The Spear of Dou Po Emerges Like a Dragon

If you want to write a good novel, you should use your own thoughts to impress the readers, rather than blindly being led by the readers' preferences. Don't add female characters just because there are LSPs who like harems. If there are middle-schoolers who like dark genres, then change the characters and style. Listening to all opinions will only lead to a different story. As an old bookworm, I really hope that new and excellent authors will emerge.

Why don't you change your character and change it to that kind of egoistic thinking? Seriously, how many people in this society are pure? If you want to be more realistic, stop pretending.

An ordinary person travels to another world and then has an experience card and kills all kinds of people. An ordinary person takes a day to experience the peak of fighting spirit and dares to get the alien fire. Looking at the catalog, it seems that he has encountered Medusa. He really has no brains and is reading a novel. Please give some logic to Saowei and we will not complain.

I've only read three chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist travels across time for no reason, the system comes from nowhere, and the protagonist's background is not explained. Nowadays, there are more and more novels, and there are fewer and fewer that I can read.

The start is very poisonous,,, Shennong is casual

Isn't it just for fun to read fanfic? How would you feel if you don't have a harem?

I can't stand it. This book has too many flaws. You deserve it for not being popular. Even when Shen Nong comes, you can't handle it. A time-traveling fat man kills a lot of people at the beginning. You don't even have the slightest mental or physical reaction to vomit or anything. There is no logic at all. Your mental quality is the same as that of a killer. Also, if you don't have Fen Jue or other fire-attribute skills, you can use Qinglian Earth Heart Fire. To put it bluntly, it's just for Medusa. When you use fire, you actually said that you met Medusa. When you met Medusa, you didn't want to run away, and you still wanted to use the strange fire. How dare you, a fighting spirit? Even if there are anti-inflammatory medicines, they won't be as nonsense as what you wrote. What's more, Medusa didn't kill the protagonist first and then get the fire. Instead, she forced both sides to fight and let the protagonist get the fire. It's too smart. How did Medusa reach the peak of Dou Huang with her IQ? How to be a queen? In the end, when I saw a mere fighting king actually killing the Amethyst Winged Lion King, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I was disgusted by the plot and just wanted to complain about it. I can't even copy the book.

At present, Chapter 16, I have been in seclusion for 5 months to break through the King of Fighting. Even if there is a strange fire, it is too reluctant. There are also skills. I don't know the attributes of the protagonist. You have written too much in the early stage.

Isn't the two-headed fire spirit snake a fighting spirit? How come you have become a fighting emperor here!

The best licking dog in the battle, Xiao Xun'er

What the writing is... It's a mess, and the protagonist's personality changes inexplicably. Then there is the Black Seal City auction. How can the protagonist, a fighting king, be so confident that he can cause trouble among a group of fighting kings? He is really overestimating his abilities.

Invested. Rewarded. All the tickets were given. Can we add more?

Medusa and Yun Yun, Yun Yun has already collected them. All I need is Medusa. I don't want much, just these two. It's not too much. If you still want to add more, feel free. It's not too much. 😍😍

Putting aside everything else, you can't even distinguish between fighting skills and martial arts. How dare you write a book about it?

After five months, I had no fighting spirit at all, and I was promoted to the Five-Star Bean King. I endured it, and then I took the strange fire because I was not an alchemist, so I couldn't use it... It was completely poisonous.

To be honest, I don't know what other people think of me. Anyway, I like it very much. Don't be a eunuch, try to update as much as possible. I'm optimistic about you, Xiao Saonian~😏

Seeing the protagonist take the Qinglian Earth Core Fire is already a bit disgusting (it's understandable, ah, I just took something as soon as I arrived, it doesn't matter, the plane consciousness may compensate Xiao Yan later), but if you want to kill Xiao Yan, you are not afraid that the will of the plane will find you and kill you You also want to kill the Son of the Plane Also, you have taken all the rare treasures from the original book when writing a fan novel. What is your own idea? It would be meaningless to copy all the opportunities from the original work. Give them up.

The Dou Huang is at the peak of his fighting spirit, but he can still be seriously injured by the fighting spirit. I admire you, you really dare to write.