very well. If the previous one was an orthodox dark and magical style, this time it has become a crazy and mysterious style. In my opinion, it would be interesting if it were set to be ordinary neurosis and antisocial personality caused by some reason, but in the end it was because of a prop, which made it a little less interesting. Of course, there is no doubt about the author's writing style. It is much improved compared to the previous book, but the typos are much correct compared to the previous book! Hope to have a good check. Finally, let's discuss the later development of this book! According to the current situation, the author should be planning to follow a Western fantasy background route, which will not involve too much superpowers. I feel it is best not to do that, because adding superpowers and science fiction will be too abrupt. Of course, biochemical ones will not have much impact. However, it's up to the author himself! Maybe I can write a different feeling too! After all, the fusion of the author's previous book is actually quite interesting. I am mainly worried about whether the author has prepared an outline, because without an outline, each piece of the plot may be separated, and then there will definitely be a situation where the previous book cannot be written in the later stage. If there is an outline, then at least a reasonable ending can be obtained in the later stage. The above is just my personal opinion. If there are any shortcomings, you can add them. Don't criticize, and I don't want to guide the author to write a book. I just want to express my own opinions. Whether or not you adopt the idea depends on the author. Even if you do, I still hope that the author will stick to his own ideas as much as possible. The details can be changed, but the main content still has to be decided by himself.

After reading Chapter 80, I want to leave! After seeing it now, I personally feel that the story and writing style written by the author are still very good, and I have the desire to read it! But please forgive me, a person who lives in a peaceful era, the actions of the protagonist are contrary to my three values ​​! The protagonist only relies on his own personal preferences (it was written earlier that the protagonist likes horror movies, so the screenwriter is weird) and the screenwriter is weird and kills innocent people (don't say I am a virgin bitch, am I clear? Chu)! If the protagonist has to do this because it is related to his own life, I have nothing to say. After all, don't persuade others to be good without suffering from others! Or sacrificing a group of people in order to let more people live, this is normal! But this kind of harming others just for his own pleasure and entertainment, what is the difference between the protagonist and a perverted murderer! Sorry, I can only see this! However, the plot written by the author is very exciting, and this is the truth!

Well, after reading three-quarters of the book, I feel that the author's writing is quite satisfactory. It's not as surprising as the previous book. Even though the book was suddenly finished, I was surprised. The world view described by the author is still acceptable and I can continue writing. If the author still wants to write this style of book next, I have some slight feelings below: After reading the author's last book, I suddenly thought, why not write one similar to Infinite Possession. I have written 20,000 words (for my own entertainment). After reading it, my classmates said that what I wrote is quite good. But there is also a prominent problem in my novels, which is the protagonist's goal: the protagonist has no goal, or does not have a very purposeful goal, which will make both the author and the reader feel embarrassed, and do not know the meaning of what the protagonist does. I feel that in the process of reading this book "The Mystery of Screenwriters", I don't know why Zhao Yuan did what he did. After getting the golden finger, he started to change the world. I always felt that something was missing. There is also the need to handle the relationship between characters, and this relationship happens to be what worries me. In my setting, the protagonist can exchange reputation points for character cards, and then can choose whether to possess or manifest. The protagonist creates a black organization, establishes the Greater East Asia Alliance (crossed out) in Chinatown, Los Angeles, and unifies the underground world along the Pacific coast of the United States. The plot of Conan naturally takes place after the protagonist sends gin and vodka to Japan. Then Xiaoyu, the father of Jackie Chan Adventures, was redeemed and went to Hong Kong. At this time, I was a little entangled in the identity of the father. He was the incarnation of justice, but I made him the head of the black organization in Hong Kong. Then Xiaoyu met Conan in the hotel, and Conan was shocked by Xiaoyu's magic. . . I later discovered this big problem. Xiaoyu and Conan were originally going to form a CP. . . . . . Then there is the issue of worldview. I used the Marvel world as the main body, and then added plots from The Adventures of Jackie Chan, Detective Conan, The Haunting of Bears, Grimm's Fairy Tales, Harry Potter, etc., Which would cause a conflict of world views. This required me to write down at least half of the resetting, and then integrate it, which was very troublesome. It is recommended not to do this. That's it, I hope the author will achieve greater success in 2021.

I haven't been that attracted to Voodoo since the beginning. I looked at the later chapter titles and I don't know why they tend to write about a mixture of Eastern and Western ones.

The writing is good, but updates are very slow. . .

I read twenty chapters, and it's confusing 😅. There is no explanation of the criteria for obtaining plot value. If the first script is to test the system's ability, then the second script should test the criteria for obtaining plot value, right? But the second script in the book left me confused and full of questions. I didn't know what the meaning was.

"Obviously yet but although" is too many! It's hard to listen to a book!

I'm convinced, can't you unify the protagonist's name?

This book truly makes people sleepier the more they read it. If there is no reasonable feedback, it will be difficult to read an online article. Fighting monsters, upgrading, and experiencing setbacks are all feedback systems similar to RPG games. The protagonist continues to become stronger. , Collection, this is reader feedback, the plot is the driving force, this book belongs to the protagonist who keeps writing the story, ignoring the feedback, after hundreds of chapters, the protagonist is as weak as a chicken, even with millions of plot points at hand, it is still a weak chicken, even if you get a few side-effect props, superhero transformation potions and the like, it will not be like this. Although the reality is also generally good, money, status, and the changes in the protagonist's situation are more attractive than the main plot. There are many plots, but none of them are good. It's not that the writing is bad, but the author has separated the readers from the plot. The readers rely on the protagonist to bring emotions. The author has stripped away the protagonist, but the behind-the-scenes flow is not well written. The interaction between the protagonist is too low, and the background is not there. He is just an outsider, but this outsider has not done anything yet. It seems to have gained a lot. In fact, the so-called millions and hundreds of thousands of plot points cannot bring any emotions to the readers, because the protagonist is not used to do anything, or does very little. Although Raising All Humanity discourages players and lacks common sense, the interaction between the protagonists is very good. I suggest that the author not to strip away the protagonist too much. The protagonist should at least arrange something to do. Don't exchange for nothing, at least something useful, a necklace with huge side effects, a potion that reaches the limit of the human body, and gloves that are useless. To be honest, it's ridiculous. The main character is so lacking in motivation.

I always feel that the protagonist's mentality is too good. In the real-world script that I edited, I don't feel the death at all. The protagonist is just a screenwriter. It feels like a murderer. Also, what is this protagonist trying to do? You have no dreams or pursuits, just for your own fun, editing copies to kill a bunch of people?

In the setting of the protagonist, the mysterious world disappeared for a long time due to the great purge. But now that the mysterious world has re-entered everyone's eyes, he shouldn't just appear directly and throw out a lot of settings. If it were written like that, it would be a complete failure. The way the author writes now is very good. The mysterious world now appears in everyone's eyes for various reasons. The things they come into contact with, the mysterious things, are just the "aftermath" of mysterious events one after another. The government got a glimpse of the mysterious world, but has no idea what happened. This is a story that conforms to the logic of normal reality. I hope the author can continue writing, and it would be better to have a sudden war, so that the world of normal people has no idea what is happening, but the war in the mysterious world is in full swing.

Give me a suggestion For the sake of convenience, all people who deal with exceptions are called employees To strengthen the strength of employees, you can first not strengthen their own strength, that is, add extraordinary, use various weapons left over from the past, or obsessions left by ghosts. It can be strengthened with objects, or prayers and rituals, which can easily suppress the combat effectiveness without being obtrusive. It is similar to that of Lobotomy Corporation. Each kind of legacy has its own special function and price. Of course, this author has been writing about it, which is absolutely fine, but the ones given to employees must not have side effects. Recommend 3 games for reference. Esoteric Cult Simulator, Lobotomy Company, Hunting Showdown. I won't mention The One True Witcher 3, since it's already here.

For a novel to have ups and downs and be captivating, it needs big events. Big events that are exciting and not mechanical can greatly promote the plot. Why don't we think about the existing materials and come up with some interesting ideas to give the author some inspiration Let me start first. The voodoo doll is made from a piece of demon hair and other materials. So what settings can be used for the voodoo doll? It will not be abrupt after adding it First of all, some people say that it is just to curse others? Voodoo dolls are the most famous for this, but as a big event, it is difficult to give participants an unexpected and reasonable feeling What if the voodoo dolls are actually invented by Haitian voodoo shamans to avoid evil spirits with the help of curses? Because it contains a devil's hair, you can use the devil's power to cast a curse, and because it contains a devil's hair, the devil cannot find the wizard unless you see it with your own eyes. The voodoo doll is actually a way for Haitian shamans to use voodoo curses to avoid debts (the old unlucky devil from hell is being betrayed every day) The big event starts with an investigator taking the voodoo doll to find the supernatural. After the incident, I met a demonic cultist, and then used a voodoo doll to use a curse in front of the statue, but the demon looked at me Investigator's attack mode, holding the voodoo doll mascot hanging on the investigator's shoulder with one hand and waving a trident with the other to curse the cultist. The investigator took out his pistol and hit the cultist continuously (when a person is unlucky, a hundred people can't even beat one person, well it's not your fault) Then a big incident started. Not only did he destroy the sacrificial rituals of his followers, run orders, and smashed his idols, but he was also arrogant and didn't take himself seriously The devil vowed to kill the Haitian shaman, and then asked all believers to kill the Haitian shaman. If they couldn't do it, they would all die (the devil's work is so inhumane) The investigators were inexplicably involved in the big incident Legendary Investigation Ethan Occupation: Voodoo Gunslinger A crappy Haitian shaman who owns a voodoo doll, well actually not at all, he just accidentally obtained a special voodoo doll that the voodoo shaman used to hide from debts. He can use the power of the demon attached to the voodoo doll to use curses, because the amount is so small that the demon does not even realize that it was borrowed Investigator's Voodoo The poison doll was obtained by chance. At first, it was just a souvenir for his daughter during a business trip to Haiti. Later, when the voodoo doll was playing with his daughter, he discovered that it was actually alive At first, Ethan planned to burn the doll, but was stopped by his daughter (because his wife died early, and he lacked time to take care of his daughter due to work. His daughter has always been mildly autistic, and the voodoo doll is her first friend) Out of love The daughter's guilt and the fact that she really couldn't fuck the voodoo doll caused her to fall down many times in the process Later, the daughter screamed and the voodoo doll and Ethan stopped attacking each other, and then under the daughter's intimidation?? Apologized to each other In fact, the two were quite uncooperative at first, and even competed to watch the TV The intervention in the big incident was because the daughter was going to school and Ethan prohibited the voodoo doll from following her, and then The voodoo doll was bored at home alone, so it secretly hid in Ethan's bag the next day and followed him to his workplace. Ethan was stunned at the time and threatened not to move, and then stuffed the doll into his clothes Later, he was shot during the investigation, and escaped under the protection of the voodoo doll. The reason was that when the voodoo doll was playing with the little girl, he heard his daughter say a lot about how much she likes her father, and he didn't want her to be sad. Taking this as an opportunity, Ethan began to accept the voodoo dolls Then there was a family interaction as usual. Their father and daughter and the voodoo dolls became good family members Participation in the big event content: What happened after a father found out that his daughter was caught by a cult? He took a rag doll and a pistol and banished a demon believed by thousands of people back to hell

I think the author should not be so hasty to write some "big scene" plots, and slowly spread the weird atmosphere from the people, so that the subsequent government agencies can find it more reasonable. Let's highlight a very scary thought: how many legends are true or false, and what happened to the people who disappeared in the wild... I have found the excuses for you: You don't think that those terrifying legends of vampires and werewolves are really just people's imagination, right? They are hidden deep around us, in the forest and on dark street corners... They never leave, but they only make those who encounter them never able to speak. The survivors live in the torture of darkness all their lives and try their best to forget that memory. Only when they die do they reveal the terrifying part to their families... Therefore, it is not necessary to let the people among them survive. They are all in the United States, so they are afraid of a hammer and it is over. Anyway, their death notes, audio recordings, videos and even bloody words can promote development. Think about the official investigation later to discover these so-called disappearance cases. How numb would the policeman's scalp be... I think we can slowly cultivate the characters from small scenes to get in touch with the dark side. For example, the father who studied folk culture and became obsessed was considered to be delusional. After the originally happy family fell apart, he stubbornly took his young children with him. Looking for the so-called truth to prove myself, I finally met the real thing. If the child survives, he will inherit his legacy and redress his father's injustice when he grows up. However, because he was too young, his memory is blurred and many details are lost, such as how he survived... And his father's death. What did I say when I hugged myself before... It would be easy if it was a father. He was obsessed with revenge and chasing that damn shadow, which made him a human being and a ghost. The extreme point was that he was forced to bear the crime of killing his own child, and he was imprisoned in a mental hospital for several years because he was judged to be insane. Doesn't he look good with this kind of persona? I like it very much! In my eyes, what makes the novels about the behind-the-scenes mafia flow better is actually the initial period when fantasy and reality collide, the thrill of pushing through the clouds and taking control of everything. Therefore, the author does not have to be too eager to push the mystery. I hope the author can see that there must be strong behind-the-scenes style and the storyline must be deep. The current plot is equivalent to directly saying to the government: Hey! I'm here, you idiot, you haven't noticed that I'm stupid, it doesn't make any difference. Finally, let's add some details to so many words.

The protagonist's thoughts and actions lack purpose. They are all for the sake of plot. What's the point of the protagonist doing things like this? Fun? Not fun. Very boring!

How can a good novel lack idioms? Let me go first. The screenwriter is mysterious.

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt a bit confused. I felt like the protagonist was just playing a game. First of all, the acquisition of plot points is very inexplicable. There is almost no relevant mechanism setting at all. It does not rely on influence, richness of the plot, or box office. So it is just as much as the author wants? Secondly, the plot is over when it's over, don't you care about the subsequent impact at all? The wolfsbane left behind by the wolf girl disappeared after the plot ended? The third point is that the character of the protagonist feels very inexplicable. On the one hand, it is very aloof and feels like a game life. After getting the system, you don't need it to make money, you don't use it to make yourself stronger, you don't use it to do justice and realize your ambitions. It's just a game life. It's like playing a game. You don't care about what you get, the life, death, or feelings of the game characters. It's just for entertainment, and you put yourself in a god-like position. But on the other hand, it involves reality and the pursuit of fame and fortune, which gives people a feeling of complete separation.

You are still suspicious of the system, you speak with emotion and you suspect that it has ulterior motives, you are constantly worried about it all day long, you are cold and mechanical in guessing whether it is hiding, you are half-disabled, don't worry, you are also doubting whether it is pretending, are you not an ordinary person, are you out of your mind? What's your system diagram? Are you ordinary? Are you a loser? Is it because you are poor and your career is unsuccessful? Even your soul is not worth anything, right? You are so narcissistic every day that you are speechless and just ignore it without any explanation. After enjoying this kind of power and life, can you go back?

Just after the Qingming Festival, the weather became slightly cooler, and the west wind screamed the chill of the Qingming Festival. At this time, an author was passing by. I didn't know his name, so he called him the author, and called him Passerby A. Due to the recent repeated weather, A caught a slight cold, perhaps mixed with the epidemic and under the influence of mysterious power. There are some mutations... He just traveled through time, and he was still a young child. I don't know how long it took to wake up from the darkness, wake up from the silence, a wave of waves passed by, and I was about to open my eyes. But still feeling the beauty of the new world, he lost consciousness. Died hastily by the snap of Thanos' fingers Part 2 It's a pity that because someone is a time traveler, the world does not record his information. When everything in the Marvel world returns to normal Looking back, there is one person missing.

After reading the first few scripts of the free chapter, I found that the supporting character in the real-life script written by the male lead was too mentally retarded. She was a pure tool to promote the plot, not only the NPCs played by the male lead but also the real people involved. Then the author wrote the male protagonist's real-life script which is equivalent to retelling the outline of the film, and the behind-the-scenes influence on the plot accounted for very little. This development made me very hesitant to continue watching, so I put it aside for now. The writing style is good and the writing is smooth.

The writing is very good, two monthly passes are given 😊 In addition, if the writing is very good, if there are some complaints or praise written by book friends in the comments, be sure not to be criticized or to start revising if they have something they want to see; readers can write whatever they say, and it is easy to disrupt their own rhythm. I read a few books that I thought were pretty good, but a lot of readers started complaining and the author started to make changes. Then I felt uncomfortable, and those readers were not necessarily happy either. After all, you wrote the book, not them, and if it was changed according to theirs, then why should they read it? There is also the issue of official power. Just like some book friends suggested slowly bringing the government closer to the edge of extraordinary events, they actually wanted the author to write down a reasonable logic. It was originally just a legendary thing that suddenly appeared, and the reactions from all parties were actually a highlight of the behind-the-scenes flow. However, many novels have obvious plots to reduce intelligence (😆ah, I feel tired). It seems that the author's writing is quite good now, keep up the good work. The following is my imagination, just take a look, I will be very happy if it helps the author First, the issue of time In fact, there are many novels, from the appearance of the supernatural, to the government and the people believing in the existence of the extraordinary, to the emergence of the extraordinary existence among the people, the time is too short (even a large number of people have been exposed to the supernatural for less than a year, surpassing the extraordinary characters that the author arranged to live for decades in the earlier plot). Time is necessary to advance the plot. If transcendence is so easy to achieve, then the plot characters created before will appear to be useless, and even the transcendence will be much inferior. For example, in the normal world of immortal cultivation (from a book I read that I think is relatively normal), a person can only start practicing Qi when he is ten years old and has matured. No matter how talented he is, it will take five years to build a foundation. Normally, it will take twenty years or more, let alone the majority of people who are limited by talent and cannot build a foundation. A transcendent path that starts from the very beginning and is down-to-earth requires enough time for people to be exposed to it and study it, and then it takes time to practice. (If it is a superpower such as mutants, there is also time to study genes and develop abilities. Just like in DC, mutants do not have a long history, and they began to integrate into society with research on killing, etc.) My suggestion is that in addition to the characters designed by the author, other ordinary people should not be too eager to improve their strength to promote the plot after being exposed to a truly extraordinary path, so that they can be exposed to more and more amazing designs. There are so many fascinating legends that I can't even finish them all, so don't be too hasty. And the longer the time span, if written down, it would really have an epic feel. Of course, I feel quite comfortable with the big rhythm now. Second, the government and civilians There are many novels about behind-the-scenes novels in which the government subdues people and civilians only have contact with extraordinary lucky people and Internet trolls. It's not that it's not a good thing to write like this. After all, it involves too many government parties and it's easy to get 404, and the Internet trolls liven up the atmosphere, but it feels a bit too monotonous. Common people, It's like if you don't come into contact with extraordinary people, you have to envy, envy, hate and act like a licking dog. When you come into contact with extraordinary people, you will have all kinds of intrigues, endless joy in life, and be superior to others. In fact, people after the age of 30 generally lose the middle-mindedness and will be content with the status quo and will not fight to the death for an illusory thing. Those who are too young will be restrained by their parents. The middle part depends on fate. After the emergence of the extraordinary path, it is possible for intrigues to appear in the United States. The leaders of the four major capital projects in the United States, "finance, energy, arms, and medical care," may be very interested. This is a new capital, and they are used to being superior. How can they let others take advantage of this new "business opportunity" and let others stand on their head? It's basically like a group of sharks seeing a huge new cake. In China, elite talents will be selected from society to popularize them based on their extraordinary applicability. The military should be the first to be introduced. After all, people are the first priority, and this is how we should protect our country. Soldiers are given priority, high-level elites are second, it's fair... River Crab Dad, I was wrong... I'm suddenly scared 😨, it's better to take it easy Come on!

Hey, I'm looking forward to it

It's very well written, and I agree that the progress in the essence comments should not be too fast. I have seen a lot of behind-the-scenes streams, but most of them progress too fast and the protagonist is too active in his own script. He has left the behind-the-scenes category and become a brave man. The behind-the-scenes streams mainly focus on the normal worldview's step-by-step response to the unknown, constantly interacting with the script, rather than becoming a spectator who only knows shock and cheers. , Afraid, they also need to grow and participate in the script. If the progress is too fast and the combat power becomes too fast, then you can only enjoy yourself by watching the protagonist's end.

So far it's okay, it's pretty good, but one of the biggest shortcomings of this work right now is that there are too few updates, and it's not enough to read, so you understand the author 😏

Behind-the-scenes writing depends on the IQ of the protagonist and the outcome of the plot, only the writing style

Please let me know if there are any other books of this type. I like them very much. It's a pity that this book collapsed and was cut.

Can there be a plot where the god of death is coming?😄

The writing is sometimes confusing, and the logic of the protagonist's actions is not strong.

If you have the same type of trouble, please share. I quite like this setting.

The author's new book "American Comics: I Drawed Superman During the Great Depression" has been released