Showbiz: Kicked Out by My Star Wife from the Start

When readers are seventeen or eighteen, you write about break-up stories; when readers are in their twenties, you write about staying-at-home dad stories; when readers are in their thirties, you write about divorce stories. They're collaborating to fleece the same group of readers.

Judging from the fact that the protagonist's wife seemed unaware of the manager's actions, I felt she hadn't done anything wrong. In modern society, having experienced the rules of the entertainment industry in his past life, how could he let his girlfriend go into it alone? It can only mean the male lead didn't love her; only by not loving her could he comfortably remain a couch potato.

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Honestly, to be able to sit and happily drink with a woman who framed you for using your PC... Forgive my bluntness, but it's absolutely toxic. Instead of doing everything they can to get revenge and find evidence to clear their names, they actually sat down together for drinks and to have sex with each other... I'm disgusted.

The writing is good, but it feels awkward to read, and the way of thinking seems unconventional, making it hard to connect with the story!

This is basically a story about a husband being caught soliciting prostitution, leading to a divorce. Then the husband experiences a meteoric rise to fame and fortune, making a lot of money. The wife, upon learning this, looks at him differently, remembering his words after signing the divorce papers… followed by apologies and even attempts to reconcile?

Author, what were you thinking? Giving the male lead a stain of prostitution right from the start, even if it was a setup, ruins his character. The way he rides the shared bike is pretty good, skirting the line. I suggest starting a new book; I don't think it will work.

It's pretty boring, not a normal online novel, you're totally unconventional.

The protagonist's divorce wasn't without reason. Why did he even fall for you? Wasn't it because you were talented and had a promising future? And then you got married and opened a restaurant. Anyone would feel cheated, right?

Author, it might be a bit difficult for the protagonist to win the most prestigious award at the Oscars. I think the Oscars (in the United States) would rather give the award to a Black person than an Asian person, right?