Daily Life of a Cyber Magician

More than food and grass, magic, suspense (there is suspense but not a strong sense of suspense), light-hearted, cyberpunk, single girl, sister style. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into crafting this book. Suitable for personal taste, once exciting (serious). First of all, this book has created many supporting characters with very charismatic personalities, who are distinctive enough but not full enough. Perhaps because it is an online book, the author intentionally does not want to be too serious. At the same time, in order to embed magic elements, the book has a large space to describe relaxed daily life and a relaxed atmosphere. So when the supporting characters died for their ideas, my heart was not disturbed. I had expectations for the following, but I only looked forward to the expansion of the world view, the revelation of suspense, and the development of the plot. Secondly, the male protagonist's motivation is insufficiently expressed. Although the explicit indications of the past life and the description of the present life all depict the darkness of the social background, the planning of the hitchhiking murder case and the formation of a force based on the memory of the protagonist and similar characters to the protagonist all tell or imply that the protagonist is not peaceful and restless in his heart. But perhaps because of the fear of deviating from the main line, there is too little description of the protagonist's experiences in the previous life, and there is not enough psychological analysis of the ride-hailing murder. As for the hints about the character of the flat spirit, they are really just hints, just what the readers associate. Their true characters are full of nonsense, and they are either making fun of them or on the way to making fun of them. The second is the hiding of the narrative perspective, which may not be very suitable for online articles, and the third person. Finally, it is recommended to try to separate the relaxed atmosphere from the suspenseful atmosphere, which should be relaxed and relaxed, and which should be suspenseful, and narrate the protagonist's past life through memories. If important clues are hidden, they can be supplemented in fragments. Anyway, the narrative perspective is hidden. Finally, please have a daily routine with Sister Ruo. It's too little. I want candy. Finally, at the end, hiding has hidden benefits, and relaxation also has benefits (however, relaxation, that is, when the suspense atmosphere is not strong, the hidden perspective is finally revealed. I really didn't suddenly realize that it was like this). The author is okay and advances according to his own ideas. After all, writing is like childbirth, and the work is the child, which must ultimately be the author's own. Last, last, last, last, the above is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, but you are welcome to discuss and speak in good faith. (Manual dog head) There is no end. Above.

Very interesting setting, and the writing is also very good. However, I feel that the setting of the magician's trick is a bit unsettling. Will the effect be permanently retained after upgrading? Although controllable abilities bring convenience to writing, it reduces the pleasure of reading for readers who like to watch the protagonist grow and strengthen. The amount of ability can be controlled through the retained mechanism rather than the speed of cracking or deus ex machina (the speed of cracking is completely determined by the author without any need for foreshadowing, which is similar to deus ex machina). It's so amazing - your magic tricked him? People can retain their abilities permanently, and their skills are astonishing—your magic numbers and effects can be retained permanently when they reach the corresponding thresholds. Practice makes perfect—when your abilities are retained for a period of time or used a certain number of times, they can be retained permanently.

After Chapter 192, I couldn't understand it anymore. I felt like the protagonist was a completely different person. His personality changed too much, so I just gave up.

I stayed up late and finished reading it, so here's a little review First of all, it's pretty good. The whole book is very interesting It's just that the control was a little bit poor and I felt like I couldn't control the plot trend. I hope I can adjust it to write what the author wants to write. Then the scenes of a few girls can be slightly reduced in dialogue or daily life. Meaningless dialogue or psychological description will appear to be watery The meaningless jokes that cannot shape the image and advance the plot can be reduced But the jokes and daily routines can be appropriately played to relax the rhythm of the whole book. I don't understand magic. Tu Yile. Also, the cybernetic elements are a bit thin, and the female characters could be used to focus on the description. After all, that is the title of the book. Yaofeng and Mugungluo are a little regretful. They didn't stop the car and died suddenly. They haven't finished writing about the main brain and the things outside the city. I feel that if I just write about the main brain, I will rush into the end. I hope the author will control it carefully! Come on.

A few words about the early magic and derivative entries. I think many people didn't understand it. 1. Magic performed by supernatural powers is not recognized. This is related to the essence of magic. Magic is a process of deception by confusing the real with the fake. What is done with superpowers is not considered magic, because it is real and has nothing to do with deception or anything like that. Even if you use supernatural powers to achieve magical effects, it will not be recognized by the entry "Tricks". After all, this goes against the nature of the magician profession. 2. The mystery coefficient is greater than 1.0, Which means that people have extraordinary abilities, but there are basically no such people under normal circumstances. The fact that the protagonist is lower than 1.0 But can use superpowers is related to the subsequent plot, which is a foreshadowing. That's all I can think of for the time being. If you have any other questions, you can also ask them in this post. There is no need to question many of the contents because they are probably foreshadowing or I didn't read them carefully or I didn't explain them clearly.

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The creativity and plot are very good, but the rhythm in the later stage is messed up, and the ending is too hasty, just like a delicious food that took a long time to make, and just took a bite, it was snatched away and eaten by a passerby.

Chloe S is so sloppy. In addition, the protagonist has an extra identity of Smiley Face for no apparent reason. There is no explanation of the cause and effect. In the end, this book is such a pity. I feel that it can be written in the future. It is quite interesting.

To be honest, it's not cybernetic enough, but it's well written, but sometimes the foreshadowing is too vague. After all, the reader reads the book from a God's perspective. You have written out the protagonist's psychological activities, and then you arrange the protagonist to have a smiling face, which makes people feel a bit awkward. Moreover, the death of the supporting character is not portrayed deeply enough. For example, Yaofeng, a good character, but there is almost no side description, so that his death did not make me feel at all, it just felt quite sudden. Come on, author, practice a little more, you have the potential to become a great master. The organization Wildfire needs to spend more time conceiving, otherwise the sudden appearance of fxszy will be very abrupt. Okay, more foreshadowing, come on.

Intrusion and deletion

This book had the potential to become a god😭

The plot of the first chapter is completely like the beginning of a novel, especially the sentence "A mere nanny made me completely sure," [あづま] Love Mi Furuフレグランス, a stand-alone novel, this is the first chapter. (Quickly like 😜😜)

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I personally feel that the plot of Orange Clothes is really unappealing. At least for me personally, I read this book for magic, solving crimes, and cyberpunk. This is completely putting the cart before the horse (personal opinion)

I can no longer look directly at this novel. Every time the four tablets are making jokes , I always think it is the four Zhang Wei, laughing until I am blurry at night

I finished reading it in one go. Please cast your monthly vote and ask for more details. This is so reasonable.

After reading it, it's a bit unfinished. From the middle, the protagonist turns into a smiling face. It's unclear. Some of the content is a bit vague. At the end, the protagonist and the heroine go back in time after performing a magic trick. It doesn't explain how to supplement the final logical chain...

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I want to ask a question, if the current protagonist falls in love with a heroine from a parallel universe, is it considered a kind of NTR?🙂

Is there a Shennong? Can you fall into the trap? The overwhelming number of positive reviews in the comment area reminded me of the days when 100 positive reviews were available for 8 yuan on Taobao...

If you have nothing to do, give the author a monthly vote, just in case it gets better.

When did the male protagonist turn into a smiling face? Isn't the smiley face a smoke bomb released by the fox? When did you suddenly become the protagonist? I was confused.

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Chapter 184 is a bit confusing. There is no clear explanation at the beginning. If too many people fight, it will be confusing.

It's quite interesting. I'll give it a monthly vote in case it gets better.

This book removes Cyber ​​from its title. It will get angry back.

The ending is a bit too rushed, unfortunately

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A: I understand! It is not popular because there is no tense plot There is no "Deep Blue, add it to me!" There is no "My son Wang Teng actually has..." B: But the setting of the book is a light novel. Why do light novels have tense plots and urgent upgrades to fight monsters A: The definition of light novels is not "efficient expression" and " "Easy to read"? It's not popular probably because the setting is complicated. The worldview is both suspense and a pitfall, which can only be revealed in the later stages B: The master of best friends has to fill in the pits step by step... A: The God of the Bathroom also needs to level up and fight monsters... B: People's hearts are not ancient, everyone likes fast pace and fun.