I Really Don't Want to Flame Anyone

Looking at the picture, I can't say anything even if I don't speak

Fei Qi, I owe you the alliance to continue. New book sells well

I saw the reward and came in to read it. I thought it was an interesting novel after reading the introduction. I endured reading six or seven chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. Each of the three golden chapters contains a bunch of popular science world views. The protagonist reacts slowly at the beginning and keeps talking nonsense about how he survived for a long time. Then in the fifth or sixth chapter, he says that he wrote novels in his previous life. That's too much to react to. Then he said that the villain at the beginning was the son of a x, and started to learn about other people's life experiences, Anger 5. Later, his mother was not angry because of him pretending to be stupid, Anger 10. The numerical values ​​are based on the author's mood. Then the system is intelligent. The protagonist has a problem and needs her. She gets angry and ignores the protagonist. Also in the ancestral hall, when the protagonist was cursing. He said a lot of modern curse words and those people still understood them. This worldview is messy

To be honest, the writing is really not very good, and the three golden chapters include three chapters of persuading people to quit. Can you imagine that the main character and the supporting characters are attacking the mother for thousands of words throughout the whole process? Although writing novels is about suppressing first and then leaning back, but you suppressed it a bit harshly, and the most important thing is that you didn't lift up later. It's quite frustrating to watch! Seeing that the results are so good, they are probably contributed by old readers. I don't think this author can successfully transform! Although I only read the first 5 chapters!

If I were a powerful person, I could just slap the protagonist to death. How could I tolerate the protagonist beeping in front of me?

Hello everyone, this is a debt collection post 😤

Why bother? Why are you doing this? 😏 Even if you moved to the city, you wouldn't have been so miserable. Writing a fantasy novel directly drove away half of the fans of the previous military novel (including me). It was like a rocket that was originally going to go to the sky, but it turned around and landed on the ground. By the way, I would like to make a small suggestion. I hope you will carefully write the title and introduction of your next book. Otherwise, I believe that many people will not have the desire to click on this book when they see this name. If I were not a fan of your military literature, I would not click on this book to comment at all. Okay, I won't irritate you anymore. I'll wait for your next book to see how it goes. I hope your next book will be an urban novel. At least your transformation span won't be that big and you won't lose so many military fans. I have already thought of the subject for you, so I will write about the process of retired soldiers integrating into society.

Why does this book have so many monthly subscriptions? ? It's not interesting! Just talk! But not having this strength is the biggest bug! ! The world you travel through is all about strength! ! Talking nonsense when you have no strength is mentally retarded!

The protagonist's soul travels through the world of cultivating immortals, and he is in an abnormal state in the first chapter! Can it not be suspected? I feel like being able to survive past the first chapter is all down to the author's force.

One chapter down, not to mention it is short, there is still a reason why Lin Feifan left in a hurry.