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I didn't want to watch anything like Wuhun when I saw it. I was very sad about the death of my wife. How was college life?

I lost interest in the second chapter when I saw it was about Douluo Wuhun. I've been reading novels for 10 years, but I just can't read Tang San's books and I'm not interested in Tang San.

This book is a American comic, right? What ended up happening? Urban fantasy anti-Japanese drama? The poisonous point in front of you is fine. I just came over here. But I came here to see American comics. You have gone to live in China to fight against Japan. Do you have anything to do with the United States? Although the Divine Spear Bureau is indeed in American comics, it is not played in this way. The focus is on China. How about writing a Hammer American comic?

Damn it, Wuhun? ? ? Does anyone else write this stuff? After seeing this thing, I didn't dare to read your book, for fear that I would end up in the hospital and not be able to get out.

It seems a bit awkward to use Douluo's system

Douluo makes me vomit. Now when I see a book related to Douluo, I just abandon the book without saying much. This book is too cruel. The first chapter starts directly with Douluo. It is also the kind of super power that directly starts Douluo. I vomited. I really don't want to read it.

Doesn't the protagonist have any objections to Matt? Judging from the plot of the movie, Matt treats Andrew like a normal cousin. He takes him to play, wants him to integrate into the group, and does not bully him. What's the problem? Even if he kills Andrew later, it is because he went black and went on a killing spree. And Andrew is pitiful, but his pity comes from his father's neglect of the family, drinking and domestic violence, and he later turned black to take revenge and hurt innocent people. In reality, of course we should do everything we can to help this kind of person before he is no longer anti-social. But if this kind of person goes dark and retaliates and affects innocent people, he must also bear responsibility, okay? Can you have a normal outlook on life, and complain directly to your enemies instead of passers-by?

The author has no ability to control the plot, and the plot is a mess. Let me explain it to you. First of all, when it comes to out-of-control superpowers, if you give Godzilla a martial spirit, it is written in plain language, and you can just give it telekinesis. You can put away the power crystals and keep them to develop the subsequent plot. The second system is completely unnecessary. According to the initial plot of wilderness survival, you can develop telekinesis with peace of mind, improve the protagonist's knowledge points and become a scientific researcher yourself. Use wilderness survival to drive the plot of the second part of the Python Disaster. Don't change the Python's abilities, get the blood orchid, and develop the genetic ability to strengthen the body. This is the main plot of the second part. I haven't read the rest of it, I just want to tell you to study it carefully for every one you want to write. The plot must be smooth, don't hit here and there, what do you want us to see? The most poisonous thing is to return to China for development. Don't you know that it's easy to get blocked if you write in China these days? It is easy to get blocked regardless of good or bad writing. As soon as you write it, it will disappear. Readers may take a look at it and it may disappear one day. Who would care to read your book?

I get annoyed when I see Douluo being written. I heard that Tang San paid for people to write Douluo himself to create popularity. Damn, it's really annoying.

Who is Andrew? You can check many versions of Andrew online. Is Andrew the protagonist's husband? I feel like I can tell everything about Andrew, and more than 770% of this book contains Andrew. Is he really the protagonist's husband?

I didn't know what to write, so I was persuaded to quit after the first chapter. Andrew didn't turn black because he suddenly gained strength. It is a dead child who has been beaten and bullied by an alcoholic father for a long time. He is helpless when his mother is chronically ill and has no money to treat her. In the end, he went to robbery to treat his mother's illness. The incomprehension of his companions and the abuse from his father made him want to resist, and his resistance was relatively strong. I don't know if the author has read what he wants to write. I feel like he took some settings for granted and just wanted to make himself happy. I don't know what he was thinking about, but it's too ugly to return the spirit of Godzilla.

I really recommend removing Wuhun. It's so unappetizing. It's not that Douluo is not good, but there are too many fans. It really makes people vomit. Check the search list. There are 90 Douluo fans out of a hundred.

Godzilla was originally very strong, but now he has become a Douluo Continent martial spirit, no matter how strong he is, he is still weak. If you don't write about Douluo fans, then don't write about Wuhun. This stuff is really rubbish.

🤔 After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. There's that Andrew everywhere. I feel like the protagonist is gay and weird.

There is always a feeling that the protagonist is Andrew's father, who has to solve psychological problems, solve family problems, and also consider starting a business in the future. This is not like recruiting a younger brother.

The American capitalists are ruthless, they start with assassinations, they snatch inventions and everything. The protagonist is too naive, those things are too complex, and the water is too deep for him to grasp.

I haven't seen Douluo yet, so I feel like I just added a soul ring system and really took off my pants and farted. Can't you just give me a Godzilla as a gift? I have to get a soul ring

This Andrew is useless. He neither advances the plot nor enriches the character of the protagonist. He appears so frequently that he is almost as good as the protagonist. Moreover, the plug-ins and background settings are riotous. It's simply ridiculous! It's just a hodgepodge, and Marvel, why don't you go to New York to join forces and return to China to develop business? Is this going to become an urban business article?

Three chapters open! Gold persuades you to quit!

I feel like vomiting when I see something related to Douluo. It's gone. It's the same old routine and there are still people writing 666. I really feel like vomiting. What about Douluo fighting to break through the sky and swallow it up? It's perfect and so on. I'm going to vomit. I'll be poisoned directly.

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I feel like the backend has something to do with the Python disaster.

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Fortunately, Ji Wen was a eunuch. Otherwise, I would have had to fight a few times, and there was not even a female character. There was only Andrew, who is closer than your father. I know you are a straight man, but if you don't know, I thought you loved Andrew deeply and would never change until death, and you were willing to give everything. It was really disgusting. Okay, I feel much better.

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