I Really Don't Want to Flame Anyone

Looking at the picture, I can't say anything, nor can I express anything further.

Fatty Seven, the alliance I owe you continues. May your new book sell like hotcakes.

I saw the donation and came in to check it out. The synopsis made it seem like an interesting novel, so I persevered and read six or seven chapters, but I couldn't continue. The first three chapters are all about explaining the world-building. The protagonist is slow to react from the start, constantly rambling on about how he came to be alive.

Honestly, the writing is really bad. The three most important chapters were practically read off the page. Can you imagine the protagonist just passively observing the supporting characters' attacks on their mother for thousands of words? While novels often use a technique of building suspense before building positivity, this was a bit too harsh, and the climax never materialized.

If I were a powerful being, I'd slap the protagonist to death. I wouldn't tolerate him babbling in front of me.

Hello everyone, this is a post about collecting debts. 😤

Why bother? Why did you do this? 😏Even if you switched to urban fiction, it wouldn't have flopped so badly. You wrote a fantasy novel and chased away half the fans of your previous military novel (including me). It's like a rocket that was going to take off but ended up crashing to the ground.

Why does this book have so many monthly votes? It's not very interesting! It's just talk! But lacking real strength is the biggest flaw!! In this transmigrated world, strength speaks for itself!! Without strength, talking is just idiotic!

The protagonist transmigrates into a cultivation world, and in the very first chapter, he's in an abnormal state! How can he not arouse suspicion? It feels like he only survived the first chapter because the author forced it.

The chapter was short, and there was a reason why Lin Feifan left in such a hurry.