The Magical Journey to Hogwarts

After reading a few chapters, I think it's okay. I really like this relaxed style. Keep up the good work.

As for whether it can be read, this is a readable novel (at least the first few dozen chapters can be read, since that's all I wrote), but I always feel that it lacks a lot of things. If it is a fan novel, in fact, it can be included in a different social background (such as Naruto). If the author were to write a book full-time, I would like to check more information and provide more practical information, instead of covering everything in one go. For example, it is impossible to write nothing about alchemy. Just say that the protagonist has learned it for a long time and then mastered it. Anyway, it feels almost meaningless.

For me who have never seen the movie, I really hate the character of Hermione, but I found that the heroine in many novels is Hermione. Are there no novels in which the heroine is not Hermione? No heroine, no matter the harem. Please recommend

Hermione feels like a drag in this book. She has no help in her career, no help in magical research, and no emotional comfort. She can only see demands and troubles.

My sister, once I met her, I felt like I was reborn for her. Although the writing is good, I still give up the book. I don't like to see a person who pursues power attach too much importance to family ties and give up power for family ties in the process.

Can anyone recommend a more normal Harry Potter fan? The first Harry Potter fan I imagined was a young wizard from a pure-blood family, like Voldemort, forming a small group in the Snake Yard to learn magic and strengthen themselves. After graduation, they can build a floating island or unify the global wizarding world, and finally find the God of Death and become a god.

The younger sister is the kind of spoiled child, and this is because the male protagonist is too much like those parents who "everything is because of others, and their children do wrong, and my child is not wrong."

Sister stock melted out sad.

Obviously, the early writing was about studying magic, but after going to school, it basically turned into daily writing. Various daily and romantic aspects, there are basically not many plots to improve myself. There are a few HP fans who read romance.

I really can't stand the protagonist's morbid, paranoid and disgusting doting on his sister. I'll call it disgusting, because it's so disgusting. It's like living or dying when we go to school separately. It's so depressing, heartbroken, in pain, looking back on the past, etc. I'm tired of it. The protagonist's character is the kind that is born with magic power and can destroy castles without restraint. However, the protagonist is as cowardly as a Xiang. He is cautious and has a life-threatening magic armor. However, he is really aloof and unattractive towards people and things.

I get annoyed when I see Hermione. I'll reward the author who makes Hermione offline at the beginning.

It is said that the soul and mind of a 33-year-old child is no different than that of a child. The author is completely making fun of himself.

Why does the protagonist look so mature at home from childhood to adulthood? As soon as I ran to school, in front of the two women, I felt like I had never seen a woman before.

I read the plot of the third grade and it ends here I don't understand, I really don't understand First of all, I am a Hermione fan, so I came in because of this, um, please forgive me Then, it is mainly the problem of the "sister control" character The reasons why I don't understand are actually mainly divided into two categories: 1. The protagonist, the sister control, is here for no reason, and 2. What is the purpose of advancing the plot? Let's talk about the reason first The protagonist's sister control is very sudden at the beginning. He feels that his sister is the most important part of him, and then he suddenly implements "the most important thing for his sister is to pamper him" Is this very nonsensical? Whether it's because I didn't have a sister in my previous life or I didn't have a girlfriend and I didn't feel for my daughter, these can only be barely explained, but they don't count as reasons. Of course, the author didn't even explain Then there is the plot thrust From what I have seen so far, I personally feel that if we start with frontal and side descriptions to enrich the protagonist's character, it would be enough to expand Hermione's interactions more But no matter what plot happens in the middle, no matter who she is with, there is a lot of text interspersed, to It's really a bit perverted to keep emphasizing that my sister is great and I miss her every day The male protagonist: "I seriously considered and decided that in order not to be separated from my sister, I'd better not go to school." This sentence happened at the beginning of the second grade br>It's almost done, I... Come back, it's the character of the younger sister, which can already be described as terrifying I went to school at the age of 11, but in terms of description of strength, I should be able to brush the professor alone, and then my own good and evil values The concept is very simple: People and things other than my brother are not important I will not hurt anyone who will not be harmed by my brother If I want to cause trouble, I can ask my brother first, the consequences are not important I want to use thunderbolt buns to rob my brother. Face And the above-mentioned style is implemented according to the performance of 5 to 6 years old, and it feels like a "yandere brother control" And a brother with a soul age of 40 rarely has serious values ​​education, and most of the chapters are "Pampering", "feeling distressed", "my sister is so cute" To put it bluntly, my sister's "morality" is not important, just be happy, even if she becomes more powerful, humanoid missiles I am really scared, the future plot, It's because my sister committed a grievous death because of her values, and then the male protagonist angrily challenged the whole world And then just played Lao Deng, Lao Fulaoge In the middle, the entanglement, love and determination of the girls and other bloody plots are interspersed.

Most of the writing is quite good, but the character of the protagonist is too out-of-touch and even a bit insane. It really makes people like me lack the sense of involvement.

I just saw the comment section saying that I have a sister, and I didn't want to read it.

To be honest, the author should switch to a female channel

Abandon the book starting from Chapter 148 If you don't accept it, don't write it It's still so...

I'm speechless, Penello, don't write emotional scenes if you don't accept it. After confessing your love, you refused to give it back to Percy. It's disgusting, isn't it?

If my sister doesn't accept it in the later stage, it will be a huge poison.

Come on, come on, as long as you are a fan of Harry Potter, I will be there

Good guy, I finally saw Mei Kongwen from the starting point again! It's really not easy (it's a pity that the review says it's not orthopedic, but at least it's better than nothing)

Menethil? Child, on the day you were born, your name echoed quietly in the Forbidden Forest: "Bell". Child, I proudly watch you grow up day by day and become the embodiment of justice. You have to remember that we have always ruled this school with wisdom and strength. I also believe that you will use your powerful power carefully. But the real victory is to inspire the fighting spirit of your students and teachers. One day, my life will reach its end, and you will be crowned the principal. 😏

I'm a Lunatic who hates Hermione Granger. Block

It's well written, and it would be even better if it were divided into paragraphs.

With such a strong talent and strong attack power, I didn't even go to the Snake Yard, which suddenly made me feel uncool (●—●)

Why do I feel more hydrated after 250?

If Hermione had this figure

Except for the sci-fi part at the beginning, you can watch it

The magic way is to be an eagle, and I am so disappointed instantly T_T