Starting by Treating Naruto

Haha, I saw someone say that Sasori felt guilty for turning his parents into puppets, is that even possible? His parents died in battle, killed by Konoha's White Fang. Those two puppet father and mother were made by Sasori himself from wood; they weren't human puppets back then.

The protagonist hadn't awakened his Sharingan by age eleven? Are you sure he's not a complete waste? And you call him a genius slightly inferior to Neji...? And Hinata awakened her Sharingan at four or five, needing the protagonist's help to awaken it at ten?

I'm not making a personal attack; I just hope the author will read this, as it's my way of giving the author some advice. I haven't read this book yet. I'm just offering some suggestions based on the author's previous two books (Naruto and Detective Conan fanfiction). To be honest, I really enjoy reading the author's writing because many of the ideas are very interesting.

The premise is interesting, but unfortunately, the author's focus on the protagonist's cultivation journey, including the use of first-grade elixirs and a third-grade divine tree, feels out of place. The opening scene wastes Naruto's greatest advantage by squandering the Nine-Tails' chakra. The author simultaneously disdains the Eight Trigrams Palm technique while still trying to learn it.

Healing illnesses should be quite interesting; in the past, I often watched movies about becoming stronger through cooking.

This book is fantastic; it could be a classic once it's finished. 😍 Keep updating! 😎

The protagonist, a man, gets pregnant and gives birth. To be honest, I couldn't relate to it at all, so I left. One last thing: a medical system, the protagonist should at least know medicine, right? At least medical ninjutsu, right? But he knows nothing. He gets sick, the system cures him, and after the system cures him, it rewards him. Is this system not the biological father of the protagonist?

Keep it up! It's written in a very unique and interesting way; I really like this type of book. It's very creative, and I think this book is quite good. ~(O´ω`o)ノ

Naruto's failure to destroy Konoha proves that he was indeed brainwashed by the Mangekyou Sharingan.

The more I looked, the more something seemed off. Naruto spends money on a prank? Why would he eat food that contained ginseng and sand? Why drink expired milk? He was basically beaten and scolded during his childhood, and was often hungry. All I can say is that this book is incredibly toxic; it's not for me. Just sharing my opinion. It's definitely a daily dose of poison.