The Queen of Konoha Can Only Be Hinata Hanabi

The book is a good book, but the fireworks are really poisonous

I think there is an ability that is particularly useful for Pirates in the Naruto World. It is not domineering, but - life return! The return of life allows people to eat a lot of food to increase their physical strength and break through the limits of their original bodies. If coupled with the Akimichi clan's secret technique of butterfly transformation, it can break through the status quo of non-Otsutsuki clan descendants not being able to reach the super shadow (the same death like the Death Gate does not count).

What is the Third Generation? Let's talk about Black Danzo. From Nagato's point of view, after Jiraiya came back, Danzo heard about the Rinnegan Eye and designed an investigation to expose it. Hanzo and Nagato captured the Rinnegan Eye, but failed in the end. During the Ninja World War, White Fang's reputation increased and he blocked himself from becoming Hokage. He designed rumors to attack White Fang's reputation, causing White Fang to commit suicide. Uchiha Kagami died mysteriously, colluded with Orochimaru, gave Orochimaru the sealed book, wood escape cells, and studied wood escape. He was looking for an opportunity to betray Orochimaru and pass the information to the third generation. Orochimaru defected, and Jiraiya went after him. He designed Kato Dan, causing Tsunade to leave the village. Note that the body of spiritual transformation cannot be moved. How could Kato Dan be activated in a dangerous place? When Minato came out, he had no choice but to endure it. The Nine-Tails Rebellion preserved his strength, and the big soy sauce behind him designed the Uchiha to prevent them from going up, which caused the village to be suspicious of Uchiha, thus leaving the seeds for the Uchiha rebellion. After Minato died, he thought that he would be the Hokage in Konoha now (the three ninjas left, White Fang died, and no one was more suitable than him), but suddenly the third generation was one step ahead of him. After the Nine-Tails incident, the fight for the Nine-Tails failed. The third generation announced that he would hide all of Naruto's life experience. Feeling that the opportunity had come, he quietly spread rumors that Naruto was a nine-tailed demon fox. He took the opportunity to use public opinion to attack Naruto. When Naruto went berserk, he put pressure on the third generation to control the Nine-Tailed Jinchuriki. Unfortunately, Naruto was kind-hearted and never went berserk The Hinata incident took the opportunity of the cowardice of the third generation to win over the hearts of the big family. Yamazhao, Aburame went to follow, Kakashi designed Kakashi to assassinate the third Hokage, and sent Yamato one after another, and then the two were instigated by the third generation to rebel During the Uchiha Rebellion, I heard about Suizhi's other gods, which led to the failure of the plans of the Third Generation and Suizhi. Then, under the control of the Third Generation, Don't stop killing the Uchiha clan. (I have this opinion of the other gods after watching Naruto. The other gods do not control people, but exert an illusion of consciousness on people's subconscious. For example, Mifune helped me get the top position in the alliance. The third generation should do the same). After using it, I found a CD and secretly removed all the eyes of the Uchiha clan and transplanted the Sharingan. Konoha's collapse plan revealed information to Orochimaru and killed the third generation. When Orochimaru said that Konoha was rotten, he was talking about the roots of Konoha. Orochimaru came here just for Sasuke, to show off his skills in front of the third generation, and then let Konoha experience war. It would be too comfortable, otherwise Orochimaru would reveal too much information and kill the Fourth Kazekage, otherwise it would hold the Third Generation back. The third generation died, Danzo thought, now there is no one to rob me. Then the two old guys, plus Jiraiya's return, overwhelmed him again, and later Tsunade took over. Pain invaded, killed the contact toad, waited for the opportunity to succeed, conserved his strength first, and waited for Tsunade to die in battle. He was trying to turn the tide to save Konoha. Unexpectedly, Naruto came back to refresh Naruto's reputation, Tsunade was in a coma, threatened the daimyo, and made herself the acting Hokage. The God's CD was just right, and she controlled Mifune to make herself the leader of the alliance. Unfortunately, she was found out. In the end, she was worried about Obito, and was killed by Sasuke

I am disgusted with the character of Hinata Hanabi created by the author. The most boring thing about creating such a female supporting character is that the protagonist will definitely have the idea of ​​​​recovering her lower body in the end and will not kill her at all. Moreover, there are so many time-travelers, including Hinata Hanabi and Yuhi Nana. If they are not time-travelers, they will be seriously OOC. It doesn't look like a Hokage fan at all anymore, but more like some urban flow.

No matter how you fill this pit of Hanabi, it's full of poison.

Sparks attract me, sparks persuade me

I saw Chapter 44 and gave up. There are many reasons. The core problem is that the settings of several female characters are wrong, and their power and influence are too much. To be honest, the existence of big-breasted women prevents many incidents from happening. It is impossible that other ninja villages don't know about it at all. Even if they don't know who it is, they will know that there is such a person.

There is no basis for Spark's strength at all. He is so strong at the age of 7. When he grows up, he is either Spark or Kaguya.

Chapter 23 abandoned. To summarize: 1. There is nothing wrong with the setting of plot characters 2. The plot advancement of the male protagonist is too deliberate 3. The group of characters gives people a feeling of forcibly promoting the plot 4. It is a bit of a hodgepodge. I want to write about everything, but when they are piled together, nothing is written. The author wanted to show the high-level people, but writing the behavior of the high-level people is to lower their IQ 6. Hanabi and Otsutsuki Ichiraku, I personally feel that it is a bit of a failure.

Children grow up

The author of the cliffhanger is changed, but it is still the author of the bloody romance drama. You can refer to the screenwriter of the novel adapted into the TV series.

At the age of 7, he continuously used five A-level ninjutsu plus ninjutsu without losing breath, and he could still fight later. What kind of chakra amount is this, can a child's meridians withstand it? What kind of concept is this? Kakashi and Itachi are both fake geniuses, Hashirama and Ben are also rubbish. This reminds me of the past few years when I learned ninjutsu at the age of 2, became a shadow level at the age of 5 (actually there is no such level), and unified the ninja world at the age of 10. Although the blood of the sisters is very strong, they have not yet awakened. What kind of protagonist can be so strong? Just wait a few years for the sparks to split them all.

After reading three chapters, I gave up decisively. The plot was too tough.

If I were a high-level official in Konoha, I would also doubt the protagonist. The protagonist is a commoner who was not very good before and had no way to learn advanced knowledge. Suddenly he became a genius and developed a bunch of unprecedented things. No one would doubt it.

My lungs were blown away after watching this. I really want to report this book. Forget it, delete the book.

It feels so different. The fireworks and the sunset are nothing. I can't stand it.

As expected, I couldn't write anymore. I told him not to play like that and to do such ridiculous things.

I want to comment, but I don't know what to say specifically. After reading part of it, there are a lot of private goods, the original characters are a bit strange, and Hinata Hanabi also feels very problematic at the moment.

In fact, many people don't know that Xiao Li's surname is not Li.

. . Why do you want to play with technology in Naruto? Orochimaru's route in biotechnology is acceptable, but doing other technologies reminds me of Boruto and Poison.

Self-pleasure, illogical, not watching Naruto, a mindless struggle for hegemony, or a struggle for hegemony with insufficient IQ? Disgusting, disgusting, disgusting, it's rubbish

I feel a little sick to my stomach when I read this book. I'll leave now. I'll feel better later. Please give me a kick.

If you have made it clear that Hinata Hanabi is the heroine, then this misunderstanding should occur as little as possible. Even if there is such a misunderstanding, resolve it as quickly as possible. You have to drag out dozens or hundreds of pictures, and then do it again. It is useless for you to say that your stomachache is stable. First of all, if the emotional scene will cover up all your other advantages, as the only novel, as long as your shortcomings are big enough, you are the winner. No matter how many things you order, you will be scolded as a bad person, because your outline has already made it clear, and the title of the book has also made it clear. The queen is Hinata Hanabi, and it is clear on two points. One is that the heroine is Hinata Hanabi, and the second is that the fight for hegemony unifies the ninja world, and unifies the world and becomes the emperor. The two mainstream ones, one of them points to walking on two legs. You can't walk enough, so cut off a section. Do you think this kind of thing is okay? I can't help it, I've been urging you, I understand, I understand, but, as soon as I opened the comment, I couldn't help it

There are basically no comments. Author, most of your novel starts with the scene where Hanabi goes to Kyoto. I haven't read it very much.

Damn it, if you don't know what to write, just don't write it, okay? After all, I just learned to write! I know that the author only wrote it on a whim after reading a few Naruto fanfics. After all, rebellious children are always passionate, so please don't scold the author! Ugh~ I can't make it up anymore, fuck, you ****, 🐎***,!

Diary of an intermittent psychotic patient

The content is quite novel. It's rare to see such novel Naruto novels. I hope the author can continue to persevere.

Readers who haven't seen it, please read this. I couldn't stand it when I saw Hanabi promised to marry to Kyoto. I made Hanabi the heroine. It was too poisonous. I left.

This book is painful to read... But the setting is fascinating. What a pity

"I'm in Naruto, I grabbed Madara's neck and started dancing" Please read it, thank you very much, you can delete the post, just don't complain